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Originally posted by: sweet_tehs

Ohhh long procedure. ...

Phir to bada wait karma padega...

It's been too long..

but do you still remember this story😲

Originally posted by: sweet_tehs

Ideas for the update?

not for the upcoming update but story main kaisa twist aana chayiye

Originally posted by: nikii11

but do you still remember this story😲

Originally posted by: nikii11

not for the upcoming update but story main kaisa twist aana chayiye

And what do you want to see next

kaisa ending

Originally posted by: sweet_tehs

Yes I do..

Asad rescues her from the enemy when a guard hits her

yeah grt..

Originally posted by: sweet_tehs

Ok I will think n tell u..

yeah do pm me nd tell me...

Originally posted by: nikii11

yeah do pm me nd tell me...

by this week

will be waiting😳

and would credit you for the ideas😆 hehe

Originally posted by: nikii11

yeah do pm me nd tell me...

by this week

will be waiting😳

and would credit you for the ideas😆 hehe

chappy 9

Hume maaf karna readers 😆

was busy with my studies😳

so iss story ko adha adhura choda😭

but was also lacking some ideas coz kuch gadbad kiya tha maine😭

anyway now I am back with the update

and jo iss story ko bhool gaye hain

plz don't comment with attitude🥱

ki tum log bhool gaye and all🥱

ek meherbani karo just hit likes😳

ok enough of my blabber

lets focus on the story

filler update hain😆😉

next upcoming updates will have kuch revealations and romance😉😳

so without much ado hero goes..

Recap : aak in disguise of elderado soldier

zoya blurts out that she is narnian princess

ab aage( now continued)

asad looks at her in shock. He stands quiet for sometime trying to digest her words,,,you are a princess narnia'n princess

Asad removes the soldiers helmet and shows himself to her

zoya : well don't act like you don't know .. sniffing in between and you guys are after me coz u guys saw my missing poster and raises her eyes to see him

zoya : she startles seeing asad... Its you thief!!

she suddenly says and looks down at the mistake of saying her real identity

asad :winks at her.. looks lik I know your secret princess.. but then why are u dressed lik a commoner??

.zoya : None of your business crossing her hands.

asad : wohaa now I get it..why people are behind you "smirking"...

I can connect the dots u see..narnian enemies narnian gaurds were after you coz u were the royal blood..The most wanted chick is actually the narnian princess..

zoya ; listen you.. I need to go back to Narnia .back to my palace..so you gonna take me back to Narnia..I miss my father and my besties zeenat aapi and anwar

asad : Then why on earth did you escape from the palace..

zoya : we are not frnds to tell you my whole history ?? remember we aparted as unlikely frnds and its all becoz of you that I have landed in this trouble...

asad : becoz of me ??? yeh sab mere wajese.. will you care to explain ?? how

zoya : ohh so the thief needs explanation now...well Mr thief I had told you that I don't know much about Narnia but what did you do..??

just left me alone coz Your precious jewels were accidently dropped by me from the hilltop

way to go ..and starts mocking him by clapping twice

asad gets irritatd so its becoz of me that the enemies of Narnia captured you..?? hmm makes no sense to me

Don't u think becoz of me you get saved and instead of brooding on me ..

don't u think you need to apologise

zoya : well let me think she pauses for a second and then shouts a big nooo

just then a pack of soldiers hears a gals voice and come there to that direction...they wer around 50..

zoya sees them ,her mouth opens widely..oh no..

zoya : allah ab kya hoga

asad : way to go princess now becoz of whom do we get noticed ?? Raising his brow

zoya : Its only becoz of you...seeing you I got pissed you instigated me and the result was my anger

asad : well now enough of this blame games ...we need to run

he grabs her hand and starts running

soldiers padko unne

asya see 3 paths , left right and straight

asad: That way left ...

zoya: No this way right...

asad : Then better is to go straight asya both see each other and agree and run holding hands

They see some royal home decorated

A celebration some of them singing and some dancing... sangeet celebration going on of royal ministers daughter...asya join them from behind...

