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Ashii

@AkaiBara

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Posted: 9 years ago

#341

Originally posted by: kadia717
wow..
Really nice Update
lv reading it
5nlly happy ending
congrets

thank you so much dear 😊

i'm glad u like it

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Ashii

@AkaiBara

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Posted: 9 years ago

#342

Originally posted by: jaanu013
Nice chapter

last chapter of the story...it was lovely..
asya was born..hospital moments were cute..
surely will miss this story..

thank you so much dear 😊

i'm glad u like it

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Ashii

@AkaiBara

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#343

Originally posted by: binuuu
haha...its not possible..
oh...yeah...possessive hai is there to protect his baby sis...shoo cute 😆
I'm happy to read what u write..
and also I have suggestion...
I want to see asya's &aman's naughtiness...
zoya running behind them...
a beautiful bonding between sis bro duo... :)
so the last chappy is already planned according to this song...wow..
we reader have to say thanks to this song..
because of this song we got wonderful ff...
how much time u will say thanks yaar..I'm really fed up with the amount of thanks getting from u 😉

okay no thanks 😆

and yes credit goes to song too

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Ashii

@AkaiBara

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#344

Originally posted by: ajanshul
It does end so soon (pout)
Btw beautiful ending
a happy ever ending
lllovvved this story to the core
I will surely gonna reread this st or again n ahagain
awsm story :-))

thank you so much dear 😊

i'm glad u like it

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Ashii

@AkaiBara

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#345

Originally posted by: binuuu

😆
I didn't take it seriously when I read update...
but when I read ur reply ,I really thought 🤣
😆
but he will feel sad about it henaa..
oh..that's a new knowledge for me...same pinch ashii 😉
I think u r also like aman & me when u r young...
I hope u understand what I meant 😉

yeah i know what u mean

tabhi to wo sab likha tha 😆

and bhai ko no fark at all

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Ashii

@AkaiBara

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#346

Originally posted by: sweet_tehs
Deserving end to a wonderful story..
It was very very very nice part..
A happy wala end...

Asad was just too cute throughout...
Aman as always the matured one that his papa😆
Lol Asad hugged the nurse in excitement🤣

It was good Asad had planned a surprise n called haider before only...

The scenes with the baby were cute too...

N omg imagine agar such mein Zoya gives birth to 6 kids at a time🤣

The moments at home were cute too..
Asad getting a smack with a pillow😆

I loved the whole part.
Song selection was very apt.

The story will be remembered always..
It was a wonderful piece of work by you ashiii...

Come up with more good work...

N jo bache hai isko update kar..

thank you shooo much tehs api 🤗

yesss happy wala end

YA ALLAH i can't imagine that 😲

aisa hua to asli zoya mjhy maar degi 🤣

pillow wala idea aisy hi aagaya planned nahi tha 😳

u know api meri story plan huia just bcox of that song

i was so eager to write this part

issi k liye 34 parts likhy thy 😆

i'll update

exams aap dy aao plzzz 😃

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disha

@sunsathiya

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#347

Awesome romantic pretty update
i loved it

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Mayur Chan

@MayurChan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#348

Lovely Update Ashii..
A very good and deserving end to such a wonderful story..
I remember...almost more than a yr back..this was my first story of yours which i started following...and i am glad i did..
Very good and well written part..
Totally Loved it..