Asya SS: Battling With Past And Feelings Updated Part 4 on Pg 28 - Page 8

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Posted: 10 years ago
#71
Hii everyone.
How are you all?
I am So sorry guys for being late, actually my mobile had some problem so thts why. But now its sorted so here i am.
And i have decided my title i.e. BATTLING WITH PAST AND FEELINGS.
So hows it? I never take anyone's credit so this title is suggested by juhi. Thnku dear.
So here you go.

~~Part 2~~

Rashid standing on station was waiting for zoya.
Zoya descended the stairs of train searching for familiar faces.
After looking here and there for 5 minutes finally her face lips broke into a big smile seeing her rashid abbu. She ran and hugged him and said "Aslaam Alaikum abbu"
Rashid too reciprocated the hug and dropping a kiss on her forehead. "Walekum asalaam beta how are you?"
Zoya broke the hug. "I am fine abbu aap bataiye"
Rashid " mee too fine chalo lets go dilshaad is waiting for you"
Zoya asked sadly "ammi ku nahuli aayi lene mujhe?"
Rashid said chuckling " dont be sad she is making your favourite food"
Zoya's eyes twinkled on listening about her favourite food that too by her ammi "Lets go abbu fast i am damm hungry"
Rashid"ha beta lets go"
Zoya share a very beautiful bond with rashid and dilshaad. After anwar and zeenat they are the persons whom she consider as her parents. Rashid and dilshaad also love zoya as her own daughter.

Door bell ringed and dilshaad opened the door. And the next moment zoya jumped on dilshaad giving her a tight hug.
Zoya was so happy seeing her ammi "ammi Assalam Allekum i missed you so so much"
Dilshaad too hugged her back "walekum Aslaam beta i missed you too. She looked her from top to bottom. " Masha Allah meri beti kitni khoobsurat ho gayi hai" she said placing a kiss on her forehead.
Zoya blushed "shukria ammi aap bhi abhi tak sexy lagti ho" she said with a wink.
Dilshaad slightly slapped her head. "Badmash ladki tum nahi sudhrogi"
Zoya faking hurt rubbing her head. "Ouch ammy ab sexy lady ko toh sexy hi kahenge na kyu abbu"
Rashid too joined. "Aur kya sahi toh keh rahi hai hamari beti"
Dilshaad blushed" aap log bhi. Come inside. Zoya go freshen up beta and have your breakfast."
Zoya said "ok sexy" and ran from there.
Radil laughed at her antics. "Pagal hai yeh ladki"

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After having her tummy full relishing her favourite food zoya proceeded to her college to the formalities.
Rashid took her there. "Are you sure you ll go by yourself?"
Zoya replied" yes abbu. You go, as soon as my work will finish i ll go home"
Rashid " call me na i ll drop you home"
Zoya "its ok abbu i ll go "
Rashid said" ok than bye"
Zoya " bye"
After completing her work zoya returned home and slept. Because she was tired from her journey. Dilshaad too let her sleep, after making her sleep dilshaad talked to anwar and zeenat telling them that she is fine.

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At night.
Rashid and Asad returned home.
Rashid asked dilshaad " where is zoya? Kahi dikh nahi rahi."
Dilshaad" she is sleeping. She was tired so i didnt disturb her, you both freshen up i ll wake her up"
Asad confused asked " who is zoya aunty?"
Dilshaad" offo we forgot to tell hamari beti aai hai bhopal se to usi ki bat kar rahe the"
Seeing asad's confused face rashid answered " zoya hamare best friend ki beti hai you can say he is my brother. So as you know we have no child so she is our child.
Asad said "oh ok. Main fresh hoke aata hu"
Rashid " main bhi".

Dilshaad called zoya for dinner. Zoya too freshen up and came.
Asad, radil were on dining table having there dinner when zoya came still rubbing her eyes.
Zoya said yawning "hii everyone"
Radil said" hi our sleeping beauty"
Asad lifted his head up to look at the new member.
Zoya to looked at asad. Asya's eyes widened looking at eachother.
Asad was sure who was she but zoya was still confuse.

