NEW ASYA FF: Khamoshiyan teaser updated on page 120(11/9)

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Sumi Roy

@LoveSonu2408

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#691

congo for bcming dazzler...

amaizing writing..asya cnt express thr feelings bcz of thr own insecurity.asad went to NY & zya in2 asad's room..feeling all those.

zoya read the diary yet cnfused who is tht girl...

hope everythng clear out soon.thnks for pm.cntinu soon.

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-PizzyLuvAsya-

@-PizzyLuvAsya-

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#692

Yaay Yaay mai to agyi sumu tere liye
Wow kya super duper update likhi hai tune
Pakka tune likhi hai
Kisi novel ki ni hai ?
🤣
Coz it's damn fabulous upstate sumu
My one of favourite update
I'm excited to see what will Asad do now !

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ksen

@ksen

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#693

very nice update

loved it

but it was sad

waiting for the next part

thanks for the pm

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ASYAaishu

@ASYAaishu

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#694

love it...

plz cont soon...

what will happen next??? im so eager..!!!

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Saima Syed

@Saima-Syed

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#695

Thank you for the res Sumi

The update was brilliant. I loved it

I don't know why you doubt yourself as a writer.

It was very well written

The poem was lovely

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--Sumi--

@--Sumi--

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#696

Originally posted by: Saima-Syed
Thank you for the res Sumi

The update was brilliant. I loved it

I don't know why you doubt yourself as a writer.

It was very well written

The poem was lovely

Thank you very much

You always support me

I will as per my knowledge and capacity

Hope you like further story

Lol 😊

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sweet_tehs

@sweet_tehs

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#697

Originally posted by: azsumay
Res for sweet aapi, saima aapi, nayab, shailu, sue, Julie, Gita, simmi, jas, aroo, Annie, rada, srushti, Ashleshah, swapno,chahat,anupama, linsie, Asif, abi, mayur and who follow this story 🤗

Thank u🤗

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Asif

@asifiqbalsh

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#698

Beautifully written update
Poem was wonderful. Expressed all asad feelings. Zoya read his diary & didn't find the name of girl whom he love but all the happening resemble her life. Waiting for next update soon. Thanks for pm & congratulations for promotion.

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anopama

@anopama

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#699

Nice update

So Zoya is hurt but will be better

Asad is so scared and wants to distance from her

But how can he he loves her

So he leaves for ny for work

She looks for him she misses him

So she knows she loves him but she is scared he rejects her

So tht is y she rather say nothing and leave it as it is

Aww she searches his room for any clue

If he left any message for her

Bcuz she contact him but he doesn't respond

So she read his diary his words correspond to their meetings

So could it be related to her

She can be hopeful

He comes and find her asleep

How can he stay away Allah

So now asad will distance himself from her

Continue soon

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sruthykarthika

@sruthykarthika

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#700

Beautiful update. finally zoya realise her feelings toards asad. She came to know that asad also love her, but she need some confirmation. poor girl. By the way what happened in the past. Asad mentioned that he failed to protect her. What is that means. unfold the mistery too.

Coming to the poem, that wad OUTSTANDING yaar, MA what a meaningful lines. I really really really like it.