Thread 2 Asya FF....Mere Humnawah Part 13 updated(15/7/16)

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Aleena

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Posted: 9 years ago

#281

Originally posted by: jas91

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Hi dear welcum 2 d story🤗

I m happy u found & liked my story

Thanks 4 d comnt 😊

4 PMs plz buddy my PM acc. link is given below d updt😳

Kkk,Jas...

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anopama

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Posted: 9 years ago

#282

Aww such a sad update

Can't believe zoya first love is incomplete

Asad refuse her love he rejected her

Can't believe it y would he do tht

She is a movie star for god sake

What does he not think her good enough for him

I don't know Hindi so can't figure it out

So sad for zoya hope she doesn't go into depression

Continue soon

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Aju

@ajuswa19

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Posted: 9 years ago

#283

I WAS SHOCKED JABHI PM DEKHA TOH😲😆

MUMMY JEE B LIKHTE HAIN?😳😆

BOHOOT MAST LIKHTE H AAP TOH😉

SORRY M LATE HOON AAPKA

FUTURE DAMAD BIMAR THA NA🤣

KOI NA JUST 1 WORD WILL JUSTIFY THIS

N THAT IS AWESOME!😳❤️

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jas91

@jas91

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Posted: 9 years ago

#284

Originally posted by: -jerry-
Nice Story

thank u😃

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jas91

@jas91

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Posted: 9 years ago

#285

Originally posted by: --Sumi--
Pehele tere update ke liye zappi lele🤗
Kissi badme😉😆
Amazing update jas👏

Asya meeting cum official date bana diya 😉

Zoya ka dress dekh ke to Allah miya yeah kya 😳😆😉

Chalo ab date

Asad date pe hallway Leke aaya 😲🤣

Mujhe to laga at least boo Kay or ring ya koi ornaments Leke aayega😆😉

Jara to akal hoti Asad me😡

Felt bad for zoya 🥱.

Update soon

Lots of love
Ab le kissi 😳😆

Shukar hai Mera username change kiya and pehchana tune nahi to sabko bolana padh raha hai I changed my username 🤣

Ha jas 20 pages honge words ke to ek update banega

10000 words at least

I am sure sue ne bola hoga chota update hai 😆

Hehe Hugs back🤗

Oye Zoya actress hai why can't wear this😉

& Halwa itni mithi cheez laya tujhe bejaan cheejon ki padi hai😆

I m glad u liked it

Teko teri dp se pehchan liya tha maine lol😆

nahi bola Sue ne 😆

& Bina paisa ke itna hi milega

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jas91

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Posted: 9 years ago

#286

Originally posted by: binuuu

aww...
haha...that was a big surprise 😉
how couldn't I notice gajar halwa...that's my favourite item jash. . 😆
haha dekhungi...update kar jald se...muje dekna h 😛😉
yeah...yeah...finished last Friday 😳

lol same here I too love Gajar ka halwa & Gulab Jamun so daal diya😆😆

Pehle likhne toh de😆

good phir now what's happening chutiyan enjoy😉

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jas91

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Posted: 9 years ago

#287

Originally posted by: MayurChan

Hello Jas..
Welcome Back...as Writer Offcourse...i mean yeh season hee bada ajeeb hai..purane writers aarahe hai...present ke writers quit karr rahe hai...samajh nhi aaraa hai ki " Main royun yaa Hasu.., karu mein kya Karu.."
Khair...coming to the Update...it was very well written and very very good...but can't say worth the wait...aate hee tumne twist de dala...haiinnn...aise chalta hai kya kamskam 2 updates AsYa'cilious rakhti...but jitna bhi likha hai bahut aacha likha hai...

And ab jab Gajar ka season khatam...so Zoya ko gajar ka halwa khilake mera muh lalcha diya tumhe...hahaha..
And then...i mean mujhe Asad se zyada Zoya ka character is story mein pasand aaya...bahut aache se likha hai...par tumne uska hee dil todh diya..
Mujhe lagta hai...Asad ko status insecurity yaa family ka lafda lagta hai...kaha joint family mein bahu ko kaam na karne dein...ya jo kuch...
I really liked this part...
Agle update mein ek dream sequence hee sahi aisa part dedena..

And Hopeful to see Asad sayingg this soonn...

Continue soonish..