SANITY - An OS series (Readers' request accepted) OS#10 PG100 6/12

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surbhi

@suearmaniac

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Posted: 10 years ago

#451

Wow! What a growing trust and so much protectiveness
u made it fantastic.he dropped her safely
hahaha i was waiting fr ths ki akhir rishta kab tay hoga
zo was teasing asad and lo! Dilshad dropped the bond 😆
marrying they never thought!

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surbhi

@suearmaniac

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Posted: 10 years ago

#452

Aww their honest heart to heart talk to give them chance was perfect! Couldn't have been better 👏
I read that thrice 😃
and the promise got completed.

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surbhi

@suearmaniac

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Posted: 10 years ago

#453

Nd initially i thought bachpan me hi dilshad ne kese soch liya they were meant to be bt thanks dilshad ka pov dediya and how well described 👏
Now i can't decide ki pancho me se behtar kounsa os tha
i kept thinking ye best tha bt u surprised me everytym as me read karti gai 🤗0

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surbhi

@suearmaniac

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Posted: 10 years ago

#454

The best and pyara scene ek choti si line me laga mujhe

She felt shy which according to her felt ridiculous

JUst wow!
And aroo ko asya ki beti bana diya 😆
now jaldi naya os update kar and recent update ke pehle wala review ka reply ni kiya
ek sath sabke reply karna anivarya hai 🤣
love u mehrun pari mwuaah 🤗 ❤️
ths is a great thread and m happy to be here

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aseela sha

@aseelashah

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Posted: 10 years ago

#455

Wow amazing OS dera

Aaj ke zamane mein bhi eise log hai jo ladki hone ke naathe usse uska hak nahi dete

I am familier with this pain

Purana zamane ka pepper spray its so funny😆

Paru banner is superb dear

Loved every bit of it

Thanks for pm

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Gulaabo

@Gulaabo

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Posted: 10 years ago

#456

Originally posted by: suearmaniac
R
chuk chuk chuk chuk aai stalker
stalker!
Mehroon pari ki update pe 🤣
yaha ke first pg pe lalu lal ka dera he 😉

unres! Starts!
Such topics can be expected from juhi and only juhi 😆
thoughtful 👏
AGAIN ! Awesome banner by meri...no no jiju ki paru 🤣

Hahaha...u ne sach mein kabza kar liya... Banner toh sahi mein bade sundar hain paru k

QUOTE=suearmaniac]I really don't knw where do i start? This os made me nostalgic
and i counted 2 tears slipping down my cheeks. Haha m i going crazy? I mean u gave such a wonderful update and not that emotional bt why m i wiping tears 😆

Aww u cried...

This was the best of this series...liked recreating this

Originally posted by: suearmaniac
Breathing deep i shud say i love u so much mehrun pari 🤗
M FALLING FOR The way u write. And my tears were of mix emotions! And one of them was pride.
I'm so proud of u doesn't matter if u think ths isn't ur gud work
coz i really m lucky to have u as a writer and me being ur reader ❤️
Aww that was like the sweetest thing someone has ever said to me...thanks
And I am glad too...to get u as a reader cum spammer

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Gulaabo

@Gulaabo

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Posted: 10 years ago

#457

Originally posted by: suearmaniac
I knw her former family was meant to be hated
and i do hate them! A lot!
MY JOB DONE

The way u described her feelings formed a very gud connect. Writing on such issue is tough and i thnk u did a great job!

THANKS

On knwing her marriage was fixed and she wanted to study and then she gets a family who helps he graduate! Nothing new! These type of stories always contain the similar thng. But mai batati hu naya kya tha
it was you and your fresh thnking
i appreciate that and the bold parts were good to read.

UMMM...CAN I SAY U PRAISE ME TOO MUCH🤔

Him holding her hand during her ruksati was magical
atleast her bro supported her
then came their night and aww hilarious to read zoya threatened him of lal mirchi [lalu lal ke color ki 🤣]

HAHAHA

and the next day aww i loved it when he said to his ammi that mirchi kam dala kijiye hahah...
And i just loved these lines on their wedding night when zoya slept... That was the line na ki uske friends ne bohat tareeko se potray ki thi ye night...yaha se leke silence do talks tak i had the happy tears. Best para of ths update was ths only

YES I LIKED WRITING IT TOO

then they grew on trust and when she helped him to retrieve file waha bhi jo wise launguage ka prayog kiya he wo bindass laga! 😆

LOL

M bck to my jovial self
Zada der serious ni rehti me 🤣
no more crying ab to happy shappy hoing
kyuki i lv u hua and her parents out of picture yes!
Baby on the way yay!!!

BABY WAS JUHI KA IDEA ...😉

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Gulaabo

@Gulaabo

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Posted: 10 years ago

#458

Originally posted by: suearmaniac
Haha first pg to gaya
sry guys
bt mai hu yaha and i am first! Yayaya
yay!

P.s. Posts continued after few pages KYUKI TUNE ITNA ACHA LIKHA KI RES KARE HUE POSTS BHI KAM PAD GAYE 🤣

Bas bhi ab!

Mereko chane k jhaad pe na chada😆

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Gulaabo

@Gulaabo

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Posted: 10 years ago

#459

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
good..

😊

Originally posted by: urvisaini
Oye hoe!

That was super awesome!

Loved the ending specially

Thanks for the pm
Continue soon

Thanks

Originally posted by: PriyaCherry
Thanks for PM,Dear.😊
It was Awesome OS.😊
ASYA(KABHI) Part was so Cute.😳
Zoya and Asad(KSG) family Part was so Nice.😊
The way they understood Zoya was Amazing.😊
The Whole Part was So Beautifully explained.😊
The Banner was so nice,I likes it.😊
Please write like this on ASYA(KABHI) and Pm to me,I am waiting here.😊
__________________________________
(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)

Thank u so much

Thanks dear😳

Thanks

Tere comment ne dil khush kar diya😳
Obbah!!! 🤗
U described all the scenes that means you paid so much heed

That matters a lot😃

Yes that's the spirit of this os
And all a girl needs is just a bit of support.
Glad u liked it😊