AsYa FF : Our Incomplete Love (CH6 : 9/10) - Page 10

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi Afreen
Hope u r fine😊
Meri taraf se bhi maafi qubool karo
Jiske lie decication thi wohi superlate😆
there were some guests in home
But thank u so much 4 dedication it means a lot huggies🤗
coming 2 updt
It was fantastic
So Appi Jiju r no more😲
that was so shocking & bad 4 Zoe...she was so close 2 them😭
happy how Asad relaxed her wid flower ka example
now it's a new beginning I guess😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Brilliant
Amazing
Lovely story!!
Great Start
Plzzz continue ASAP...
Niceooo

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Posted: 10 years ago
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love ur update Afreen !
it was sad; zoya was depressed crying thinking it was her fault.
Nice words asad used to comfort her .Though their love confession was just thoughts but it was lovely .
waiting forward the next chapter! 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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just read intro...
interesting afrin...
gonna read remaining chapters..
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chappy 1
nice start afrin..
asad is showing his cold shoulder towards zoya :(
he should have to give answers to zoya...
hope zoya is fine..
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chappy 2..
yeh asad bhi naa..why don't he admit his feelings...
anyone can tell he is really caring and loving zoya..
but yeh buddhu is not ready to accept it..
hope zoya is okayyy...
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aapi and jeeju are dead 😭
poor zoya..feeling sorry for her.
finally asya confessed...good...
nice chapter..
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Would reply everyone soon <3333
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Chapter 4

Banner by sameera ^^ Thanks maan 👏😳

"Asad Zoya" calls out dilshad.
"Haan Ammi?" Both said together. At the same time. They looked at each other. "Ahem ahem" coughed dilshad teasing them. "Haan Ammi you were saying something right" asked asad.

"Haan woh shehzaad bhai hai Na, unka beta Ka nikaah hai 10th September " "that's a good news!" Said Zoya with a cheerful smile. "Haan Ammi" said asad. "They have invited us, but I can't go kuch kaam hai , you both go Na :") or they would feel bad" "hum dono?" Asked asad looking at Zoya. "Haan Kyu? Any problem?" Asked dilshad. "Nahi Ammi , we would go" he said looking at Zoya. He recalled those mangalpur days. Even Zoya recalled.

Later in their room :

"Don't do the same thing which you did in mangalpur please" said asad.
"I won't mr khan, until someone needs my help" she said teasingly.
"I can't take any risk"
"Then don't take"
"You are my responsibility"
They stared at each other for a moment. "We have to go tomorrow morning itself" said asad , he was exited. This is gonna be the first time I and Zoya would be alone somewhere. He thought with a smirk.
Only we would be there , thought Zoya.

While in dilshad' room :

"They would go tomorrow, we can meet up tomorrow, in fact I have already packed my bag" said dilshad to someone in the phone.


Morning :

"Zoya everything set right?" Asked dilshad. She just want them to leave the house as soon as possible. "Haan Ammi" replied Zoya innocently. "Ammi we are going bye , Allah hafiz and take care" said asad hugging dilshad.

As soon as they leave the house, dilshad too leaves the house.
While in the car, pin drop silence. Both were silent. The journey of 2 hours passed and they didn't even speak a word.

Asad and Zoya enjoyed a lot. Asad was happy that he was with Zoya alone. He had seen Zoya in beautiful kind of dresses. How beautiful she is! He said to himself every time she dressed up and came for the function. They came more closer. The marriage went really good. Every thing was perfect. Within 3 days, the marriage and all the functions were done. Ruksati was done. It was time for them to leave.

As zoya sat in the car to go back , asad got a call. "Bhaijaan Ammi" that were the only 2 words that was spoken. "Najma?" Asked asad? "Hello?" "Hello?" "Are you there?" Asad asked many questions unknowing najma was not hearing.

"Mr khan everything is alright just came down" said Zoya calmly. "Kya calm down ? I'm sure there is something wrong in the house".
"No mr khan. Don't think like that"
He grabbed her. "Can you just shut up?"
"Mr khan"
"What? "
"Leave..mee.."

He pressed his hands even more tighter making Zoya cry. He left her after few seconds. It's my fault. I shouldn't talk to him, thought Zoya.

The journey went the same. No one spoke. Only asad was busy in the mobile. Zoya stared at the window , thinking how got it would have been if she would have gone with her appi and jeeju.

Reaching home :

Asad rang the door bell. No one opened. He rang again. No reply. He pushed the door and realized it was open. "Ammiii!" Shouted asad. He searched full house. "Mr khan!" screamed Zoya with a Letter in her hand. Asad came rushing down to read it.

Dear asad,
I know I'm selfish but , I need to think about my happiness. I'm going back
To my home. To RASHID's house WITH RASHID. I know Zoya would take care of you. Please take care do her. I just want to be with rashid. He needs me at this time. Try to understand. I still love him. Even najma is with me.

Dilshad.

Those words were enough for asad to breakdown. "I still love him" this word ringed in his head many times.

He Ran in tears to his room , he banged the door.

Zoya takes the letter and reads it.

How can phupi do this?
How?

I Never saw mr khan like this.


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Hey guys!
I know I moved out a bit fast.
Sorry for that.

Hope you liked it.
Do comment ^_^
Edited by PizzaHolic. - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey nice update😛
Both enjoyed a lot in the wedding
But Wat happened to dilshad suddenly that she decided to stay with rashid 😕
Feel bad for asad poor fello😭
N zoya too asad ne sara gussa uspe dikhaya😭

Continue soon 😊

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