ASAD AND ZOYA STORY: A THOUSAND YEARS PART 4 ON PAGE 38

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surbhi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#321

Originally posted by: ashlesha2

kitna spamming karogi di😉
hatth dukhenge😆

lol leg me he injury hath me ni

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ashlesha2

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Posted: 9 years ago

#322

Originally posted by: asya7
do as much spamming as you want but please atleast unress first 😡

A ww

My god di aapko Gussa bhi aata hai?😲

I didn't know😆

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surbhi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#323

Gussa ata he yar being a writer i understand

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Sathya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#324

another awesome update dear 👏

different plot was highlight of this story

please continue soon 🤗

waiting next one and thanks for pm 😃

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anopama

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Posted: 9 years ago

#325

U know everytime I read an update

I am like totally lost don't know confused

Wondering like what is it

Can u just dream ant someone u never met don't know never seen

Can u know their name too and it is such a coincident the names r the same

I am like is the dreams like memories like amnesia

Or memories from a previous life like reincarnation

So he saves her took her for care

When he removed her mask he is shocked and gets flashes of memory

When he is leaving she said his name

So what the hell can it be

Zoya is backing out now she don't want to find this truth out

She is running away from Asad

But Asad is determined he is going to find out

He is keeping his promise

Continue soon

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jas91

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Posted: 9 years ago

#326

Originally posted by: suearmaniac
Gaya pg
happy diwali jas 🤣

Go 2 hell😡

Titir give me a hug girl🤗

there r rare ppl on d forum who write stories which such depth & u r 1 of those buddy😊

Trust me U have excellent talent & more than that u r a great human being

I m so happy 2 have found u here🤗

Inni si umar main yeh haal hai toh only sky is d limit 4 u

Plz I m reqsting u yaar never quit writing cuz u r great talent & potential👍🏼

now coming 2 this 1 I literally have no words u made me speechless

This was a outstandingly Excellent updt 👏👏👏

U deserve all d applause I know I have said this b4 also but not my fault u compel me 2 say this again & again.

So our dear Asya finally met officially & without masks

& what a skilful writing u showed Titir it was seamless from start 2 d end & had me hooked. U wont believe I read every line 2ice as it was an excellent piece.

who kahawat hai na put ke paun palne main dikh jate hain same way I knew when I read ur 1st that u r Superbly talented & that turned out 2 b true & u keep proving me write everytime just like u did in this updt.

What I noticed is this is a different style from ur others cuz it has so much of depth in scenes writing, dialogues, monologues everything

Asya's monologues were excellent & gave clear view of d tug of war as u rightly said btw their mind & heart. Heart want 2 go near while mind pulls them apart.

It was so nice 2 see Asad was so caring & protective of her

& deep down Zoe also have that affection cuz as she gained consciousness Asad's name was on her lips

& than their eyelock, that hidden glances told a lot about there heart's desires infact she couldn't even leave d room b4 seeing him once that's d power of love

It ended where Zoe decided2 stay away while Asad is determined 2 find his answers

btw loved Khushi & Arnav's part as well😊

Like I said in d start exceptional piece of work it was just great job Titir👏👏

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jas91

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Posted: 9 years ago

#327

Originally posted by: suearmaniac
oh poor baby
mai is bar nthng special
fracture hena to rangoli b ni bna payi me

Suri ki bachi jhoti kahin ki

Mujhe toh Fb pe pic dekha ke bol rahi thi tune bnayi rangoli 😲

Cheatercock😡

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surbhi

@suearmaniac

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Posted: 9 years ago

#328

Oye jas ki bachi ye b to dekh ki jo post tune quote kiya wo diwali ke pehle ka tha
tb i wasn't allowed to go downstairs bt chote mote stunt karti rehti hu me to sbke mana karne ke bawjud me niche gai aur rangoli bna di

and cuckoo mai kabhi jhoot ni bolti
healthy jhut to sb bolte he bt ese jhut ni bolti me jisme dusro ki cheez ko apna btau
wo rangoli mene itni mehnat se pta ni kese positions me plaster wala leg manage kar kar ke bnai he
m nthng if nt honest
aur m already in hell
isse bekar koi hell ho to bta dena