Asya SS: Battling With Past And Feelings Updated Part 4 on Pg 28 - Page 13

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Chocochip008

Loved it.Continue soon. 😊

Thanku dear 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: --Aishwarya--

It was a very nice update!!!


Thanks so much for the pm and do continue soon!!

Loved it!! 😊

Thnku dear 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: skavya

Very nice concept dear

read both the parts...interesting updates...
What is Asad's past...I wonder what mistake he had done...
Why Zoya think Asad is bad...& that nightmares...so many questions...
eager to read more...
continue soon...

Thanku so much dear 😊
I have no aswers for your questions. Uh ll have to stay tuned to this ss 😉
Ok i ll
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -Crazy4AsYa-

nice update vaishu though i am late
zoya's affection with radil is heart warming but what did poor asad do?
asya know each other but due to some bad memories!
continue soon

Hihi i cnt tell wht he did.
And thnku shrashtu 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
Ok dear. 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: MeDHellsAngel


Thanku so much sue🤗
Ur all questions will be answered soon😉
I ll update but there still 7 likes to go.


crossed 50 now
when is the update coming?
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: suearmaniac


crossed 50 now
when is the update coming?

Hopefully i ll update today 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hii everyone.
How are you all?
Thanku so much for fulfilling my wish, thanks to all.
I am here with my next update hope you guys like it.

~~ Part 3 ~~

In Radil's room.
Dilshaad asked all worried. "Ab zoya asad ke sath acha behave nahi karegi. Itni mushkil se asad forgot all that and now again he ll be upset."
Rashid said assuring her " bas itna hi janti ho apni beti ko?"
Dilshaad confused " what do you mean?"
Rashid replied " i mean hamari zoya ka dil itna saf hai ki vo kisi se zada time tak sad nahi reh sakti. Dekh lena vo kal usse phir normal ho jayegi. Bhul gayi apni bachi ko app?"
Dilshaad happily " are ha. Main toh bhul hi gayi hamari bachi kisi ka dil nahi dukha sakti vo aur ladkio jaisi nahi hai"
Rashid "ha" and he hugged her.

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At night zoya was feeling hungry she came out of room to make something.
She was cooking some noodles and coffee for herself when asad entered the kitchen. Seeing zoya in kitchen he was about to leave when zoya called his name.

Zoya felt guitly for leaving dining table like this, and when he turned his face after seeing zoya, she felt more bad so she called his name. "Asad".
Asad turned and answered "ji". Zoya asked "aapko kuch chahiye tha? Itni raat ko yaha."
Asad replied "ha vo mjhe coffee banani thi and i was bit hungry so thought of making some sandwich".
Zoya asked "than why are you leaving?" Asad replied "vo i thought you make than i ll come".
Zoya said " oh its ok you also make your stuff. By the way i am making noodles and coffee so if you want i can make for you too".
Asad replied normally " ok. I ll make sandwich for us". Zoya nodded.
They were making their stuff quietly when zoya spoke out of no where. "I am sorry Asad.(Asad looked at her not understanding reason for her apology) i am sorry for behaving rude and leaving dining table like that.
Asad just said "its ok".
While having noodles, sandwiches and coffee they were chit chatting a bit when zoya blurted out. "Vaise tumne vo sab kyu kia? Tumhe bilkul bura nahi laga?
Asad stopped for a second anger took his senses. "See zoya main tumhare sath thodi bahut bat kar raha hoon that doesn't mean you are something to me. You are just my uncle aunty's daughter. You are nothing to me, so you have no right to ask all this". Saying all this he stormed to his room leaving a crying zoya behind.
Zoya crying "what does he think of himself after all that what he did i talked to him still he is so rude" she too left for room after sometime.

In morning at breakfast tablem

Zoya asked dilshaad " ammi main kuch chote kapde le loon. Plz ammi aap toh janti hai vaha koi nahi pehnta but yaha toh maine kahio ko dekha hai pehne hue. (I dont know anything about Ahmadabad so i dont know whter girls wear such clothes there or not)
Dilshaad " ha le lo i am not against all this and tumhare ammi abbu bhi nahi hai bas vaha nahi pehnte yeh sab but here girls do wear so you can also".
Thay were talking about all this when rashid and asad too came.
Zoya asked excited "so main shopping jau ammi abbu?"
Rashid replied "ya go par kiske sath jaogi? Dilshaad is busy today"
Dilshaad too said "yes i am busy these days. Do one thing go with asad"
Asya in unison "No".
Asad "i have work uncle".
Zoya too said "i ll go alone na ammi abbu".
Rashid replied sternly " asad kam bad mein bhi ho sakta hai. And zoya us din bhi tum ghar akeli ayi thi till the time you don't get used to all the routes you wont step out of this house alone. Thats final you both are going together"
Asya made frustrated faces while radil winked without coming in notice of asya.