a group of singers singing and dancers dancing...outside the royal home of the minister

asya join them...

asya see some people they ask whose side are you people

zoya : boy's side boy's frnd

asad : gals side gal's frnd

The security giving weird looks: but tum log tho commoners lagthe ho

I mean tum logo ke clothes tho commoners ke hain

Asad : ahh well hum

Zoya : ahh hum inn royals ke common frnds hain I mean we used to work for them earlier ab nahi karthe hain

Security gaurds : teek hain but tum logo ke chaan been tho karna padega

They check them weather they have any weapons or not and allow them

They enter as soon as they enter they see beautiful clothes given as gift to the bride lying down near the podium...They both see and smirk

Within moments they change clothes in different rooms..coz the royal home is filled with royal guests

and join some others with the singing

The gaurds gets confused about which way they have gone .. so they split into all 3 directions

Some of them go straight and see one of the king's minister's daughter's sangeet celebration

See people dancing ,singing

And see all in beautiful clothes

So they lose asya again

Zoya dancing along with them.. jallah mera ashiq ha walla mera balma hain jallah

Tanveer ayan were also dancing there and they spot asad...

Tanu seeing asad whistles

Asad sees tanu

Tanu smiles, and thank god asad tum mil gaye

Ayan : asad tum
asad : haan main he grins and all 4 get relieved and they grop hug each other

Zoya sees them in amaze...

Asad : Meet my frnds princess

She is tanu..

He is ayan

Showing them to her

Zoya : oh tho choro ka gang bhi hain..(the thief also has a gang)

Ayan and tanu say togther : wht ?? a princess..??

Ayan :??

Tanu ??

Zoya : well haan main Narnia ki ek lauti princess and forwards her hand

Tanu : gives her hand in a shock before she could give... ayan gives and shakes hands with her

Zoya giggles..

Aayan : well haider humaira rehan imraan sheri gaav main honge hum sabko wohi milege

According to this map hume waha pounchna hain

Hum sab wohi chalte hain...

Tanu : yep asad

Zoya : listen guys tum sab muje ghar chodoge I am in trouble..this is elderado this kindom hates narnia...

So I need to go back to my palace will u guys help me out...

Tanu : so the princess in trouble haan ...but what do we get in return ?? coz you belong to the royals and" we hate royal blooded people "

Zoya : you'll get reward for safely returning me back... what ?? in a shock why do you hate a royal blood ?

Asad : tanu just keep quiet will you...and delete the "we"

Tanu : asad why should I ??

Asad : Ahh princess don't mind her pushing tanu aside..she only talks rubbish...

Ayan : yes she is sunky and crack

Zoya :enough guys I really wanna know why she hates the royals ??

Tanu : well since you really wanna know about my hatred towards the royals then I would like to say that the

first person I hate would be your father ?? coz he has killed my parents

Zoya : gets shocked and sees her with disbelief

Tanu : Not just mine but he has killed humaira's parents too, she is one of our frnds..and many others

Zoya : But why did he do that zoya's voice shrinking??

Tanu : coz he wanted double tax from all the poor people

And my parents could not afford that, so he killed them ruthlessly

He is a shrewd cold hearted ruler...he only cared about extending the empire

And only went on wars killing so many narnian soldiers

Making their children orpan

He always made differences between rich and the poor...

He took no taxes from the rich class be it his minsters or

Any priest class

But took taxes from the poor like us

Making us even more poor

Made the poor work on his new constructions

Made them work like dogs and he even cuts the hands of some people who do magnificiant

Structures...so that again no one is able to do the same

His sword is filled with the blood bath of innocents ...

And I hate him till death even hate his family..and youre one of them

Zoya's eyes starts watering... her voice breaking and says I don't believe you

Asad sees that and says stop it now tanveer..even I hate the king

But That doesn't mean we hurt the princess...I mean just becoz the king is like that does not mean his daughter will be the same

Zoya : I don't believe none of you guys...

