SANITY - An OS series (Readers' request accepted) OS#10 PG100 6/12

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Gulaabo

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Posted: 10 years ago

#461

Originally posted by: binuuu
srash,I have no words to say...
it was amazing...excellent work yaar...
loved it very very very very veryyy much...
sex discrimination...wonderful topic yaar..juhi's topic selection is superb... 😊
wow..asad's family is very understanding...
her in-laws are there for her...
finally she achieved her goal...good...
and she gave her parents proper reply..great...
loved the way you described progression of asya's relation...
at last asya is going to parents..wow...
perfect ending... 😊
eagerly waiting for your coming oses...
update soon

Originally posted by: anopama
aww this was beautiful
he loved her from first sight
and he supported her from the moment he held her hand
loved it

Originally posted by: nilusoni
Awesome os loved it
Thanks for pm

Originally posted by: --Arpita--
Awesome os..
Loved it..
Beautiful..
AsYa.❤️

Thank u all

Glad u liked it

Keep reading

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Gulaabo

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Posted: 10 years ago

#462

Originally posted by: Shubh007
Wasn't One Of Your Good Work Are U Kidding Me...😲

It Was An Amazing OS...😃

Just Love It...😊

Every Scene Was Mind-Blowing...👍🏼

Every Scene Was Beautifully Written...⭐️

Update Next OS Soon...

Originally posted by: suearmaniac
read kar liya par pta ni abhi review kar paun ya ni ! Where is my hanky? Mai hanky kyu mang ri hu find out at my unresed spots
and wo padhne ke baad next comments padhna

Roya mat kar...I write it to make u happy not sad

Originally posted by: suearmaniac
U knw what m doing is nt flattering u
jo dil me aya bak deti hu bas
so ths was so beautiful and magical yet real nd natural
it started as an arranged marriage and maybe didn't or so
he knew she is the one
those eyes of his she has seen frm under the veil again glistened at her when he put forth she shud study
ths was so pure love u showed here and that too with a very common topic of c ppl getting married and love
bt the way ...u wrote ...i cannot stop adoring...

Love reading ur reviews... Always make me smile so much love u for all this appreciation

Originally posted by: -.-Mariam-.-
Lovely..

😊

Originally posted by: suearmaniac
Okiee mai bolti hi jaungi bhavnao me beh ke so let me jst tell u m learning so many thngs frm ur perfect writing though u say ths wasn't one of gud works of urs
i love u sho much ❤️

Seriously u have no need to learn...u r doing a perfect job yourself... I just want u to be my reader always

Originally posted by: -ABI-

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ASYAaishu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#463

that was really awesome...

it was sinmple and pleasing story.

at every portion i felt like read more..

plz cont with more works ,,,..!!!!

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surbhi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#464

I promise i'll be ur reader always 🤗

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Kripa2015

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Posted: 10 years ago

#465

Amazing os
i like it
Asad zoya scenes r awesome
love rashid dilshad and hate raziya gaffu
thanks for pm
Keep it up 😊

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Annie

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Posted: 10 years ago

#466

I love this thread Srash dear...Just caught up with it :) Amazing work you did by opening up this thread :D

Great collection of OS...I'm really loving your writing style :)

This OS was the best you've written so far. I said that maybe because the topic Juhi had chosen was super and since I'm a pakki wali feminist I loved it the most 😆 Thank you for writing this. :)

Waiting for your next OS Srash :)

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surbhi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#467

Yaha koi naya os ki gunjaish he?

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paru

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Posted: 10 years ago

#468

Originally posted by: suearmaniac
Yaha koi naya os ki gunjaish he?

bilkul hai
wait kijiye sahab

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kaju27

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Posted: 10 years ago

#469

i just loved asad in this os...
loved how he kept trying to get zoya's love...
gaziya did only one good thing in zoya's life unknowingly...
special mention to asya suhagrat nd asad's joke abt mirchi...