SANITY - An OS series (Readers' request accepted) OS#10 PG100 6/12

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surbhi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#711

Mai humesha bohat bak bak karti huna
bt with ths os
u shut me off
i am speech less genuinely
its so overwhelming for me that sometimes i wonder
how can she write so impactfully! 👏

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surbhi

@suearmaniac

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Posted: 9 years ago

#712

But mai bole bina reh bhi ni sakti *pout*
coz i need u to know what ur writing does to me! U knw kuch cheeze itni beautiful hoti he ki aankhen geeli kar jati he
thats what ths update did! Tears of admiration and goosebump...ye i experienced reading ths!
And tha kya isme! Kuch b to ni. The beauty lies in its simplicity! The way u write!

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surbhi

@suearmaniac

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Posted: 9 years ago

#713

Pta ni yar srashtu
kya mai akeli hu jo ye feel karti hu ki tu jitne efforts lagati he utna response milta ni
kyu hora esa coz teri updates to flawless he
i feel like u deserve sau ke upar likes and comments. Meri icha he me pareshan hoke ek topic khol dungi forum me ki where r asya fans! Kyuki jitne mujhe mile ya milte he
sbko mai pehle idhar invite karti hu
usme se b gine chune aate he
so upsetting
u deserve more

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surbhi

@suearmaniac

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Posted: 9 years ago

#714

Khair update bohat beautifull written thi
har ek line i repeat har ek line se pyar ho gaya he mujhe! Asad ke thoughts zoya ka asad ko reality check dena
asad ka admit karna and requestin her for trust! Uske baad wo simple sa natural sa confession
sab sab EVERYTHNG
DAMN U COVERED IT CLEANLY!
AND this was no doubt cute along with the emotional status
wo zeenat ke hindi me jo dialouge the effectively executed!

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surbhi

@suearmaniac

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Posted: 9 years ago

#715

And what i really admire is ur growing as a writer
like i notice a change in ur updates now! A gud change
like u have tremendously taken over the vocab! And it is magical realism which u create that i am stunned!
Ek zara sa plot aj tk pta ni kitne log likh chuke honge ispe
bt this amazed me to undefinable level
and i really really love the update

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surbhi

@suearmaniac

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Posted: 9 years ago

#716

What a day yar! Aj subah bohh padha saima di ka and raat ko tera os! How different in comparison bt both updates left me in awe and made me cry too
like wesa wala rona nahi acha wala rona 😆
And m really thankful to writers like u who make everythng beautiful and share ur thoughts to make the reader's thoughts to venture!

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surbhi

@suearmaniac

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Posted: 9 years ago

#717

Ab ye wala post mere liye bohat imp he
coz iske sath mai bhi mehrun pari bn rahi hu
and i chose ur thread srashtu ye shubh kaam karne ke liye
kyuki i knw mai bohat spamming karti hu faltu ki ya logo se chat karti hu
bt asal maayne me spamming to mai yaha karti hu
productive spamming! 😆
time to say bye bye to ur lalu laal 😃
and i'll miss the red :v
here i sizzle on the thread of the writer who gave me truly justified reasons that is updates whch deserved my spamming 🤣
akhr mai mehrun pari tk pohach hi gai 🤗