Random AsYa Drabble & Poem: No. 5 Pg 42

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Ajuzangel

@Ajuzangel

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Posted: 10 years ago

#281

Wow it was so beautiful

love it

Awesome plot

the poem is out of world

wonder ful poem

keep writing and pming

Fallen in love with your poem

thanks for pm

update soon

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rajsmi

@rajsmi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#282

Nice drabble and poem...Im beginning to understand what a drabble is :-) short but contains a lot

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Prashni Singh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#283

All four were beautiful in their own right. Absolutely endearing!

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sj_qh_kabhi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#284

Wow.. this one was so beautiful. .!
U r an epitome of talent dii..
luv u .:)

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ChocoBerry

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+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#285

Originally posted by: MayurChan
RES..
FOR NIMS & CHOCO.

Thank you Mayur. You are a darling 🤗

Sis, this was truly a treat to read. The way Asad's emotions emitted off every word that he said to Zoya struck deep in my heart. Felt his emotions, so so raw, his pain, fear, longing, his grief, regret, realization of everything he'd been putting her through. It was all so well written.

As for Zoya, can't even imagine the amount of pain she must have been through all the time being pushed away by the only man that she loved. But her final step towards him and then their hug and confession was blissful

Loved it all Sis. Mwah!!!

Love always, your Choco ❤️

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Priya_KABHI

@PriyaKABHI

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Posted: 10 years ago

#286

Thanks for PM.😊

I'm so sorry for late comment.😭

The Poem was so Beautiful,I LOVES IT.😊

The Drabble was also So Lovely.😊

Please write like this on ASYA(KABHI).😊

__________________________________

(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)

PriyaCherry.

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ASYAaishu

@ASYAaishu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#287

that was beautiful ...

his confession was really good...

plz writes more...

and sorry for late comment...

i was running behind exams last week and wanna do 4 assignments in this week..,...poor me..😒..!!!!!!

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Saima Syed

@Saima-Syed

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Posted: 10 years ago

#288

Tired are my eyes
Worn is my soul

Tired is my aching heart
If truth must be told

Life is a journey
A never ending struggle

Love is an illusion
A sweet honey vision

Living life is a necessity
Loving life is a mockery

Don't expect to succeed when it comes to love
It's a shame there is no one to trust

Edited by Saima-Syed - 10 years ago

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Saima Syed

@Saima-Syed

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Posted: 10 years ago

#289

Today I stand
Tired and defeated
Rejected and dejected

Life's long journey through the narrow and darkened paths

With no light and no hope
How will my pain ever be reflected

With no vision
not even a mirage

Who do I shout out to
Who do I call

Barren is the life that holds me
Painful is the life that awaits me

Who ever said freedom is real and a short distance away never stood where I stand today

With every passing hour, every passing breath life becomes a difficult test
Failure is guaranteed for the likes of me

Is there really any reason to see what tomorrow will bring

I think not

Let it be...take control and let life go

Edited by Saima-Syed - 10 years ago