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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Nice update
Again met & their talks were funny & nice. Surbhi was angry & drinking more in anger. Asad hold her on time but she puked on him. Waiting for their story to start. Update soon plz. Thanks for pm


Thank u so much Asif

Will update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ChocoBerry



Thanks Aroo 🤗. Mwah for always remembering all your api's n friends 🤗



Sis, do I have to tell you that I love it. Nah! You know it already 😃


Loved reading it again and waiting for more. Their first interaction 😲 fighting and anger and Asad's dialogue 🤣. Loved the he put her in place. But Zoya's not at fault either. Being a girl I think she reacted like that. Bechaari 😛😉!! OK jokes apart, she did overreact 😳 then they faught . But ab aage aage dekhiye hota hai kya 😉😉



Oh and then the party... The drinking... The nok jhonks. And finally... She puked all over him 😲. Yuck!!!! But definitely very hilarious 🤣.
What did he say, easily fooled are you 😆 n got her vomit in return 😆. Enjoying it thoroughly 😃


Thank you for posting it Sis, love you ❤️



Love you too Choco

Thank u so much am so glad you liked it...thought I would add a funny element to it, am glad it's working lol
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: LoveSonu2408

Omg!asad surbhi again bantering.lk the cuteness in the charity.
Oh god!survi vomit on asad...ha ha!
Waiting 4 nxt.cntinu soon.


Thank you so much 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -.-Mariam-.-

Wow that was lovely update..

AsBhi nok-jhok was lovely..
Continue soon..
Thnx for PM..


Thank you so much Mariam, am so glad you are liking the story

How have you been, it feels like ages since I have spoken to you. Hope all is well with you

Lots of love
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: suearmaniac

awww
their meeting was so good and much more
I loved it saima----
awesome update
khud ka naam story me padhna bada mast lagta he yar 😆


Hey Sue

Thank you for liking it

Really, your name??

😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: jas91

what an updt Sam di

I had a fun time reading this 1😆
D way Asbhi fought oh man
It was so hilarious & not only Asad even Akash didn't listened 2 her tantrums 2 swap seats
upar se threat ka bhi no asar puri bezati ho gayi Surbhi ki🤣
I loved it😃
phir she drink but haalat bigad gayi & Asad saved her nice
I really liked Asad's monologue in d 1st half 😃
It was fantastic & really entertaining part di👏👏
Huggies Love u🤗
Is baar Aloo khud ki cute argue main lag gayi so res nhi kiya😆😆 updt ke after effects hue lagta hai😆


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Thank you so much Jas

Am happy that it made u laugh so much

Hope you have been well, sorry for the lack of replies from me

Love u lots sweetheart
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -Crazy4AsYa-

What a hilarious update

Asad n Surbhi are at constant loggerheads and it's so much fun to read that
Continue soon


Lol, thank you am glad u liked it, especially their arguing
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sasir

Nice..
Interesting...
Loved it...
Their start was on bad note n its continuing...
Waiting for it to change...
Di y I didnt get pm...
Sry... these days I am commenting late coz of my bad health...
Plz pm me


Thank you so much sweetie, hope you are well

Am not sure why you didn't get my PM, I did send it out

Hope you are feeling better

Lots of love
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: asadzoyaqubool

Beautiful update

Surbhi n asad fightin
Asad ws concerned for zoya
Thanks for pm continue soonish


Thank you so much 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Four


Ria and Payal looked at Surbhi unimpressed, as Suhana and Payal went upstairs to help her wash and change Ria met Asad 'I'm so sorry for...umm...let me get you something to change into' she said looking at the state of his clothes. Ria came back with a change of clothes and showed Asad to the guest room, which he used to shower and change himself.

