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Kabhibloom

@Kabhibloom

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

WONDERFUL N BEAUTIFUL OS.
LOVED IT.
IT WAS VERY PASSIONATE.
THE POWERFUL N PASSIONATE ARI, how much i miss him in the show.
I WONDER WHEN SOMETHING LIKE THIS WILL HAPPEN IN THE SHOW.

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flora212

@flora212

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

Hayeee This was so Dreamy and Romantic Mahuuu!

Perfect gift on the day of SaHil anniversary. Written Gorgeously! 👏 Loved it.

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muskaan17rocks

@muskaan17rocks

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

Seriously perfect gift for the sahil anniversary

the song used is actually one of my favourite songs

it was so beautiful and at the same time so passionate

if only it ever happens in the show but anyways it was worth reading and so beautifully described

loved reading it and looking forward to reading many more from you

do u send pms?

if yes then please send pms to me too😊

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sahil333

@sahil333

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

Excellent piece! 👏

Dark and dreamy...sigh!

Love the ending! Like what you did to Jannat 😆

"He pulled her up and left her standing alone with a high feeling of being intoxicated by his close proximity. He slowly disappeared into the crowd.

Her big brown eyes kept searching for the man, who she thought, had no feelings toward.. How wrong she was..

Jannat was left highly breathless as her head was spinning. She could no longer run form the truth. She only belonged to Him. Only Aahil!"

IF only she could do that in the show...

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NanduVijay

@NanduVijay

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

Super os. Wish Aahil does the same in the serial also. But we know that it is not going to happen. Thanks for such a lovely gift on their anniversary.

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Sumi Roy

@LoveSonu2408

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

the whole piece is so beautiful,lovely...passon...❤️

we hv so many beautiful writers lk u 1000 times better than cv's

do write more & pm me if u cn..

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noesha

@noesha

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

Tell me who you belong to . i dare you..

OMG

Now thats the Ahil I know !

Loved it!❤️

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Rashmi

@Intuitive

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

mahu res!😆

I have read it all and it was simply amazing! Will unres more later!

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mahwash

@Mahu34

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

Thanks Lovelies 🤗 I really appreciate all the wonderful comments! Reading those are the best thing for a writer..

"Sholon Si" is my all time favorite song. So touched that you guys loved it. ❤️