After getting ready in white tight fit jeans and yellow cut sleeves top zoya came out hair loose flowing in the air where Asad was waiting for her.
Asad was waiting for zoya from last 10 mins, as he saw her he blasted on her. "Time par nahi aa sakti kya aap? Itni der se aapka wait kar raha hu".
Zoya replied in a calm voice controlling her anger. "See Asad we both are not interested in going with eachother so you can wherever you want i ll go by myself."
Asad first was happy but than morning talk strike his mind that zoya dont know about Ahmadabad.
"But you dont know any route" asad said. Zoya replied in his tone from last night "that's not your business. I ll manage. So bye". Saying so she was about to go but asad stopped her.
"For today you are my responsibility so i cant leave you alone if want to go alone than take permission from uncle aunty. " asad said not showing any emotion.
Zoya got irritated and without saying anything sat in car on back seat.
Asad entered the car and said "oh hello. I am not your driver chup chap aage aake baitho".
Zoya came in front. Whole ride they didnt utter a word zoya was just looking out remembering some routes.

They went into few shops and bought some jeans and top. Zoya now wanted to buy some undergarments and she cant buy all that in front of asad.so she said "asad plz go and buy your clothes also i ll do rest of my shopping on my own.
Asad said "aapko jo lena hai le lijiye i dont want to buy anything".
Zoya now forcing a smile spoke "plz asad i ll do my shopping you do somethinh else after half an hour we ll meet here only".
Asad replied being irritated " zoya i told you i am not going anywhere."
Zoya now raised her voice "i want to buy undergarments. Would you like to come?"
Asad got embarrassed "ok fine you go i ll wait here only."
Zoya "ya better". And she left to buy undergarments laughing at his embarrassed expressions.
After completing her shopping she saw a shop of skirts, shorts, one piece. She got excited and went in to buy all that short short clothes.
She wore one piece like froke reaching her theighs and boots under it.
She came to that spot where asad and zoya had to meet.
Asad was on a call when he saw zoya dressed in one piece, he got angry and cut the call in between "i ll call you back after sometime."

Zoya came all happy with bags in her hands. "Lets go asad and eat something i am damm hungry".
Asad blasted on her "zoya aapko akal nahi hai kya? Yeh sab kapde pehnne ki kya zaroorat hai?"
Zoya asked "whats wrong in these clothes?" Asad replied "cant you see how boys are looking at you?"
Zoya laughed sarcastically "as if they won't stare when i ll wear salwar kameez. Kutto ka toh kam hai ghurna ab in ladko ki vajah se i cant stop living"
Asad massaged his anger and controlled his anger,"see zoya noone is telling you to stop living i am just telling you to not wear these clothes".
Zoya not shouted " bas asad who are you to tell me what should i wear and what should i not? Ammi abbu allowed so who are you to stop me?"
Asad too shouted "i know i am noone but you are not coming with me in these cothes. And thats final".
"Fine aap jaise arrogate, insensitive insan ke sath main jana bhi nahi chahti" saying so she left from there.
Asad too left in anger.

Zoya was going here and there she didnt found any auto rickshaw. Walking after 15 mintues zoya entered an isolated street there was noone she was about to go back when few boys surrounded her.

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Asad drive for 5 minutes and realized he did a mistake by leaving her alone so he turned he turned his SUV to find. He searched for her but didnt got her, he was hell scared now. "Zoya kaha ho tum? I dont have your number also".

On other side that boys started touching her arms her legs. Zoya slapped one of them and in anger one man slapped zoya hard on her cheek so hard that she fall on ground but before she could meet the hard floor she met with hard body.
She looked up and was relieved to see him.

Asad got out of his car and searched in all shops all places when his eyes landed on a street. He thought " nahi zoya yaha nahi gayi hogi. Ja bhi sakti hai she dont know any place" and she get in the street. As he moved further he saw few boys surronding kne girl and with one glimpse he came to know that its zoya and another moment he felt one boy slap zoya. Before she could fall asad came forward and held her.
Asad was in his lion mode and as zoya lifted her face he saw blood drop near her cheek. He wiped that and removed his court and covered her.
He started beating all, in this he also got some bruises and some wounds but didnt care. All he wanted at that time to kill these boys who touched zoya who slapped her.
Zoya was hell scared seeing him so angry, she tried to stop him but all went in vain.
Finally police arrived there who were on round.

