ASYA SS:I Forget You Not#2, chp 24 up (05/03/2016),pg 114 (Complete)

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Saima Syed

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Posted: 9 years ago

#581

A beautiful update Choco, had all the right elements.

i loved the song, it was so apt to describe the emotions they were going through

am so sorry for the short response will give longer feedback next time.

love you lots

Edited by Saima-Syed - 9 years ago

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sweet_tehs

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Posted: 9 years ago

#582

Res

Unres

Wonderfully written part Choco..

Loved their conversation their accusations their insecurities everything...

Everything was so beautiful, so pure, so full of compassion and love...

Amazing...

Looking forward to the next part...

Is this story coming towards the end?

Edited by sweet_tehs - 9 years ago

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sweet_tehs

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Posted: 9 years ago

#583

Aapi ashii you both online?

Koi free?

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Shama_zz

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Posted: 9 years ago

#584

res

unres

beautiful chapter aapi

soo happy for asya n kiss😳

continue soon aapi😃

Edited by Missadorable - 9 years ago

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sweet_tehs

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Posted: 9 years ago

#585

Oye Shamoo

U also online😊

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surbhi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#586

Yay
unres

choco 🤗
OH how beautiful u wrote the beginning part of asad
talking always helps and wowie ka zowie sb kuch thk hogaya
and finally asya ek sath
i love the way u potrayed them apologising
then after a hurricane it always comes a rainbow
asya together are adorable
asad took her to place they've been and its so gud how wonderful u describe every scene
kiss haye u again nailed it
always i find varying style the way u make them kiss
and i love the update
continue!

Edited by suearmaniac - 9 years ago

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Shama_zz

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Posted: 9 years ago

#587

Originally posted by: sweet_tehs
Oye Shamoo
U also online😊

yup aapi[8)]aap kaha ho??

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sweet_tehs

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Posted: 9 years ago

#588

Originally posted by: Missadorable
yup aapi[8)]aap kaha ho??

Main yaha hoon yaha hoon yahan.

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Shama_zz

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Posted: 9 years ago

#589

Originally posted by: sweet_tehs

Main yaha hoon yaha hoon yahan.

Luka Chuppi bahut huyi saamne aa ja naaKahan kahan dhoondha tujhe thak gayi hai ab teri behana

Edited by Missadorable - 9 years ago

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fatima30

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Posted: 9 years ago

#590

Beautiful update...
So happy all is okay with our Asya
Asad thinking about what Zoya must have gone through all those years ago was just perfect

Awhhh and that kiss...oh so sweet and loving...

Thank you for the PM