Zoya thinking in mind. "Is he the same person? No he cant be"
Dilshaad called breaking her chain of thoughts. "Zoya kaha kho gayi"
Zoya Came out of her thoughts. "Huh. Ji ammi nothing".
Zoya while having dinner was confused she was not sure if he was him and she cant ask his name. But Allah was with her her ammi introduced him.
Dilshaad introducing asad "zoya yeh asad hai. He is like our son and MD of your abbu's company.
Zoya was chewing her food when she choked listening his name. She got scared and left from there.
Rashid asked worried " what happened to her?"
Dilshaad " i dont know. I ll see". Rashid replied "i ll also come. Asad you have dinner we ll be back."

In zoya's room.
Radil came and pondered zoya with lots of questions. "Kya hua zoya? Are you fine? Why you left like this? You look scared "
Zoya " ammi abbu who is this asad? And how do you know him?"
Rashid replied" he is like our son beta. He's been staying here from last 5 years and he is a very good boy"
Zoya replied " no abbu he is not. He is a bloody..." Dilshaad Cut her between "plz zoya dont say like this. Thats past and the thing he did was for a reason"
Zoya replied " no ammi. He is not good".
Rashid replied " he is a good man. We cant tell you why he did all this but he did for so.e reason. And Allah also forgive one mistake than we are toh just humans"
Zoya replied scared " sorry ammi abbu but if he ll stay here than i wont"
Dilshaad replied shocked "zoya what are you saying beta. Don't do this"
Rashid " zoya if you trust us than plz dont go anywhere. If you feel that he is the same i ll myself throw him out. But i know i ll never get this chance because he is a very good chil"
Dilshaad" plz zoya". Zoya replied " ok ammi abbu i ll stay. But one mistake and he ll be out.
Rashid- paka.


In Asad's room.
Asad was tensed. " what is she doing here? That too after so many years. She still didn't forgave me. Allah plz give me strength to avoid her."

So how was it guys?
Next update after 49+ likes.
Fulfill my demand and you ll be gifted with update
Bye guys. Take care.
Love Vish❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
#72
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Well a little bit confusing but Interesting Update

Confusing: do Asad&Zoya related before and, also what mistake does Asad have done,etc
Interesting: it will be when
Story unfolds
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Edited by -ABI- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#73
Hey vaishu 😊
that was really a neatly penned update
starting with light moments of zoya till asad's wish to god 4 providing strength to avoid her! Bt with that questions are
y he wants to avoid her?
Y she thinks he's bad ?
Y she's scared of him?
Wat did he do to her?
Wat the term 'same guy ' refer to?
How do they knw each other ?
And as in ur title wat was the past? And was it that bad that she has to battle around?
Guys pls hit likes nd make it to 49+
coz these questions needs answer and that wud only happen after lots of likes!
Vaishu be ready with the next update ;)
Edited by suearmaniac - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#74
Loved it...
AsYa knew each other...
what did he do?😕
Loved Zoya-Radil bonding...
Continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#75
Awesome. Loved it.
So asya know each other.
Zoya knows Asad's past.
Continue soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#76
Nice update
So Asya know each other
She was scared by him. Radil assured her that he is changed person now. Curious to know their past now.
Update soon plz
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#77
Thanks for PM,Dear.😊
It was Amazing and Very Interesting Part.😊
Zoya Bonding with Dilshad and Rashid was so Nice,I Likes it.😊
Zoya was scared on seeing Asad(KSG),it was so Interesting.😊
What happened between ASYA(KABHI)?Waiting for it.😊
Please Update Next Part soon,I am waiting here.😊
__________________________________
(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)
PriyaCherry.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#78
Very nc updt
Loved it.. Asya met and their shocked expressions !
What happened in d past.. Want to knw...
One mistake huh !

Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#79
Amazing update
somewhat confusing regarding asad and zoyas past
Loved the update
eagerly waiting for the next 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#80
Nice update
But now u r making me scared
So asya know each other
So is Zoya the person asad wants to be with but say he can't in first chap
Also Is she the person he did wrong
So many questions
So Zoya was ready to leave the house but radil convince her
They say asad has changed and had reasons for what he did
But she says one mistake and he is out
Oh boy asad is tensed
He knows she is still angry and he needs to stay away from her
Continue soon
I am intrigued with this story

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