ASYA SS:I Forget You Not#2, chp 24 up (05/03/2016),pg 114 (Complete) - Page 12

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ChocoBerry

Ress for me.. PM nahi mila mujhe

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Berry.. 🤗Hope you are masth and doing well.. 😃 Absolutely masth yes! N hope uni not killing you my sweetheart 😃

Uni tho chalta hi rehta hain Berry.. rukta hi nahi.. 😕

Ab main kya boloon.. Aapko pata tho hain... Lekin phir se bolna pasand hai..😆

It was AWESOME..👏 Itna bhi nahi tha, but since you're saying I will accept all the praise 😳

Itna tha.. Bilkul tha.. 😃 You should accept the praise.. ⭐️

You ace at whatever you do.. Be it depicting all the emotions our Zoya has been through.. Or showing an eager and determined Asad ready to win back his love,.⭐️. Aww now me all shy shy 😳 sharam aa gai mujhe ☺️

😆 Par sachi Berry.. There are few ppl whose works I just love reading and YOU are one of them.. Otherwise I wouldn't even be on this forum.. Sirf yeh stories sab hain which make me come back here day after day..

In all the eagerness of Asad making plans for Zoya, I totally forgot her.. Zoya was so sad and crying for long now.. She should really listen to her heart and not just take some decisions in haste.. She will sooner or later 😉

Woh sooner jaldi aajaye bas.. 😆 Zoya.. Zoya.. Its time now.. 😆

SHe looked so broken and upset.. Upset with the way life was playing with her.. Broken because the love of her life was there ready to welcome her into his life but she thinks its wrong.. Wrong to leave her Ammi alone at this age.. Exactly. She has a lot to look after and consider before she makes a final decision.

I know I keep saying ki Zoya jaldi maan jaaye.. But I respect her for being with her mother and not abandoning her.. She could easily have said yes to Asad.. But she held back.. That just shows how much she loves and respects her Ammi..

Even Benazeer noticed her state and tried to talk with her.. I feel bad for Zoya.. She cried and cried herself to sleep.. I wish that she would just listen to Asad for once.. And share her fears with him.. She will and may be shocked with his reaction to it all

Dilshad pondered over Asad and how he was when Zoya just disappeared from his life.. It must have hurt her to see her son suffering so much.. But finally all is gonna end well..

Shuru hua Operation Wooing Zoya Farooqui.. That was Shipra's planning huh?? She is just adorable.. 😳 lol yea! And I really really hope it comes out like I have envisioned 😊 gadbad naa ho jaaye 😛

Now I am even more excited.. Kuch zaroor dhamakedaar lagta hain.. 😃

Haha.. Mr.Kapoor and his You and Asad should be together.. 😳😳. Lol I laughed writing it too. Glad you liked the line 😆

👍🏼

Asad is voicing his feelings openly in front of her now.. Zoya maan bhi jaao..

Write soon Berry.. Can't wait.. Writing already, but slowly slowly 😛

Waiting!
Love you loads!! ❤️. I love you too sweetheart innnaaa saaaraaa 🤗

Mwah back at you! 🤗

PS: I have been meaning to ask but forgot.. What exactly did happen with Zoya's Abbu? I am still not clear.. Or is it that you mentioned and somehow I missed it.. That then would be terrible.. 🤢

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Posted: 10 years ago


No you haven't missed anything, I haven't mentioned what exactly happened to her Abbu. And now that there is so much expectation everyone has from it, I really don't know what to write on that 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ChocoBerry



No you haven't missed anything, I haven't mentioned what exactly happened to her Abbu. And now that there is so much expectation everyone has from it, I really don't know what to write on that 😛


Thank goodness.. I was wondering if I missed it.. 😛 Well yes I really wanna know what exactly happened to him.. And hearing you it looks like a big suspense..😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
Apiya...🤗
Sorry for not unressing wherever I ressed before😕 toh forgot all those and read this one...😳
It's awesome. .I red last three parts and was so happy with the storyline...finally isn't letting her go and now shipra n Mr.Kapoor are helping him...wow so good...zoya got so many peoples who loves her a lot
M so so liking the story...n so so sorry for reading n commenting before...you know mai to abi bachi hn or bhulakar bhe😳😆
Continue soon⭐️

P.s I ressed for you at badi api's update ...😛

P.p.s love yaaa🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awsm one
Superb part.
Luvd it
Cont asap
Thnx for d pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
Beautiful update Di... Congratulations for new thread... Sorry for small comments busy with Ramadan
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago


I know you're sick and tired of me commenting late always and then apologizing for it...

And here I am doing the same thing again.. Shameless much!

Sorry!!!!!


😳


But you do understand how life acts like a bit*ch! 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Yayy!

So happy for you...


A New thread for this story! ⭐️


Very well deserved! 👏

Congratulations!


A new thread only means that I get to read a lottt more of your amazing work! And that makes me extremely happy! *Dances with hands in the air*



Can't wait to read how you're going to take the story ahead... All the woo-ing Mr. AAK does to get his love, Zoya back!

Yayy!


Thank you, Choco Darling!🤗
- an excited reader but lazy and always late in giving feedback.


❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago



It is extremely sad to read what Zoya's going through... how she is feeling torn by life... how life has put before her her life, Asad but then there is also her mother she needs to be with at this point of her Ammi's life.

It is amazing how Zoya is still controlling her feelings for Asad and not leaving her mother's side.

It really is sad that even her mother, Benazeer cannot seem to help her child out of this turmoil of emotions she is going through.. at how Zoya feels so broken and upset.
How even after trying she can't stop thinking about Asad.. how heartbroken he looked ... how he too sounded so wounded and vulnerable.

Dilshad as a mother is pure bliss! How she understood just what her son was going through. and how she is so happy for him at this point.


'Operation Wooing Zoya Farooqui'

Perfectoo! 😆


Aah .. how she feels when she enters the elevator.. remembering her last encounter with Asad.. these little things are just going to make her succumb, plus Asad wooing her. 😳

"Yes! I want you and Asad to be together".

Hahahah.. Sach, lakh chupao chupta nahi! 😆

She looked at him almost scowling but her heart fluttered seeing him giggle like a school boy.


Aww.. my poor ASYA!


It was so nice tht Zoya has genuine people in her life, like Mr. Kapoor and Shipra, who care for her. 😳

"You are absolutely adorable. Where will you run off to? There's no way you can escape me now Zoya I will not let that happen this time. My Allah has brought you back into my life and am sure he too wants what I want. Now only you need to understand and accept his doing".

❤️

Make Asad work on his mission quickly please.. Can't wait to read more,. In love with hoe the story is progressing.

Continue super soon . please.

Love you so much.
~Lazy reader.

P.S: I am amazed how you are so perfect with depicting emotions so correctly. So articulate with each emotion and just how wonderfully you pen it all down.

Giving me classes? Please!


P.P.S: Waise .. full energy ke saath I sat down to type my feedback.. full on verbal vomit honi thi... lekin then you'll just ban me from commenting. uske liye.. going away now.

Tata! 🤪

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