Go 2 hell😡
Titir give me a hug girl🤗
there r rare ppl on d forum who write stories which such depth & u r 1 of those buddy😊
Trust me U have excellent talent & more than that u r a great human being
I m so happy 2 have found u here🤗
Inni si umar main yeh haal hai toh only sky is d limit 4 u
Plz I m reqsting u yaar never quit writing cuz u r great talent & potential👍🏼
now coming 2 this 1 I literally have no words u made me speechless
This was a outstandingly Excellent updt 👏👏👏
U deserve all d applause I know I have said this b4 also but not my fault u compel me 2 say this again & again.
So our dear Asya finally met officially & without masks
& what a skilful writing u showed Titir it was seamless from start 2 d end & had me hooked. U wont believe I read every line 2ice as it was an excellent piece.
who kahawat hai na put ke paun palne main dikh jate hain same way I knew when I read ur 1st that u r Superbly talented & that turned out 2 b true & u keep proving me write everytime just like u did in this updt.
What I noticed is this is a different style from ur others cuz it has so much of depth in scenes writing, dialogues, monologues everything
Asya's monologues were excellent & gave clear view of d tug of war as u rightly said btw their mind & heart. Heart want 2 go near while mind pulls them apart.
It was so nice 2 see Asad was so caring & protective of her
& deep down Zoe also have that affection cuz as she gained consciousness Asad's name was on her lips
& than their eyelock, that hidden glances told a lot about there heart's desires infact she couldn't even leave d room b4 seeing him once that's d power of love
It ended where Zoe decided2 stay away while Asad is determined 2 find his answers
btw loved Khushi & Arnav's part as well😊
Like I said in d start exceptional piece of work it was just great job Titir👏👏