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flora212

@flora212

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Posted: 10 years ago

Mahu 😲😲 I Hate You! 😡😡 What was that! 🥱😭 This show has turn into something nasty and you are making me cry at this time! 😭😆 Well you know I want to tell you something I actually imagined something almost similar yesterday in my mind except Talaq part ! And I am actually shocked to see it penned down by a writer😆

Okay This was really mind blowing! I had tears! Brilliant piece of writing! But to be honest I seriously don't like Divorce in such situation I mean Sanam is having memory loss and this was quite Rude from Aahil at that moment. And I don't really like Divorce just my personal opinion. But you did a great Job! Amazing. I am waiting for the other OS 😉😳 Keep writing more. Stories are always welcome!

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Ihopelove

@Ihopelove

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Posted: 10 years ago

Just loved it.

I always think why don't anyone write something like this in their stories.

Oh I hate current track so much and jannat always taunting ahil.

Thank you for writing this.

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Tunailuvsahil

@Tunailuvsahil

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Posted: 10 years ago

I really only didn't like this talq part but loved the hole story truly

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mahwash

@Mahu34

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: flora212
Mahu 😲😲 I Hate You! 😡😡 What was that! 🥱😭 This show has turn into something nasty and you are making me cry at this time! 😭😆 Well you know I want to tell you something I actually imagined something almost similar yesterday in my mind except Talaq part ! And I am actually shocked to see it penned down by a writer😆
Okay This was really mind blowing! I had tears! Brilliant piece of writing! But to be honest I seriously don't like Divorce in such situation I mean Sanam is having memory loss and this was quite Rude from Aahil at that moment. And I don't really like Divorce just my personal opinion. But you did a great Job! Amazing. I am waiting for the other OS 😉😳 Keep writing more. Stories are always welcome!

Nafs.. Trust me, I was such in a dilemma when I was writing this. Even I hated the part.. You wouldn't believe if I told you I was stuck on it for 3 hours! But you know, I think I'll edit it because I did not feel comfortable either in showing that. But glad you liked it anyway. Thanks, Nafs.. 🤗 You're seriously a cute for liking the small piece.

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Sumi Roy

@LoveSonu2408

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Posted: 10 years ago

its jst ...mindblowing.

u made me cry😭.heartbreaking to see ahil like this💔,to see him all time accused by jannat.

i wish ahil do something lk tht & at a point sanam get to knw everything & redeempting her mistakes..,

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Kabhibloom

@Kabhibloom

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

Wonderful os.
Loved it except the divorce part.
U made me emotional

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flora212

@flora212

Stunner

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: mahwash22

Nafs.. Trust me, I was such in a dilemma when I was writing this. Even I hated the part.. You wouldn't believe if I told you I was stuck on it for 3 hours! But you know, I think I'll edit it because I did not feel comfortable either in showing that. But glad you liked it anyway. Thanks, Nafs.. 🤗 You're seriously a cute for liking the small piece.

Eerm what should I say! I guess Thanks for editing that part😆 I was having bad taste inside me reading that word😆 Now its looking perfect! I love it now😳

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notacrimetolove

@notacrimetolove

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

Okay I've just read this and it's making me emotional and I feel like crying. That last line "You are free, Sanam." Aahil whispered in the now empty Mansion with slumped shoulders. "You are free." makes me want to cry. You can literally feel Aahil's pain and hurt at how this is the way their love story will end. With his Sanam gone and him alone and broken as he's always been 😭

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mahwash

@Mahu34

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Maria_Shaukat_9
Okay I've just read this and it's making me emotional and I feel like crying. That last line "You are free, Sanam." Aahil whispered in the now empty Mansion with slumped shoulders. "You are free." makes me want to cry. You can literally feel Aahil's pain and hurt at how this is the way their love story will end. With his Sanam gone and him alone and broken as he's always been 😭

Thank you. Honestly, I don't even know why I posted this. I feel like I actually want to just delete the post. It's way too depressing...

But thank you so much for reading.

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Pragya

@Ms.Sherlocked

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

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Hawww!!! 😲😲 This is an edited version!😲 I want the unedited one! 😆

What's in that?! I read its the "divorce?" 😲😲 Okay then, I am glad I din't read it! 😛😆

Lol. Mahhuu! I am so sorry for not telling my actual feelings...😆😆 Just like Jannat is these days..and she is not even feeling sorry! 😡😆

Never mind 😆

I am crazy right!? That was such a heartbreaking piece, I couldn't just..

It was so short but I felt like my heart would burst an minute! Legit! Trust me! When he was taking her outside, I almost had an adrenaline rush inside too..It was a blood boiling feeling when he was saying those words to her..

Like she NEEDED to hear these from HIM! She just NEEDED to! Oh god Aahil! I could almost see his those bloodshot pained and teary eyes...damn! He looks YUM but! 😛😆

Your stories are such strong on emotions ones, those are just so very heavy on emotions, I can't help but right on and on about it..specially the one shots! They just have something..so powerful!

They end at such a point, you wish it wouldn't have ended with the simultaneous thought of this couldn't have been ended better..you getting?!

I LOVE YOUR ONE SHOTS! ❤️