AsYa FF : Our Incomplete Love (CH6 : 9/10) - Page 14

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Posted: 10 years ago
finally the confession happend!
Awesome update afrin
asad reaction was valid and one thing u really dont need to write those scen u can keep it decent..
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
nicely penned confession
good to see that Tanu isn't there😆
updt soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Good update dear..
Really lovely..
😳
Zoya being Asad's support and their love for each other.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awww he is so hurt
Cute update
He needs her
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Posted: 10 years ago

nice part afrin 😊😃

asad is really broken inside 😭😭

why dilshaad did this 😡😡

asad is really cares for zoya 👏👏

what was last 😉😳

wow...asad confessed 😳👏

continue soon dear 😊😃


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Posted: 10 years ago
Hi Afreen
sorry 4 d lateness this time😳
but girl I m loving how d story is moving
but last main confession thoda sa abrupt lga😳
kahan toh Zoe was saving him from fire aur Asad ne ILU bol diya😲
Khair its good Zoe is their 2 support Asad😃
looking forward 2 how d story will move from here😊 continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Part 6

Zoya's POV

I have no idea what to say. He confessed. He accepted the facts hat he loves me. I heard him say "you love me too Na? " I remained silent. "I know you love me Zoya" tears roll down my eyes. "I do mr khan , more than myself" I said to him softly in his ears. I wiped his tears with hands , I can't see him crying. "No mr khan, you can't cry , you can't be this weak" I said to him wiping his tears. I saw him smiling with tears in his eyes. I could see his dimples. He looks so hot in his smile omg , I smiled. I called out his name softly. This smile looks perfect on you mr khan. I said to him. I don't want him to be like this , I want him to smile and be happy. You can't cry you can't be this weak mr khan, I'm there with you. I said to him looking in his eyes directly. You know what Zoya? I was scared i would hurt you , just like what rashid had did to Ammi. He said. No asad you won't , I said. I won't hurt you Zoya, never , you're the best thing that happened to me. I'm glad you are mine. He said smiling to his ears. He then took my hand and kissed it. I felt heaven. I'm lucky to have you too mr khan , I said . And then I slept on his chest , my head was on his chest , and my hands around him. I felt he was a teddy bear , so soft.We didn't even realize we slept together in the balcony. I was hugging him like a teddy bear full night , I thought. Just then I saw him waking up , I stared at him. He looks so hot when he wakes up omg! I started to fan girl in my mind , blushing. Zoya? He asked. Haan? I replied. Why are you blushing? He asked me with a small smile. Suddenly my happy face went down and I was shocked. Oh sh*t! What should I tell! I thought. Woh mrrr khaaan woh woh actual.. Before I could continue he stopped me in between and said you call me emotionally challenged but actually you are one. And we both started laughing.
Asad have holiday today as it is Sunday. Why don't I do something to make him happy? Let me try. I thought. A dinner would be perfect !

No one's POV

While asad in the washroom, he was washing his face. I would love to take Zoya on a date tonight! I'm free and even she is free. I'm sure she won't reject me. He said to him self.

Zoya's POV

Allah Miyan! What's wrong with mr khan? what if? (And she imagines asad falling down in the washroom and fainting) omg noo! Mr khan! And I ran towards the washroom. What's wrong with me? Mr khan have such a amazing Body and he is a perfect bodybuilder I expect him to fall and faint? Never. I stop in my way itself and decide to make lunch. Breakfast was fine , cause I had ordered it. How am I supposed to make lunch? I don't even know how to make tea! Got an idea! I can make Maggie , I spoke to myself. Before that I need to ask mr khan for a date.

I ran towards his room without knocking I opened the door. I was shocked.

Omg! Asad. 6 packs. OMG. Hayyeee. Mar jawa. Allah Miyan what's wrong with me? Control Zoya.

Asad was without shirt , he was actually searching for his clothes. I saw him turning towards me , I tried running but. Zoya? I heard him ask. Pretending not to hear anything I tried running but. What are you doing here ? I heard him. I turned towards him and Allah Miyan! I screamed. He came rushing towards me. Kya hua? He asked me. 6 packs , I said. No , I mean body! No I mean hot body. I kept blabbering something without thinking. I realized he was staring at me with a great smile. He pulled me towards him self. He made me keep my hands on his chest. His hands were on my waist. I was breathing heavily. I was so close to him. He leaned towards me , he whispered in my ears fangirling haan? He said teasingly. Lost in his world , I replied yes. I felt him pulling more towards him. We were so close. No space were left between us. Asaaad , I said with my eyes closed.

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Full of romance :v
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Such a small update xD next time pakkkaaa big one? 😃
Edited by PizzaHolic. - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi Afreen😃
I saw u updated in noon
I toh thought ab tak kitne log comnt kar chuke honge
but lagta hai mera luck tha ki pehla comnt mera h ho so see here I m😆
So Asya ke confession ke baad both r happy
& r enjoying there new found love😛
both want 2 take other 1 out on dinner I guess nxt part romance filled hoga😉
btw Zoe ko khana bnana nahi aata so she made maggi but who toh ban hai na😆
yeah updt chotu tha but ab tujhe apna promise rakhna hoga nxt time 2 give long 1😉
PS- I love ur seggi it so gorgeous contains my fvrt Jodi...Afreen I want 2 churao it😆...btw r ur exams finished abhi yaad aaya😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
its awsm afrin..
i love it.an emotnal updt.
zoya support asad so swt,i tho8 asad will bhv awkward in mornig or deny everythng bt thnk god all is well.
waiting for thr surprises to each othr & date..
rmnce rmnce rmnce...i lv it.

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