Asya SS: Battling With Past And Feelings Updated Part 4 on Pg 28

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hii guys.
How are you all?
I know i was doing wrong by quitting QH forum for some jerks. But now i have filtered my buddy list. I ll write for few of you only.
I hope you guys will read this and like this SS as this oneis different from all works of mine.
Special thanks to aYashika my brain😆 she always helps me in getting more ideas and giving a proper shape to my stories.
Ok so here it starts, title is not yet decided so all advises are welcome. Namkaran bhi toh karna hai iska😆.

~~~~Part-1~~~~

Somewhere in Bhopal faruki's were in hurry doing last minute packing for there princess. For the first time they are sending there daughter out of Bhopal for her higher studies.
All were sad as well as happy and scared too seeing the environment nowadays. But they believe in their Allah that he cannot do anything wrong to their princess.

Oblivious to all these things our princess was cuddling with her pillow lost in her dream.
She got up with a jerk panting for air all sweaty.
Girl- Ya Allah again that same dream. Who is that person who always call me for help. Allah plz bless him. Plz.
She was praying when her eyes landed on the callender, hapiness engulfed her. Today is the day she ll step into a new world, new people, new dreams.
All excited she got up and got ready for the day.

Anwar- zoya aap ready ho?
Zoya- ji abbu.
Zeenat- ek bar phir soch lo zoya. Yaha bhi toh kar sakti ho na MBA.
Zoya- Allah Miyan whats wrong with you ammi. Log taraste hai IIM se MBA karne ke liye and mera number aya toh you are asking me to reconsider my decision. Than she saw tears in her ammi's eyes.
She hugged her and said ammi plz don't cry. Its about 2 years and my life will be set. And you know na ammi main aap sabko life ki sari khushiyan dena chahti hu and for that i ll have to go.
Anwar- dont cry now she will be weak.
Zoya- ha ammi be my strength not weakness.
Ammi- ok beta i ll not cry. Remember one thing zoya me and your abbu is always with you, never do anything wrong.
Anwar- and agar galti se kuch aisa karo toh do tell us we ll scpld you but will accept you coz you are our princess. Never harm your life.
Zoya was now emotional and hugged both her parents. I love you ammi abbu. I ll never do anything to myself because for me you guys are important. And i am lucky that i have parents like you. Love you. I ll miss you.
Anwar/zeenat in unison. We too love you beta and miss you.

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Somewhere in Ahmadabad someone was seeing a nightmare again.
He woke up with sweat beads covering is forehead.
He know what he did 10 years back was wrong but that was right according to him, he was not new to all these nightmares. He just pushed himself to start the day.
He came out of shower in towel showcase his well toned body with six packs abs, he got ready in his 3 piece suit to go for office.

At dining.
He came down and greeted his parents.
Asad- goodmorning uncle aunty.
Rashid Uncle/Dilshaad Aunty- good morning asad.
Aunty- come have breakfast.
Asad- no aunty i ll leave.
Uncle said faking anger- asad come here and have your breakfast.
Asad sat there without utering a word.
Asad was lost somewhere.
Aunty- kya hua beta aaj phir se vo nightmare aya?
Asad- Allah jane kab chodega mera past mera picha.
Uncle- see my son the time you will get love and start living your life like a nornal human being these memories will not haunt.
Asad- you know uncle i dont want anyone in my life. And noone will accept me with my past.
Aunty- dont worry beta i know Allah he cant be cruel to a soul like you for your one nistake. He has chosen someone for and the day she ll come no dreams will haunt.
Asad thought of something and said in mere wisper. No aunty the girl i want,, i will never get.
Uncle- kya kaha?
Asad- nothing. Ok i ll take a leave i have important meeting.
As asad left Rashid got a call.
Rashid- Salaam anwar.
Anwar- salaam rashid miyan. Zoya nikal chuki hai.
Rashid- ha toh vo jab pahchegi i ll pick her.
Anwar- dhyaan rakhna uska.
Rashid- yeh bhi koi kehne ki bat hai. Tumhari beti meri beti hai.
Anwar- thanku rashid agar tum or bhabhi vaha na hote toh main zoya ko kabhi bhej na pata.
Dilshaad took the phone from rashid.
Dilshaad- bhaijaan aap fikar mat kariye zoya hamari bhi beti hai. Hum uska puar khayal rakhenge.
Anwar- thanku bhabhi. Rakhta hu. Khuda Hafiz.
Dilshaad- Khuda Hafiz.


So how was it?
Haha i know kuch samajh nahi aya but for now this much is enough😉. Haha i am very cruel.
Do tell how you guys like it?
Bye. Take care.
Index is below
Love Vish❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Res for Index
Buddy me for pms.
Silent readers Will not be accepted.

Part 1 - Above
Edited by MeDHellsAngel - 9 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Res for mayur, abi, yashu, chotu, affu, aaroo, aishu, ridhu, sanjhari, aashi. Sorry if i forgot someone.
Edited by MeDHellsAngel - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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unres
well Interesting New Concept
with New Story Line
In Show: Zoya is the one haveing nightmare&with no parents
here Vice-Versa

BRING IT ON Yar
&
thank-u for "res"
Edited by -ABI- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome Star Dear👏😊

Zoya is going to do her MBA😃

Someone calls Zoya for help in her dreams😲

Asad is scared abt his past😲

Sumthn bad may have happened in his past

So, AnZee told RaDil dat Zoya will leave in their house

Can't Zoya live in hostels???

Update soon n PM me😃


-Juhi



As for title, its too early to think. But I can think of a title 'Battling The Past'.




Edited by angel_juhi04 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey
Nice concept...
Finding it really intriguing especially the nightmares..
Thinking hard what mistake Asad must have done.
N here RaDil are not parents but uncle n aunt..
Looking forward to further updates.

N glad with your decision to not quit writing.
Welcome back👏
Edited by sweet_tehs - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Seems to be interesting
Would like to know about the asads past..
Update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice start
Little mystery but wait for story to unfold
Rashid & dilshad are asad uncle/aunty. Dilshad told him that everything will be fine when someone come in his life. He like someone but thought she won't agree.
Curious to know abt Asad past & how Zoya will save him.
Glad to see that u reversed ur decision abt quitting
Update soon plz
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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New read to ur stories
Nice one
Zoya going to asad place for studies
Asad do not want with his past
I am moreinterest to read the story
Do pm next part pls
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: MeDHellsAngel

Res for mayur, abi, yashu, chotu, affu, aaroo, aishu, ridhu, sanjhari, aashi. Sorry if i forgot someone.

sorry Maggie I am not following any new stories...I am still with the ones which are going on...I will be with Teri galliyan... sorry...

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