Originally posted by: radadolcevida
Res 😃 yipiii
Hello beautiful Jas, can I say again I am so sorry for being late and absent?
Awe such a cute start Rada tyt hugs back my Miss gayab 🤗 I responded 2 u that day only but it must have been in nxt pages where i replied 😊 btw felt so happy 2 see u back... Hope u r setled well in new life & routine😊 Look how cute am I looking? I am sure you won't resist to it 😉. I know I can see how you melt to my beautiful eyes
OMG Rada this cracked me 🤣 In lashes se toh pankhe ka bhi kaam liya ja sakta hai if there is no fan😆😆So coming to the update, I read them all paka but I just didn't comment.
Awe its Ok Rada i understand d busy life wid new responsibilities & new city 🤗 but what 2 do i sometime miss d old folks & become senti😆
So the last 3 chapters, it was all around Zoya's character and her encounter with Dilshad (how I love this character and in your story, she is too lovely 😃).
Hehe I m glad i could sketch d characters as such that they r lovable😳
I must confess at the beginning, I was like ok, Dilshad will be the link between them but what I didn't expect is how their relation will go deeper and deeper, to reveal to us different shades of Zoya. And I am glad to be surprised so much.
IKR 😆 Well every1 was saying there is no Asad no Asad but deliberately focused over these 2 ladies cuz i wanted 2 create an emotional connection btw these two b4 taking d story further... & seeing d response i guess i did get suceeded😆
Zoya shared a part of her that I didn't expect to see, she talked about her and I saw her humanity, her weakness, her past and how she became a wonderful woman now.
Here, I can appreciate Zoya more, she was not "just" a capricious actress, she was even more and in this last chapter, I saw her and I felt for her, deeply. Her character was beautiful and if I said something bad about her in previous comment, I am so sorry. I was blind by her action and clueless about her.
No u didn't... trust me😆
Previously, I felt for her because she was rejected but now I felt for her for her past.
At the beginning of the story, I didn't know why she was acting like this, I mean really really spontaneous but now I understand. She is a girl who missed love from her parents and craved for it.
U just hit d jackpot Rada this was d main reason if i would have directly taken Asya story 4ward evry1 must have questioned Zoya being childish but now i m sure ppl r connected wid her seeing d past she faced being straight forward cuz she has seen her loving parents slip out of her hold & if they wouldn't have realised it that day, there relation would have lost...I was doing a buildup u see😆
I was even surprised to know that she was not orphan, I don't think you mention her parents before this last chapter? She was now ready to live her life, to say the word of love before it's too late. This is really respectful. Many will have grown up, rejecting love, but with her, it was the opposite, she chased love. She didn't want to miss a moment without love.
My guru ji knows d depth of my story too well I don't have 2 explain much 2 u 😆😉
Anyway, I could also appreciate how you made her character grow up in one chapter, how she moved from lucky charm to be forgotten by her parent. How she grew up thinking that she wasn't love by them? How she blast on them and how when she grew up, and became enough adult, she knew about her mistake or the biggest misunderstanding.
I guess this is what we called maturity, it's about to learn how to understand nd to accept the answers of our questions, to have enough emotional baggage and enough background to accept our mistake to change them later.
I really loved this part, the way you describe it so easily but it was deep for me, really deep.
Awe & I loved each n every word of ur appreciation Rada 🤗Coming it from u i feel like i achieved something 😳😃
Dilshad in this as parent was the perfect miror of her story and I must say redemption. Zoya talked to her like she wanted or did to her mother. This part was full of love and I just love it. Most of the times, we barely said : I love you mom or dad, but we said them differently, and I found this in her speech. Simple words but a ton and ton of love.
And the last part, my favorite, the moment Zoya froze looking to Asad and Dilshad watched this. That was FAN-TAS-TIC, I mean just wow. I read it 3 times and it puts smile on my face. I could imagine it perfectly. And Dilshad's reaction was priceless. 👏
Hehe I m glad 2 hear u found that worth it...See what happen is when i finish wid writing I sit down & re read it as a reader's POv & become my own critic so that helps a lot i guess😉
And once again, another moment, when Zoya looked at him for the last time, it pinched my heart for her. It was short but emotionnal moment for me, longing to something you can't have, I mean what I can add this moment. It will not praise enough your writting skills in this part. You totally nail it girl.
Awe u amaze me Rada 4 catching such a small scene😳
But strangely, just like Asad, I don't know why Dilshad ignore her son? I mean he didn't do anything wrong, he is just a man. I didn't expect such a reaction, maybe you will light in the coming chapter. And if I understood well, Zoya didn't say anything bad about him, she just said that he didn't share her feeling. Maybe Dilshad felt hurt because he didn't share with her? Or she has something else in her mind?I don't know, It was the only not logic part for me in the chapter.
Well honestly Rada even i didn't thought about that while writing 😳 I just wrote it just like that 😆 but yes now that u pointed it out I will try 2 come up with something which will make sense 😳
Waiting for the next chapter and I don't why but Dilshad will cook something for them 😉. Can't wait to see what you have for us?
Hehe Rada u r getting good at guessing just like how i start guessing after reading stories 😆
Lot of love to you my beautiful friend and lot of hugs. Stay always blessed Jas
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