Thread 2 Asya FF....Mere Humnawah Part 13 updated(15/7/16)

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jas91

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Posted: 9 years ago

#541

Originally posted by: angel_juhi04
Agar story end karna hai to thoda aaraam se karna. Abruptly end karne se story ganda lagta hai I mean sab ulat-pulat jaata hai. Bahot log forum chhod diye isliye kam comments milta hai.

not at all abrupt toh nahi karungi...it's just that if response gets too low i might cut it down that way ki scene's elaborate nahi hon like fast pace main updts😳

& i totally understand & agree what u r saying...

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sweet_tehs

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Posted: 9 years ago

#542

Originally posted by: jas91

awe Tehsu DIl jit lita...give me a tyt huggie🤗
Kitne din baad mile hope u'll b fine... bachon ki chutiyan hain kya u said on other thread that u don't come evryday?
Par chalta hai chutiyan hoti hi saal main ek baar hain bechare bache let them enjoy 2 d fullest😛

now coming 2 d comnt I know d reason yaar but kabhi kabhi i think main drag toh nahi kar rahi jo readers r not likking😆 ab u said this thoda hosla hua

& yes i m aiming now seriously this time ki weekly updts phir se start kar dun 😆 waise is baar main quick thi 2 weeks main updt aaya😳😉

PS- 1 have 3 OS's pending lets see agar FF time pe nahi bhi hua toh bhi weekly PM ayega 4 OS 😉

🤗🤗

Ye lo double tight huggie on request😉😆

Yes I am little inactive..actually no holidays that's why...holidays will start June ending..

Actually school activities every week make something and send..

And next week Ramadan starting so busy with those preparations..

And I know u must be feeling sad but it's ok na yaar..koi to haina jiske read Karna hai.

Uske liye likho..

And yippee...OS bhi milega...

Jaldi update karna ok

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sweet_tehs

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Posted: 9 years ago

#543

Originally posted by: jas91

Tyt hugs back Tehsu🤗❤️

hehe I thought wait ke liye compensation de dun😆

lol yes my genius u were absolutely correct😉
Yeah Dillu mumma se emotional connection hona tha isliye it's her

hehe i know bada senti part ho gya tha isliye thoda lyt kiya 😆 only u noticed

awe koi ni ab aage Asad hi Asad aayega😉

Keep reading...Lots of love🤗

Yes I want more and more Asad now...please..Uska pov...

And I am the great genius😉😆

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muskaan17rocks

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Posted: 9 years ago

#544

Beautiful update

Loved reading it

Especially the amazing bond formed between radil and zoya

It was a treat to read how zoya trusted rashid and dilshad enough to share such a crucial part of her life with them

And then dilshad comes to know that zoya actually is in love with asad

Hopefully we would get to read dilshad as a cupid now for asya

Looking forward to know what happens next in the story

Please try to continue soon😊

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jas91

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Posted: 9 years ago

#545

Originally posted by: muskaan17rocks
Beautiful update
Loved reading it
Especially the amazing bond formed between radil and zoya
It was a treat to read how zoya trusted rashid and dilshad enough to share such a crucial part of her life with them
And then dilshad comes to know that zoya actually is in love with asad
Hopefully we would get to read dilshad as a cupid now for asya
Looking forward to know what happens next in the story
Please try to continue soon😊

Hi Muskaan thanks a lot 4 reading & comnting ...I m happy u enjoyed d part

1 correction it's Only Dilshaad here no Rashid as he's dead so Zoya met only Dilshad😆 thought 2 clear u😳

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jas91

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Posted: 9 years ago

#546

Originally posted by: sweet_tehs

Yes I want more and more Asad now...please..Uska pov...

And I am the great genius😉😆

awe agega ayega apka nahi...hamara Asad bhi ayega dharti ka sina phaad ke ayega🤣

Yes u r our in house genius🤗

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Mayur Chan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#547

Originally posted by: asyafeelz
Also a spot 4 all my lovely readers🤗

Ashi, Aloo, Yumi, Rada, Tehsu, Anu(Annie), Trish, Aish (Aishwarya), Mayur, Depu, Binnu, Shailu, Asif, Nilu, Aju, Anopama,

& every silent reader who left a like on last updt😊

Thank You soo much for the RES... Jas 😳😊

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jas91

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Posted: 9 years ago

#548

Originally posted by: sweet_tehs

🤗🤗

Ye lo double tight huggie on request😉😆

Yes I am little inactive..actually no holidays that's why...holidays will start June ending..

Actually school activities every week make something and send..

And next week Ramadan starting so busy with those preparations..

And I know u must be feeling sad but it's ok na yaar..koi to haina jiske read Karna hai.

Uske liye likho..

And yippee...OS bhi milega...

Jaldi update karna ok

wah wah jhapiyon ki baarish 😃🤗

Bina holidays yeh haal...holidays honge tab toh aana hi nahi hoga lagta hai😆

lol acha Dubai main bhi yahi haal hai poor kids... Pdai dayaan khaye jaat hai🤣 (a modified version of Mehangayi khaye jaat hai😆)

Ramdaan ka toh i know main wohi soch rahi thi start hone wale honge😛

Hmm true that is ... koi ni i won't pull d plug over night 😆

Os 2 ready hain but thing is na title sojhta hai na banner hai so there4 they r resting in my lappy😆😆

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jas91

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Posted: 9 years ago

#549

Originally posted by: MayurChan

Thank You soo much for the RES... Jas 😳😊

OMG maine tera res kiya tha isliye tune apne res donate kar diye ni actually share jyada apt word hai😳😆

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Mayur Chan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#550

Coming to the update now...

First of all a Hello to you ...😊

I read the note at first...and I tell U...that 1st RES for the READERS was nothing related to this...because I was checking the names of the people who liked the last part to add their names in that RES post...but shayad aapke kuch privacy settings ki wajah se hua nhi...isi wajah se I made that post for the Readers...then ab jab yeh starting wala post padha toh pata chala ki yaar yeh toh serious issue hai...so I guess the message is clear and the Readers are listening...😊

And now the story...

Bhai kehna padega...this was a Long , emotionally drained { in a good way } and Well scripted part..👏

Well last update ke end ke hisaab se meko laga tha Asad hoga , par surprisingly Dilshaad nikli yeh toh...well quiet a change...

Saachi bataun...Dilshad and Dost word are the best combination...but unko ek saath sunne ki aadat padhna baki hai abhi...😆😆.., but these scenes here in this update...makes me wonder ki show mein Rashid ki jagah bhi Dilshaad hee honi chaiyeh tha wahan bhi as Zoya's dost...

Zoya shared her past with Dilshaad...not much troubled for a change...I mean problems toh thi par haa...yeh ek real life related problem hai joh yahan aaj ke mahaul mein common hai...and that part were Zoya spoke against her father is a part of the rebellious streak a child develops if he/ she has working parents...I don't know after knowing the truth they are much at fault...but I guess they made mistakes...which they rectified with time I guess...

And now the other and the biggest thing...Dilshaad knows ki Zoya loves Asad aur yeh toh abhi se apne hone waaali bahu ke saath hoogayi Bhai...that is not fair...

Mard ka koi hamdard nhi hota...😆

Interesting and Intriguing part...

Don't think of altering the original plot...please its a request..😳

Continue soonish..😊

Take Care...😃