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Posted: 10 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: NanduVijay

Nice update. But I really wanted Aahil to pacify an upset Sanam and few Sahil moments.

Can u please continue this os with some Sahil moments.

Umm.Let's say I am just sick of Aahil trying to pacify everyone. Let Sanam do it ...
You guessed it, I hate the shad tribute in last episode. the taste is still acrid in my mouth..
this OS is over as I do not know where it goes from here. Maybe the couple makes out and then they have the huge dinner, that Sanam has laid out and then go have a romantic swiss honeymoon, maybe..😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: sahil333

Wow! I had missed part 1 back then. Awesome 1st chapter.

"A single red rose accompanied a note Happy Anniversary Aahil. Love you and don't skip your lunch'. "
That was our Sanam and reading this I realised I still miss her so much. I don't know, but it got me emotional. She wasn't angry at all?
Part 2:
Wonderful chapter. She knows Aahil best that's why she still wasn't angry at him.
I still miss SaHil so much. 😔🤗

Frankly forgetting anniversary according to me is not a huge offense. Aahil was a workaholic always and I would trust him to forget such finer life occasions. He'd trust his Sanam to remember it all for him . though it does not make his love any less.
Also this is after she is back from Pak adventure. So I am sure she realizes forgetting is not such a big deal😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: JShukla

this is good Minnie.

Except that I wanted Aahil(my fav) to do a little more. ... than drive, curse and watch Sanam's hot show😉
But I realize this is your tribute to Sanam (your fav)who even though alive physically is actually dead in essense on the show.
The dance was simply hot. 😲 I never thought a full - on OS can be dedicated to just dance👏
thanks...

yeah... MY SANAM IS DEAD on the show. She wouldn't dream of another man ..so there...
I am glad you liked the dance. this OS was the toughest one to write. I hope you could visualize what I was trying to depict through my words😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#74
thanks dear😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#75
Read them all last night in one sitting! You were def able to bring out essence of our old Ms.Dhabewali and our JJ's late night swim sessions ... Loved it! 👏
SaHil may have ended but that does not stop our imagination.. keep on writing!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: Booteefool

Read them all last night in one sitting! You were def able to bring out essence of our old Ms.Dhabewali and our JJ's late night swim sessions ... Loved it! 👏
SaHil may have ended but that does not stop our imagination.. keep on writing!

thanks dear..
Yes the imaginations does not stop.
I was never a fan fic writer at all. In fact I never write for anyone😆 except Sahil.
So, I am in effect a novice.😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Oh my! 😲 This is umm okay, quite unexpected...😆
To be honest, like all others I thought Aahil would do some work and manao his Begum and stuff..😆

But this is Good man! This is so good! OMG! The dance! That was something man! Hell, it sounded so sexy, wonder how Aahil Miyan controlled himself, watching her all the moves like that..so sexy indeed!

And the description of how he was watching and how those moves were, so amazing Minnie! That was just wonderful! I read the first part quite earlier, then thought to reply after the 2nd one, but then I forgot to read 2nd I guess, So now read it. And wow girl! Brilliant work! 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
#78
I decided to write this one down. this was not even planned , but I just wrote coz I wanted a Sahil happily ever after.
Although 16+ stuff is not my forte, I still did. Also if you are below 16 years of age I would recommend not reading it.
--------------Happy Anniversary Aahil Part 3---------------------------

"Sanam..Darling that was gorgeous.. I loved how you moved" and whispered close to her ears "...and how some specific parts of your body moved too..."

"Thanks for your wishes. And Happy anniversary to you too ,..Aahil" Sanam pouted grumpily, moving away from him in feigned anger, suddenly remembering he had forgotten their special day.

Aahil sighed "Remembering dates isn't my core competency honey. "

"Then what is... " Sanam could not complete her sentence as her words got drowned in Aahil's affectionate kiss. His lips moved slowly and caressingly over hers. His tongue massaging her inner mouth. The love in his sweet actions made her toes curl in pleasure.

Sliding down her pallu he traced his index finger on the plunging neckline of her blouse.

Sanam fidgeted uncomfortably.

Thankfully the remote was within reach, Ahil thought.Still kissing her he reached for remote and waited a second for the click sound of door closing. None came and he reluctantly parted from her to to check.