Police arrested all the boys and left. Asad again blasted on her. "Kaha tha na mat jao akeli but..."
He stopped seeing zoya crying badly. He did the first thing came to his mind, he hugged her tightly.
"Sshh zoya chup bas. Chale gaye vo. Plz chup ho jao" asad tried to calm her shaking body.
Zoya didnt hug him back, she was not in a state, she just whispered "take me home asad" in his ears. Asad nodded and took her home.

Dilshaad opened the door and shouted on zoya. "Kya zaroorat thi zoya akele jane ki.."She stopped in between seeing her condition. Asad too stopped her and narrated everything.
Zoya was standing there like a statue. Rashid too returned and listened everything they both hugged zoya tightly but zoya didnt respond.
"Ammi i want to freshen up" zoya said in a broken voice. Dilshaad said " ok beta you go i ll make something for you to eat".
"Ammi mujhe bhuk nahi hai" saying so she left.
Dilshaad tried to say something but rashid stopped her. "Give her some time she ll be fine".
Asad, dilshaad and rashid's heart broke seeing zoya in such devastated state.

Zoya freshen up and came out in her room wearing salwar kameez. She was sitting staring at nothing when she heard a knock on her door, asad entered with some boxes in his hands.

Zoya kept quiet didnt utter a word. Asad sat besid her he was in pain seeing her in those salwar kameez. She was affected badly with the incident.
Asad started the conversation. "I am sorry zoya. Mujhe aise behave nahi karna chahiye tha, i agree with you there is no harm in wearimg short clothes."
Zoya spoke"no asad you were right we girls should not wear such clothes".

"Mujhe ni pata tha ki meri beti itni weak hai ki ek incident ki vajah se uski soch hi badal jaye" dilshaad spoke as she entered the room with rashid.
Rashid too spoke "ha bete aise ladko ki vajah se tum kyu apni life ke sath compromise karogi. Punishment unhe milegi coz galti unki hai tumhari nahi"
Asad too spoke " or vaise bhi aap hi ne kaha tha na ki aise kutto ki vajah se aap ku apni zindagi na jiye".

Zoya cried listening to all this, finally her anger came out in form of tears. "Ammi theu touched me here and here" she touched her arms and legs telling them all this. All felt pain in there heart seeing a bubbly girl zoya cry like this. "Or jab maine unhe thapad mara toh they slapped me".
Dilshaad hugged her tightly to not continue further, she cried badly in her arms. There moment was disturbed by ringing of phone.
Screen read Abbu. Zoya asked in signals that did they tell them, dilshaad nodded. Zoya all scared of getting a scolding picked the call.
"Abbu i am really sorry" she spoke as ahe picked up the call. Anwar spoke from other sidd "no zoya you dont need to apologize. Galti un ladko ki thi bas main yahi kahunga ki apna dhyaan rakho, yeh duniya aise hi gando logo se bhari padi hai. Jab bhi bahar nikalo rashid or dilshaad bhabhi ke sath jao jab tak tumhe sab raaste nahi pata lagte".
Zeenat took the phone from anwar's hand and spoke "pehle hal chal toh puch lo beti ka pehle hi lecture shuru kar dia." All chuckled. She continued " zoya tu thik toh hai na?"
Zoya replied "ha ammi main thik hu. Aur abbu don't worry main apna dhyan rakhungi.
Anzee replied"gud. Dhyan rakhma apna" and they hung up.

I hope i didn't hurt anyone's emotions if i did than i am sorry.
So how was the update?
Next update after 50 likes.

Bye. Take care.
Love Vish❤️
Edited by MeDHellsAngel - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
res


unres
yipee
1st spot
aur vo bhi vaishu ki update par
wah wah! *tapping my own back* 😆
update was awesome yar 😉
zoya behaved nice bt asad gt angry
wat happened between them?
Shopping part was humorous nd an embarassed asad was a treat to read 😆
bt she went in isolated street wearing those nd those crooked guys tried wat they had in their dirty mind
love it how asad beat them nd cops arrested them
gud job to ahemdabad's police 😆
LOVE IT when all are taking care of zoya
i want next update asap
Edited by suearmaniac - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome. Amazing.
Loved it.
Zoya was being nice to asad n he got angry at her question.
Asya again fighting.
All scenes were written nicely.
Continue soon.

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