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Posted: 10 years ago
#11
Wow Mahu! Too hot! Loved it! The show makers don't know how to capitalise on the potential here! They just show nonsense and loose their chance! They could do a scene like this quote easily but they don't! The dress zipping scene was good at the party though!
Loved it!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#12
beautiful piece.

Oh, how much do I want to see this on the show. Jannat is getting away with her shenanigans because no one is cutting her down to size. If Aahil just stepped up and became all masterful like this . . . that would be such a treat to watch. Thanks for this beautiful story, and giving to us in this OS what the CVs and their professional writers can't seem to do even if all the fans drew them a map. 🤗

Seriously loved the passion . . . how she knew it was him because of how his body felt against hers . . . .how he wouldn't let her go and made her admit that she was his. Brilliant. And a masterful Aahil is utterly sexy. ☺️
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13
What a wonderful, hot and passionate piece! Very well written mahu! 👏
The writers of QH are garbage. They need to hire talented, creative people like you.
Ahh how I wish Aahil would do something like this, and Jannat would actually listen to her heart. 😕
But she will probably continue being an airhead

Anyways, thank you for giving us SaHilians this wonderful piece on SaHil anniversary! 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
#14
You guys are making me fill with so much love! Thank you once again for the awesome response! I really appreciate every single comment. Too bad, that we won't see any scenarios like these on the show. I agree Mandy, they are seriously wasting the potential SaHil could create. Oh, how they would burn the screen ☺️

Thanks for once again, Lovelies! :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Did I just die, or did I just die?! 😆
This piece is brilliant on so many levels! 😆 I mean, if you know what I mean?! This is just unbelievably breathtaking! No, trust me! Your One shots make me fangirl like I never do, and when I write about them, I am so hyper and excited I write almost everything and want to write almost everything that I am feeling at that particular moment. Am I making sense even?! 😆

This was truly a dream! Really it was almost heavenly! When she was in his arms and how he pulled her in his arms. THAT particular moment, and everything after that - was a ride. A ride, to somewhere so heavenly. It really just "took me away" if that is even possible. I mean it was like there is JUST THE TWO OF THEM right then and there. And a narration of their story was going on in the BG. It was magical. I couldn't explain what I felt. Till it ended, I realised why?! Why it ended, and why it even started?! Are you getting?! 😆

There was a frustrating, cringing feeling along with all the mushy feels. Their dance was so short! 😭😆 So that made me think - why it ended, and at the same time, why it even started?! Ugh! 😆

Okay, anyway, sorry for going overboard. I do sound like a maniac alright 😆😆

The best part?! I think you already know. You don't?! I know you do. still! 😛😆

When he asked daring her to tell him whom does she belong to? OH GOD. And her reply?! I had serious doubts, was she even in her senses?! Did she feel the earth beneath her?! I am sure she felt like floating that time. And ofcourse for the "obvious feelings" she must be going through right then.😉😆 I am glad she was atleast able to utter "you" ☺️ HOW SEXY WAS THAT?! Gahh!!

Taking a deep breath here now. 😆 This is just perfect. And the banner!? So mystical! I am in love with your writing and words!! ❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16
@Junoon-e-SaHil: OMG!!! 😆 Would you believe if I told you that even I thought it was short..but I wanted to keep it short and full of hidden passion along the lines. Thank you so much, Prags! Your comments always leave me in a heavy daze. i cannot thank you enough of the heartfelt feedback ❤️
Yeah, I so know your favorite part. No need to say it 😆 She will always belong to Him. He will keep testing her limits and make her say what's really hidden in her heart.
Once again, Prags! You're one of the most wonderful people ever! I mean it. Thank you so much for taking out time to read this piece. Means so much to me. ❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17
Oh my my my
That was something
Amazing
Lovely
Ouh la la

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