The door was still wide open and he turned back to look at Sanam in mild mock anger!

"Huh.. What? You can forget our anniversary and I cannot even forget to change the dead batteries of the remote. And yeah, you are not getting any action this whole month!" Sanam fixed her saree pallu back in place in slow deliberate motion.

"Let's see ... Anyways there's no one at home.. but just so that you feel comfortable..." Aahil closed the door and was back to swiftly dump her on bed before joining her in.

"Aahil.. wait... I need to tell you that for dinner, ... I have... "

"For dinner I begin with dessert" he swooped down on her lips again while his hands caressed and undressed her. He felt amused that at this time, she'd be discussing dinner menu.

A few minutes and moans later Aahil gently moved over her and looked into her eyes, almost informing her silently of his next move...

Sanam looked back and muttered with a raspy voice" All yours ...Aahil"

As he started to move slowly in her, they were interrupted with a loud hoarse voice of a teen " Mom...Dad.." followed by other voices of people young and old flooding into their dining hall.

Aahil was so taken by surprise that he fell in a dead weight over Sanam almost crushing her under him.

Sanam groaned in a muffled voice "move away terminator... my old spine can't take your heavy weight"

"Excuse me madam, you weren't complaining a few seconds ago"

The voices below were getting louder and from what Aahil could make out they were checking out the dishes. Mostly familiar voices.

He got no chance to ponder anymore as Sanam scooted away from underneath him before he could catch her!

"Quick Aahil.. get dressed before they break the damn door and catch us with our pants down" she giggled at her own silly joke as Aahil looked on frustratedly.

"I was trying to tell you that I had called everyone over for this week . I called them at dinner time hoping we would have dealt with our love making before they arrive.. but off course YOU had come LATE..." she accusingly ranted at a shamefaced Aahil.

He gestured at himself. "I can't go around like this"!
Sanam checked him out approvingly and chuckled."Fix it with a cold shower. "
She tossed her hair with a shrug and moved away to bring out their ensembles for the party tonight.

Aahil decided to look away. He needed to cure his condition' not make it worse. Sure it was 20 years into the marriage. Sure she was mother of 2 teens ... but this has only added to her voluptuousness. Even now with his back to her just imagining this now buxom beauty moving in their bedroom without a stitch on was worsening his 'condition'.

He moved to the bathroom grumpily pitying himself and promising retribution loudly to Sanam.

When he came back, she was dressed in lovely red saree. Looking every bit like a queen.

He gaped adoringly.

"Not bad Nawab Saab" Sanam caressed the tiny salt and pepper spot near his ears. Ahil had worn solid black pathani suit with just a hint of sequin near collar and cuff and looked very fetching.

They held their hands and were admiring each other when there was an interrupting loud knock on the door "How many more rounds before you can come out" Seher screamed.

Swearing loudly Aahil opened the door to shout her down when she totally ignored him and hugged her twin behind him "Happy 20th anniversary Sanam"

She looked around the messy room and gave a look of mock mortification to Aahil... "don't want the kids to come and see this ..."

They came down hand in hand smiling at their family below..

Their twin 18 year old sons had come on a week's leave from hostel. they looked so much like Aahil (imagine Dhruv;-)). Seher and her daughter Rehanna, who looked so much like her biological grandmom (Dad's mother ;-)) , Haya , Rahat and their 3 kids, Nazia, Shazia, their spouses and kids, and friends of these kids had gathered around the dining table checking the various dishes on table and the huge Apple pie that sat proudly in the middle

And so they had a fun filled clumsy anniversary with friends, family, food and possibly a late night f**k after they could manage to get into the privacy of their room possibly at midnight?

The End

Edited by minnie2308 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#79
What a nice update this is. Thank God SaHil have twin boys, that was a nice surprise. I'm tired of daughters and their lookalikes 😆
After all those years SaHil are still so much in love with each other and oh so hot.

Happy anniversary SaHil 🥳

Junoon Tere Ishq Ka ❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
#80
How sweet imagining Salil living their lives decades later. Happy. Still in love and lust. Surrounded by family. And of course the side of passion was just as fun to read. 👍🏼

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