Tanu : well if you don't believe us..then atleast you can believe the narnian innocent poor people

And why is this city Elderado "The city of gold" Is narnian enemy??

Zoya : Furiously Coz every kingdom has enemies

Tanu : laughs coz Narnia has looted from this kingdom several times..your father only knows to fill his treasure chest

Asad : grabs tanu's mouth tighly and says shut up...

Zoya : its ok, All she is doing is speaking out her heart venting her frustration..i mean though I dont deserve all this backlash

I am sure some misunderstanding as taken place

I am sure father is not that bad

And I don't know anything about this

Coz I was not handling the administrative activities

Come on I just turned 18 this month

I am just naive to all this ...she starts to well up..

Asad : leaving tanu's mouth which he had caught for her to shut.. says I trust you princess plz stop crying pearls

I mean each droplet of your tears are worth a peral..

Tanu crossing her arms seeing asad in disbelief

Ayan : yeah even I trust you princess

Tanu seeing asad and ayan grabs them to the corner...

And starts whispering to their ears ..She is a royal blood and I don't trust her

And I know u guys very well..

Seeing a pretty face crying

you guys thought awww she is so innocent bichari nah

Stop buttering the princess she should know how much we the narnian people hate the narnian ruler...

asad : come to the point..And stop showing venom to the poor gal..I mean her eyes speaks of her innocence

And I am sure she is not like the king..yes bit gussewali hain thodi nakchadi bhi..but dil ki buri nahi hain..and stop being a bitch and understand the situation..she is feeling difficult to digest the fact that her father can be ruthless..i mean she is her father's only daughter

How can she believe all this ...all of a sudden..

Ayan : tanu wht the hell... yeh soch ki agar hum usse acche se ghar pouncha dege tho hume badiya reward milega worth millions..humari life set hain

Tanu : tum log yeh bhool rahe ho ki ...

ussi badshaah ke wajese humari kismet main garibi aayi hain...hume kabhi kabar kude se khana padtha tha..( you guys forget that sometimes we had to eat from the garbage)

Hum sab kiss majburi ke saath jee rahe hain.. yeh woh ladki kya jane

hume chori tak karna pada

bass mere khoon kholta hain inn bade logo ko dekkar

Asad whispering to ayan : lagtha hain billi ka dimag satakgayi hain

Ayan : haan pura ka pura..

Asad : waise dimag hain bhi..

Tanu : asad ayan ...grr.you guys are getting on my nerves.

Scene shifting to elderado palace...

The soldiers return to the palace dejected and present themselves to the wrath of the king

The kings court scene (badshaah ka darbar)

King suleman enters... all stand up and bow

He sits on his throne

Queen dilshaad also makes her presense all the ministers bow in repect

King suleman : no matter what I want the narnian princess infront of my court alive

Queen dilshaad :I guess we need to forget this enemity and move on

Suleman : kabhi nahi yeh nafrath kabhi nahi mitega waqt ke saath aur gehra ho gaya hain

And says the soldiers to move to the borders of elderado and be there only..

Suleman : humari dushman yaha tak aa tho gayi..par jaana muskil hoga

And moves to his room

Queen dilshad moves behind him...

King sulemain sees dilshad behind

Dilshaad :initiating to speak... bass kijiye uss ladki se nafrath kyon woh tho humari bacchi najma ki tarah hain

King suleman hum bhool nahi saktha tumare saath jo huva ..aur jiss raaz ko tumne bhi muje der se bataya...

The pain is evident in his eyes...

Ps :guys its not proofread so ignore my mistakes

And don't create controversy regarding tht one line song jallah wallah

ki iss thief princess wali kahani main jallah song kaise fit huva and blah blah

Its fiction story and my creation so I give some modern touch to it...so don't mind guys

Next update again depends on me... hehe🤣

Hey nikki🤗
Awesome update yaar👍🏼
Asya fight is so cute
Oh king itna bura hai kya😲 tanu hate him sho much
Aww ayaan asad trust her nice
Continue soon😊