Originally posted by: radadolcevida
Hi buddy
I finally manage to read your story after so long. I am so sorry for the delay.
First, I really love the plot of your story, the choice . Life is so difficult and sometimes we don't have choice but it's good that we can do thing not by duty but with the heart.
Asad seemed to be more mature about his feelings than Zoya. He is really a true gentleman in this story, and he kept his heart in silence when she asked him to stop this marriage. I felt for him really, i imagine his heart in piece poor man. living in dream for so long and just to be destroyed by the woman that keep you alive. How hurtfull was this part for him. I really find smart his excuses and I think it's even important for him to know her better and to conquer her heart 😃.
So coming to ZOya, she was for a change emotionally challenged and I can understand her pov. She was as a woman to progress in life; however all her reactions were in total contradictions with her words. She cares, she missed him and she wanted him but as human, she loves herself for the moment more herself than him.
I appreciate how he pacify her even if she used this to her count.
Anyway, really nice story, nice concept. continue soon and hope to see this travel of love that they are going to share during your story. I would love to see the wedding only at the end.
Take care 🤗 and sorry for the delay 😕
Hey rada thank you so much for giving me your worth time
This plot is not like full of suspense
This story might be emotional and romantic
Ha asad is very gentle man
He doesn't want hurt her or any other family members
I want to give messages to all
When any women want to stop then no one can change change her decision except heart
I hope so you like it
Hope your life is going easy now
Lol 🤗
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