Random AsYa Drabble & Poem: No. 5 Pg 42 - Page 33

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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome .,,Beautifully penned .,,👏👏
Thanks 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
Just read the drabble and poem on Page 11 about the burn scar...beautiful poem!
Love your poems..
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Posted: 9 years ago
The drabble on page 24 was cute! If only it was answered by Zoya's shayaris :-)
The poem was really beautiful! Thank you for these poems, Saima :-)
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Posted: 9 years ago
nice poems..
beautiful concept about love &life..
really touching...
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Originally posted by: Saima-Syed

Tired are my eyes
Worn is my soul

Tired is my aching heart
If truth must be told

Life is a journey
A never ending struggle

Love is an illusion
A sweet honey vision

Living life is a necessity
Loving life is a mockery

Don't expect to succeed when it comes to love
It's a shame there is no one to trust





hey di😃
these words just got me stunned
were they really written in me??
so thoughtful
and perfectly strong👏👍🏼
i just know these lines stirred soimething within me
awesome job
thoda talent mujhe bhi baat do😆
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Originally posted by: Saima-Syed

Today I stand
Tired and defeated
Rejected and dejected

Life's long journey through the narrow and darkened paths

With no light and no hope
How will my pain ever be reflected

With no vision
not even a mirage

Who do I shout out to
Who do I call

Barren is the life that holds me
Painful is the life that awaits me

Who ever said freedom is real and a short distance away never stood where I stand today

With every passing hour, every passing breath life becomes a difficult test
Failure is guaranteed for the likes of me

Is there really any reason to see what tomorrow will bring

I think not

Let it be...take control and let life go



flawlessly written👏👏👏
wise words and rhyming
mujhe bohat zada achhi lagi
i think u have become an inspiration for me
i loved reading this
Edited by suearmaniac - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
hey di😃
i read the poem 4 and the drabble was really emotional but beutifully penned
loved the induced feelings in the poem
its like me bada senti hoke padh ri thi and kuch zada hi character me ghus gai
i loved it
and lub u🤗
catching up dheere dheere

Edited by suearmaniac - 9 years ago
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