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ChocoBerry

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Posted: 10 years ago

#51

Welcome back choti Bajijaan 🤗

You were missed 😭. But am happy to see a new story from you and am definitely interested in it. Want to see regular PMS in my inbox from you 😳

About the prologue, sit looks interesting with Asad being the spoilt one and Zoya the oh so sweet and understanding one. Though I can guess where this will be going, but want to read what you can do to this excellent concept.

Lovely read, please do update quickly 😊

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Sumi Roy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#52

Nice start.lving it.
Lets see wht twist gonna cm?asad seem a bit u knw...
Cntinu soon

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Miss-Appy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty
Go Back to sleep ankie. Tu sapna dekh rahi hai.

Waaakkke up ! 😆 sapna nahi hai ! 😆

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Miss-Appy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: Sanjhari
Congrats on new story.
I loved the story.
Asad is behaving differently.
I find him mysterious...
It remind of a serial of ashish chaudhary
Play do continue not update soon...

Thanks Sweetie ! 😳
I'm glad you liked it ! 😃
Lol i dont know what serial u r talking about 😆
Will update ASAP 😛

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Miss-Appy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: Kabhibloom
Interesting prologue.
Continue soon

Thabks 😳

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Miss-Appy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: nilusoni
awesome start
asad is making me curious
asya talk is amazing
i think there is some twist and mystery
excited for next part
thanx for pm
plz pm me for next part
continue soon

Thanks 😳
Yep here Asad is not the typical hero i usually portray 😊
Will update ASAP 😉

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Miss-Appy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: pumpkin.honey
Wonderful chapter.. Didn't seem like a prologue though ;)
So zo n asad in d beginning itself. I like Asad teasing n all.. Something different
But Asad's persona is giving some doubts.. Don't know y
Anyways u r scaring me vid Not a Happy Story.. Js make sure it don't have a sad ending or something plz.. Else would be fine

THanks 😳
Lol i know it was too long 😆 but i wanted to iktroduce all the characters + the concept i had in mind 😳
Happy ending only 😉

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surbhi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#58

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Miss-Appy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: MayurChan
Salaam Bano..
Well a Very bery Welcome back to the forum again...
So a new story which at its start only is regarded as SAD"..why..?
And coming to the update...it was an interesting start..a well written part..
But Iam having mixed thoughts about it..
Don't know about that...but I will just follow U..and your vision behind this story..
Continue soonish..

Walekum Salaam ! 😃
Thanks a lot yaar ! 🤗
Sad because the concept and the strugglevin this story will break some hearts 🥺
I know everybody is confused about Asad and the plot 😉
Thank you for trusting me ! ❤️

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Miss-Appy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#60

Originally posted by: binuuu
nice start...
loved it...
an arrange marriage is going to held...
zoya is comfortable with asad...very nice..
some thing wrong behind asad's behaviour..
what's it?? waiting to know..
continue soon...

Thank you so much Binuu ! 🤗
But well u'll have to wait to read what i have in mind 😉