'Thank you...' 'Ria, my name is Ria, I am Suri...I mean Surbhi's younger sister' Asad held his hand out 'I am Asad' 'Asad...oh...the music guy' Asad started laughing 'didn't realise I was so famous'. Ria started laughing too 'trust me...if you are not already you most definitely will be, Suri has not stopped singing your song since she heard it' Asad looked at her surprised 'wow...I thought she didn't like me' 'oh trust me she doesn't...but she still loves your song'. Asad laughed out even louder 'well Ria it was a pleasure meeting you...I hope she will be ok' 'I am sure she will...thank you once again'.
Surbhi woke up feeling like death warmed over 'someone help' she called out in a groggy voice 'Miss Surbhi Saxena, what the hell were you thinking and doing last night' Surbhi looked up to see Suhana standing there in her Hitler avatar 'Suhana...not now please...I only had a few drinks' 'yes a few too many...you know you can't handle more than two sips of anything with alcohol and what did you do...do you even remember what happened last night?'
Surbhi sat up holding her head as she tried to remember 'I think I was going to fire Akash' Suhana threw her hands up in the air 'you know if it wasn't for Asad who took you out of there at the right time your face would have been plastered over every news channel and every newspaper...not only did he help you get out of there but he took all your vomit too' Surbhi shot her head up 'ouch' she said holding the side of it 'what do you mean' 'you vomited all over the poor guy, he helped bring you back home. Surbhi felt her insides twist 'I think I am going to die of embarrassment' 'you would have if he didn't help...now get up and get dressed you have a shoot this afternoon'
Surbhi walked downstairs to meet her mum 'sorry mum...I don't know what happened' 'it's not me you should be apologising to sweetheart...its Asad' Surbhi let out a moan. 'You never told me how good looking he was' Surbhi turned to look at Ria who was doing a funny dance with her eyebrows 'well I...I never noticed...all I see when I look at him is a moron' 'oh come on Suri ...the man is gorgeous...I mean like really drop dead gorgeous...seriously next time you see him check him out' Surbhi picked up the first thing she could find and threw it at her.
Not feeling a hundred percent Surbhi didn't do much around the set, luckily the main scenes being shot were of Aditya and some other actors. Sitting next to Mr Khanna she went over her script, trying to memorise her lines for the next scene 'Surbhi, we have been given a date for the music launch, it will be exactly 4 weeks after the post production part has been completed. Once the music has been launched we can concentrate on the promotion side' 'sounds good to me, are all the songs done, I mean the background score and the title track?' 'Almost, Asad has made a lot of progress since we met him in Delhi. I am hoping to have a sitting with him in a few days' time' 'umm...would you mind if I joined?' Mr Khanna looked at her oddly 'after the last time...I don't think...' 'Please Sir, I know I was a little off that time...promise to behave myself' Mr Khanna laughed at her cuteness 'ok Surbhi, I will let you know and then you can come'.
Surbhi walked into the studio with Zack and Mr Khanna, she sat at the back, almost hiding as she waited for him to come out Mr Khanna, one more song and he will be out' one of the technicians called out, Mr Khanna held up his thumb to say its ok, go ahead.
Surbhi couldn't see him, but she couldn't miss his voice, as soon as the music started playing his voice echoed all around her
Kuch khwaab dekhe hain
Kuch rang soche hain
Ab maine kal apne, tere sang soche hain
Iss raah mein jab bhi,. tu saath hoti hai
Kisson ke panno si har baat hoti hai
Rooh jo huyi meri fida
Toh pal mein uthi koi sada
Ke dil se hua judaa judaa
Toota main iss tara.
Sadka kiya yoon ishq ka
Ke sar jhuka jahan, deedar hua
Tere murdne se suraj murd gaya
Teri roshni ke saaye mein main dhoop si khili
Mera aasman bhi chota pardh gaya
Mujhe jab se hai baahon mein teri panaa mili
Woh thehri teri adaa adaa
Ke ruk bhi gaya mera khuda
Toh mujhpe hai yeh asar hua, toota main iss tarah
Sadka kiya yoon ishq ka
Ke sar jhuka jahan, deedar hua
Teri khushboo mein bheege khat mile
Tere rang ki siyaahi se likhe, pardhe, sune
Teri baaton ke woh saare silsile
Meri dil ki kahani se sune, kahein, bune
Main kar na sakoon bayaan bayaan
Ke chup si hui meri zubaan
Yeh dil mehmaan hua hua, toota main iss tarah
Sadka kiya yoon ishq ka
Ke sar jhuka jahan, deedar hua
Kuch khwaab dekhe hain
Kuch rang soche hain
Ab maine kal apne, tere sang soche hain
Iss raah mein jab bhi, tu saath hoti hai
Kisson ke panno si har baat hoti hai,
Rooh jo huyi meri fida
Toh pal mein uthi koi sada
Ke dil se hua judaa judaa
Toota main iss tarah
Sadka kiya yoon ishq ka
Ke sar jhuka jahan, deddar hua
Surbhi's insides fluttered she felt as if every beat, every word of the song took her deeper and further away into an abyss, a place that filled her with emotions she never knew existed.
Coming outside Asad met with Zack and Mr Khanna who patted him on the back and congratulated him. Asad was about to turn around when he saw her from the corner of his eye. First he thought it was a figment of his imagination and then when he looked he realised it was her sitting there.
Surbhi stood up looking a little nervous, which was totally out of any character for her. As she approached him she looked into his eyes, and for the first time hers didn't reflect any negative emotion 'Hi' she said in a low voice 'hi' Asad said not sure what was going on or even what she was doing here 'I wanted to...umm...the other day, I wanted to say thank you' 'its ok...am glad to see you are ok' Surbhi looked at him, Asad gave her a smile and was about to turn around when she called out to him again 'I'm sorry' not quite believing what he was hearing he turned around to face her 'you are...about what exactly?' 'Throwing up the contents of my stomach all over you' Asad started laughing 'yeah...for that...well next time I see you with a glass in your hand I will know to keep away'. Trying to keep her embarrassment at bay Zoya diverted the topic of conversation 'nice song' 'thanks...umm I have to go...' 'Yeah sure...bye' Surbhi had never felt so awkward in her life, she was struggling to hold a normal conversation with him, the same guy she was ready to punch the daylights out of.
Surbhi walked out of the recording studio, as she did she looked through the glass window to see him standing with Zack, thinking back to what Ria had said she looked at him that much closer, the way his face animated and his eyes sparkled every time he laughed or made a joke was a treat to watch, his tall muscular build, his short brown hair, everything about him started to stand out that much more. Even Surbhi had to admit that Ria was not wrong, Asad was very good looking, the more she looked at him the she saw just how handsome he really was. If she was totally honest she probably hadn't come across anyone who was as good looking as him, he was perfection personified.
Edited by Saima-Syed - 10 years ago

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