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Unres
When I saw your post, I rubbed my eyes many times to be sure that I wasn't dreaming. I am so proud of you that you decided to write. you have all my blessing sweetheart, this is your Guruji who is talking to you 😆. And again thank you so much for your comment about me, it touched me deep inside , really and I mean it. even if I know you will say : don't say thank you again. 😃 But what to do, it's just my way to tell you what my heart felt when you mention me. First, the way you write your comments and the way you describe other stories, show that you are a talented person.
So coming to your first chapter:
When I read this chapter, I had a beautiful feeling, like I was in a dream. This chapter was really poetic and when I closed my eyes, i can see him as a slow motion (I don't know why 😃).
Everything was really perfect and well described. I love that you write first in Zoya's pov, it show how complex her life and personallity will be. I am really curious to know how you are going to introduce him in her life : as a new producer, new actor, or business man etc...
Both of the character seemed to be a beautiful person in heart, even for the moment, we don't know who is this handsome stranger 😉. I don't know why but I feel their first encoutner will not be that smooth between them? Our Asya don't know how to talk to each other without yelling. I don't know how you decide to write your story, but you have many options and this story will give the opportunity to try different road.
Jas really you should have wrote earlier because you have something for sure but everything came at the right time. I am sure that this story will be a really good one.
Keep going girl 👏
Unres
When I saw your post, I rubbed my eyes many times to be sure that I wasn't dreaming. I am so proud of you that you decided to write. you have all my blessing sweetheart, this is your Guruji who is talking to you 😆. And again thank you so much for your comment about me, it touched me deep inside , really and I mean it. even if I know you will say : don't say thank you again. 😃 But what to do, it's just my way to tell you what my heart felt when you mention me. First, the way you write your comments and the way you describe other stories, show that you are a talented person.
So coming to your first chapter:
When I read this chapter, I had a beautiful feeling, like I was in a dream. This chapter was really poetic and when I closed my eyes, i can see him as a slow motion (I don't know why 😃).
Everything was really perfect and well described. I love that you write first in Zoya's pov, it show how complex her life and personallity will be. I am really curious to know how you are going to introduce him in her life : as a new producer, new actor, or business man etc...
Both of the character seemed to be a beautiful person in heart, even for the moment, we don't know who is this handsome stranger 😉. I don't know why but I feel their first encoutner will not be that smooth between them? Our Asya don't know how to talk to each other without yelling. I don't know how you decide to write your story, but you have many options and this story will give the opportunity to try different road.
Jas really you should have wrote earlier because you have something for sure but everything came at the right time. I am sure that this story will be a really good one.
Keep going girl 👏
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