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minnie2308

@minnie2308

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: khushbloom
Wow. Loved it.
All the scenes were nice.
Continue soon.

thanks for liking Khushbloom.

this is an OS and I plan to end it here.

I make a huge mess with longer write-ups.

once again thanks for dropping by😊

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Anisa

@AnnzSageflower7

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#52

Minnie, you have a hidden talent you've been hiding from all of us...

Bring it out more my friend! This was awesome!

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chicksoup

@chicksoup

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: sageflower7
Minnie, you have a hidden talent you've been hiding from all of us...
Bring it out more my friend! This was awesome!

Second that!👏

I loved it. Especially the way you have trivialised the slap.😆 ..Rather..he has not taken offence- and bringing the whole dhaba history just makes all this a continuation of JJ Vs Miss Dhaabewaali...Its payback time.😉

Oh! Couldn't help this thought- Why didn't U end it with another slap?🤣

Ha! Poor Ahil. He seems to be reminding her of the worst memories.

Also the eye contact and Jannat's monologue in the car- 👏

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minnie2308

@minnie2308

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: JShukla

this is good read.. I had not read that earlier one too...

read all 3.

You sure do well with putting a lot of info in a small paragraphs. Not many can do that.

👏

thanks J... I actually make a mess of longer writings. so just stick to one shot kind of stuff. glad you liked it.

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minnie2308

@minnie2308

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: Junoon-e-SaHil
Huh?!!! 😲😕 That's...IT?! No! You can't end it there! There's no 2nd part to it too, coz its an OS! 😭

Well, okay. Anyway, on to the piece, I am satisfied with what I have 😉😆

You write so well! Love your writing style, Minnie! The fluency is so good, and its a pleasure to read. Haha. homecoming party by Witch 😆 That's funny!

Lol at Jannat, She is still bothered about the Nawab and calls him a "sexy and droolworthy pervert"😆 What an irony?! 😆😆 Loved her thoughts! And she thinks Witch always has a bedroom voice 😆

Also, ARI and his cheek rubbing and smiling ruefully! Loved that part!

And I was so excited when she remembered the Dhaba is hers and he burnt it. Wanted to see the return of Dhabevaali! But thats okay! I think this ending is complete in its own way...😳

Brilliant story! Hope you keep writing more! 😛

Pragya, its so heart warming to read your comment...always. like you write directly from your heart. I love your writings too dearie..

yeah.. homecoming party.

but I am sad no one noted the subtle snub ... 'I am Sanam' to someone. 😆 I was itching to write something , but I decided that to ignore is to punish sometimes😉...

dhabevaali has returned and like us Aahil would anyday take his angry abusive dhabevaali over vacant bhashaning Jannat.

Also I feel what Aahil did with Sanam's dhaba was his most cruel deed. I have moved past it and so has Sanam, but somehow, I feel Aahil would like to bear the brunt of some of that pent up anger in her. even welcome it.

thanks for commenting,... As you can see I get carried away while replying back to you.

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minnie2308

@minnie2308

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: sageflower7
Minnie, you have a hidden talent you've been hiding from all of us...

Bring it out more my friend! This was awesome!

thanks Sagey. LOL I have no hidden talent.

this is all I've got😆😉

thanks for appreciating

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minnie2308

@minnie2308

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: chicksoup

Second that!👏

I loved it. Especially the way you have trivialised the slap.😆 ..Rather..he has not taken offence- and bringing the whole dhaba history just makes all this a continuation of JJ Vs Miss Dhaabewaali...Its payback time.😉

Oh! Couldn't help this thought- Why didn't U end it with another slap?🤣

Ha! Poor Ahil. He seems to be reminding her of the worst memories.

Also the eye contact and Jannat's monologue in the car- 👏

, in his current state, Aahil is welcoming any contact with Sanam, even as a slap.😆 Somehow I felt Aahil would want to hear her rant, hear out what she felt after he burned her dhaba... It was his cruelest deed

He'd want her to let it all out. Something a normal Sanam would never do.

Off course we will not have all this in the actual episodes, because it is more important to watch Sir Juda's aesthetically challenged rings ...

As they say, filter out the crap so that just bliss is left to cherish.

thanks for commenting and appreciating

Edited by minnie2308 - 10 years ago

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minnie2308

@minnie2308

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: Raingoddess
Great job :)

😃

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sahil333

@sahil333

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#59

😆

This OS is Brilliant. Love how her dhaba brought her memory back. She was a very proud owner of one once upon a time.

Their eye contact through the rearview mirror brought me back to the time when he was so jealous of Rehan and they were going to visit the dhargah. Very touching was that scene, especially the gesture when Aahil wanted to touch her via the mirror. I actually thought she would remeber that moment.

WHAT!!! Shaad thought the dhaba is not hygenic enough!? Why didn't you let Sanam gave him a smack on his face. Now, THAT would be an awesome payback time for her fake husband.

Love the ending, perplexed and flabbergasted!!! How awesome was that huh!!!! 😆 . I could imagine their faces!😆

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minnie2308

@minnie2308

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#60

Originally posted by: sahil333
😆

This OS is Brilliant. Love how her dhaba brought her memory back. She was a very proud owner of one once upon a time.

yeah

Their eye contact through the rearview mirror brought me back to the time when he was so jealous of Rehan and they were going to visit the dhargah. Very touching was that scene, especially the gesture when Aahil wanted to touch her via the mirror. I actually thought she would remeber that moment.

WHAT!!! Shaad thought the dhaba is not hygenic enough!? Why didn't you let Sanam gave him a smack on his face. Now, THAT would be an awesome payback time for her fake husband.

Love the ending, perplexed and flabbergasted!!! How awesome was that huh!!!! 😆 . I could imagine their faces!😆

thanks for liking.

don't we all adore her pride and independence.

I too thought of that scene about rearview mirror. but somehow wanted the focus to remain on the dhaba,.

atleast in my story I can make Shad look like a jerk😆

thanks for liking... once again😳

Edited by minnie2308 - 10 years ago