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KN94

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Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Amazng os beautiful plz write more

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notacrimetolove

@notacrimetolove

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: mahwash22

Thank you. Honestly, I don't even know why I posted this. I feel like I actually want to just delete the post. It's way too depressing...

But thank you so much for reading.

Sometimes depressing is good. It's sad but I feel like right now a lot of us are feeling this way.

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mahwash

@Mahu34

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Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: Junoon-e-SaHil
Hawww!!! 😲😲 This is an edited version!😲 I want the unedited one! 😆
What's in that?! I read its the "divorce?" 😲😲 Okay then, I am glad I din't read it! 😛😆

Lol. Mahhuu! I am so sorry for not telling my actual feelings...😆😆 Just like Jannat is these days..and she is not even feeling sorry! 😡😆

Never mind 😆

I am crazy right!? That was such a heartbreaking piece, I couldn't just..

It was so short but I felt like my heart would burst an minute! Legit! Trust me! When he was taking her outside, I almost had an adrenaline rush inside too..It was a blood boiling feeling when he was saying those words to her..

Like she NEEDED to hear these from HIM! She just NEEDED to! Oh god Aahil! I could almost see his those bloodshot pained and teary eyes...damn! He looks YUM but! 😛😆

Your stories are such strong on emotions ones, those are just so very heavy on emotions, I can't help but right on and on about it..specially the one shots! They just have something..so powerful!
They end at such a point, you wish it wouldn't have ended with the simultaneous thought of this couldn't have been ended better..you getting?!

I LOVE YOUR ONE SHOTS! ❤️

Is it bad if I actually regret posting the story at the first place? *Hides face*

I don't know why... It's just way too depressing.. I guess I didn't realize it when I was actually writing it, but I figured it out the very minute I had already clicked the button. You get me? I want people to smile and focus on what's positive rather than the ongoing track. I wanted her to realize who she was and wanted Aahil to take charge.. I guess I didn't get the proper idea on how to portray what I actually wanted to show.. I knew I shouldn't had written this.. Omg! I sound weird. Ignore it..

But Prags, thank you so much for appreciating about including emotions. You already know I have a thing toward that. I guess I can't help to include feelings into the stories I write. It's an old habit.

Actually reading your post did made me cheer up. Especially the last bit! Hugs to you!!!!

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fanraya

@fanraya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Lovely, I do not want this to happen, but yes looking at current track you feel that this should happen, We have lost our Sahil long time ago.. Beautiful writing.. love it..

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darkice7_12

@darkice7_12

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Posted: 10 years ago

#15

That was the heart-wrenching. For Aahil, not Jannat. It seems like she still doesn't get it. Loved it. Thanks! 🤗

What would have made him give up so completely? Can't u do a part II with her realization and the right reaction from her?

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