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Abi

@-ABI-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

Interesting Prologue
BRING IT ON

Edited by -ABI- - 10 years ago

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ChipChipiBhaalu

@OriginalJuhi_04

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Posted: 10 years ago

#22

Awesome Start Ashi👏😊

I really can't get wats happening in d story😕

1st I read in between n thought dat Zoya is a cheater n evil woman. Then I read again n it luks like Asad used her. I will have to wait for Part 1 to understand it properly.

Zoya is right in her place as no one can tolerate someone using them

Still, I feel dat Asad actually loved her but did sumthn which is making Zoya think dat he used her. Lets see how Asad makes up for his mistakes.

Update soon n PM me😃

Is dis d same story which u, Heenu n AsYaManeet(dunno her real name) planned to write 2gthr a story in which girls r treated like commodities?

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Mayur Chan

@MayurChan

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: ashiii333
special res for my Personal Dr who was bzy in hosp.🤗


res for bf (my forgotten bf)😆


res for bestie, affu, choto, aroo, aishu, amu, anopama, hena, adi, srash, aishu, ridhi, gowtu, asif, mayur, or sorry koi reh gaya to😳

Salaam Ashiii..
Thanx for the PM...& the Spot*...
Well a new story from You...well Iam excited as well as cautious ki Now how you will take class of our AsYa*...in a way it is your style of writing ...and I like it..
AsYa* are happily married for 6 months..both loving eachother...like their Zaroorat' and Zidd' but wants to be each others Zindagi*...will look forward to it...how this will happen...
From the looks of it...AsYa marriage was an business arrangement... but both fell in love...and now only Zoya came to know aout it...and their happy nest is scattered...
How will they reconcile...?
Interesting start..
Continue soonish...

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Gulaabo

@Gulaabo

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#24

i am here!!!!
reading u for the first time...and so sweeet of u to include me in ur friends

prologue was awesome...from love n longing to anger n hurt! what was all this??

curious to know the reason...

loved the song too!!!

and yes! thoughtful title!

cont soon

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muskaan17rocks

@muskaan17rocks

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#25

Amazing at the same time very confusing

would love to read more

please continue soon 😊

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ASYAaishu

@ASYAaishu

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#26

love it dear.. quite intresting path..

but i'm confused. May be, next update would sort out it,...i'm really looking forward to this new ss...

keep writing and update soon...

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Ajuzangel

@Ajuzangel

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#27

Hi dear
Love to see u back
The story concept is so amazing
So asya are already married and loved each other alot
How zoya became his zaroorat first
Then may be after sumtime they love each other
Who is on the call that zoya change in seconds
Love the last dailogue of asad
So many questions
U have to update soon dear
U start such an amazing story and its just prologue
Love the prologueand poetry so much
Thanks for pm
Pm me of ur all next updates
Update soon