#3 Asya ff unique love part 24-27 *thread links in the index @ pg 1

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@kabhi_asya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#671

Awesome chapter...interesting

Great turn of events...

Like it...

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sweet_tehs

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Posted: 10 years ago

#672

A special hug to u🤗

For this wonderful update n with Gary's chapter ending...

I'm glad all this was done with Asad's brilliant planning...

His email was awesome.

With this chapter I feel even the story is nearing its end..

Is that so?

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Naina Asghar

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Posted: 10 years ago

#673

Sorry sue I didn't unres because I am going out of town for a week so most probably won't be available to spam, hope I get internet connection then I can make it.

I have read ur update and I loved it but unress free ho ker karoon gi.

And I forgot one thing. ( touching ur feet) guru gi aashirwaad...😆

Mujhay pata hai ab maar parday gi mujhay tu mein tu chaali, c yaa, wish me a safe journey, bye everybody...

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Naina Asghar

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Posted: 10 years ago

#674

Sue yaar ek aur kaam hai abhi simmi goldie ho gai gi uss ko meri taraf se congrats coz I won't be here

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Asif

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Posted: 10 years ago

#675

What an update dear, it was wonderful
Asad & Gary fight & he got to know truth. The way Gary talked abt zoya, was enough for him to beat him badly. Even in trouble time, he saved Gary & his bodyguards life. They will be punish according to law. He is coming back & that relieved zoya & family. Update soon plz. Thanks for pm
Hope u r feeling better now

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Binzzz

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Posted: 10 years ago

#676

Originally posted by: suearmaniac

thanku binshi😃
be proud of him😉 nd meeh😆
haan aajayega soonish

haha.. you are the reason why asad saved Gary...
so proud of you too madam 🤣

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--Sumi--

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Posted: 10 years ago

#677

Edited by azsumay - 10 years ago

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Mayur Chan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#678

Hey Sue😃

Thanx for the RES*😊

Update was well writeen👏 , High on Emotions and Actions as well and also was close to realty also⭐️👏

Asad ko kafi pitvaya yaar tumne...khair aacha kiya uss GARY😡 maara nahi😡🤢

itni jaldi par koi tension mat laana uske case se ab😕

Zoya ka pura part emotional tha and was presented in a good manner...but ek baat hai subah ko kisi ko marte hue dekhle yaa mara hua dekhle kehte hai uski umr badh jaati hai😛

Zoya itni tension main bhi boss waali attitude chodti nhi haaan😆

Enjoyed reading this part😊

Waiting for the next pat eagerly...😳

CONTINUE SOONISHHH😃

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paru

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Posted: 10 years ago

#679

hi sue

awesome chapter yaar

i really loved it

finally asad ko pata chal gaya zoya ka rape nahi hua tha

garry ka game over ho gaya

fight scene is awesome

i m proud of u asad

ab sab kuch theek hoga

waiting for next chapter

update soon...

Edited by enthusiastic - 10 years ago

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MINI

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Posted: 10 years ago

#680

hello
yayy an update
and wat an awesome job sue👏
the action sequence was well penned
i actually enjoyed it
asad ne bhi mar khai that was good nahi to villian powerful nahi lagta
and gary was no doubt a coward person
thank god faasi ho jayegi
saari problems tal gayi
and asad ki to daad deni padegi
he didn't killed gary neither did he left him to die
khud pain me hokar jaan bachai
but ultimately gary has to die
very well written part with logic
and it was natural👏👏👏👏
waiting for asad to come home
and sangeet😃