New Asya FF....Mere Humnawah Part *1-5* link to nxt thread given

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--Sumi--

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Posted: 10 years ago

#531

Hey jas

Beautiful update

I really enjoyed it

Badmadh zoya 🤣

Asad gentleman 😆

Famous seen well written 👏

It's remind me one seen of movies 😉

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Kabhibloom

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Posted: 10 years ago

#532

🤗Jas, I loved ur banner for the story.
It is very beautiful.🤗

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Niki.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#533

ressy😎 unress

wow this os is soo cuteee

zoya made a superrr plan

since she couldn't speak to aak more

so she sent the driver away😆

and took the hair pin and punctured the car tyres

how cute😳

remembered qh1 asya days when she had punctured the car

and plan worked aak zoe ko dekleta hain

lagtha hain aag dono taraf bharabar ka hain🤣

asad wanting to drop zoe kyonki dropping her is his responsibility na😳

and again his car gets kharab ghadi karab

but he can fix it coz he has water can

so zoe mausam ko khosti hain

and tada pehli barish on asya

they get traped due to mausam hayee

pehli barish on asya the moment u described magically

wow waqt wahi tham gaya😳

beautifully explained

zoya's duppata covering their face so romantic⭐️❤️

but bhim singh watchman beech main aajata hain

but he is a good person allows them to stay

for a while

zoe then says she is an actress and they click pics

both hug the old man aftr an hour and leave promising they will visit again

loved it to core⭐️

continue soonish

Edited by nikii11 - 10 years ago

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Gourav

@Shubh007

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Posted: 10 years ago

#534

Awesome & Cute Update...👏

Just Love It...😊

Every Scene Is Mind-Blowing...👍🏼

Every Scene Was Portrait Beautifully...⭐️

Update Next Part soon...😃

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Gulaabo

@Gulaabo

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Posted: 10 years ago

#535

dekh i am here so soon!
well written update
zoya ko accha kiya actress hi banaya tune...suits her character...kya drama karti hai!!!?

asad miyan for the first time got effected by zoya...great start !

continue soon

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Asif

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Posted: 10 years ago

#536

Wonderful update
Zoya wanted to talk to asad. She sent her driver back & punctured her car. Asad saw her & told her to come with him as it is not safe. Rain & asya, old connection. Lost in each other eyes, forget the world. Bhim Singh told them to come inside & wait as it was raining heavily. Waiting for next update soon
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Chandnii.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#537

Originally posted by: jas91

coming Mona darling hold on😉

Mast update tha! 😃

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Chandnii.

@Chandnii.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#538

Originally posted by: jas91

Its ok hota hai kabhi kabhi😉

Love u meri Moona darling

Oye tu dasya ni teri yeh Id bhi active hai😲

Aww, love you too, Bubbles!

Naah kudiye, main sirf apna account da naam badal ta ... From Your Mona darling to Chandni! 😳

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Binzzz

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Posted: 10 years ago

#539

Originally posted by: jas91


For Pms buddy asyafeelznot my real ID

res 4 meri family

Heenu mumma, Pinku papa,Ashi, Aloo, Affu, Yumi,



& also

Amu,Goti, Adu, Srash, Rada, Jules, Janna(Bano), Sam di,Mona darling,Trish, Aishu(Aishwa), Aish(Aishwarya), Mayur, Khush, Nikki, Binnu, Shailu, Sum, Sue, Tehs, Abi,

PS---U want u can check my replies on ur comnts in previous pages😊



thank u 4 d res jash 🤗
unres on page 75

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Chandnii.

@Chandnii.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#540

Chapter 4 :

So happy you posted fatafat! 😃

Bubbles, I loveeedd the chapter! 😃

You're nailing it better with each update! Must say this! ⭐️

Love how the story is really progressing!

Aaah, I likey Zoya here, she's like this naughty child, who is going to get her candy(Asad) and have it too ! 😉😆

Smart brain that she is, punctured her car ka tyres! 😆

And then later on how she prayed for some miracle to make them spend time together! 😆

Asad's such a gentleman! ⭐️

Chivalry is alive - He opened the door for her and waited for her to settle in.😳

Loved how he was protective of her when he hid her drenched self behind him

Trust Zoya to keep the conversation going! 😎

The entire rain segment was beautiful. How they felt these new feeling towards each other! Very much like the movies! 😳

Loved the update, Jas! Tu please jaldi se next chapter post karna.

P.S: Honestly, I loved how you still posted the chapter w/o getting the desired response. Yaha par log padhte hai and they move on, no likes and comments, I know how sad that makes the writers but kuch kar nahi sakte... it's like talking to the walls... In fact that is better, at least there is no disappointment there na! 😆 So, yeah... just do your things and keep going at it.. write for yourself and of course the lovely readers who bother to take time out of their busy schedules to like and drop comments, who spam our threads waiting for an update, genuinely wanting to read the story! And... you get what I am saying ... I ;mm sure. Just don't be disheartened. You girl, are doing a fab job at writing! ⭐️👏

Love you!

Abhi I goes, bahut blabber ho gaya mera ! 😵😆