#2 Asya ff unique love part 18-23 *thread links in the index* @ pg 1

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Ranjani

@Gouri_Joshi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#691

Wonderful sue

Poor zoya

She suffered a lot

Who wants to harm zoya

update soon

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Niki.

@Niki.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#692

hey Nikki..
is this my dialogue??
<div></div>haan binnu I just felt lik rofling at ur story...peeps calling u bindi..bindi matlab sticker😲
if you want to call me in that name...
then I have no problems 😉 nahh I would call u binuu only 😳😉

Edited by nikii11 - 10 years ago

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Niki.

@Niki.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#693

oh man this story is heartwrenching😭

eric revealing zoe past...😭

eric first was in bad co.😲.. well I hate ragging.. senior junir stuffs...

nd the seniors told eric to kiss zoe ..nd eric held her hand forecefully

and lara ka thappad😆

next morning again dad se thappad lol😆

nd then he left the bad co..⭐️

ohh so zoe stayed in tht home

nd thought him subjects⭐️

eric seems to have some teenage crush on zoe lol

eric cant name their relationship

but aak hai na...he named it as bhai behen..lol tht was cute😳

nd aftr tht uncle gary nd tht eric's father split

she named the branch as zohad

zoe shifted to her new house

nd insisted eric to stay over

but he had his plans

nd fir uncle gary rapes zoya...😲😡🤬

disgusting cheap monstor🤬

wanna murder him 😡🤬 beep beep🤬

but wanna know zoe side also her pov..coz this is eric's pov...

hmm kon ho sakta hai behind this...🤔🤔❓

interesting continue pretty fast hehe⭐️

Edited by nikii11 - 10 years ago

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Annie

@_Annie_

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Posted: 10 years ago

#694

It was a heart-breaking part Sue, but an extremely well written one! :)

Update soon :)

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Nav

@kabhi_asya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#695

Goddd... Zoya was raped...

Eric hold himself responsible...

The the whole scene..the way Eric explained and asad listened... He did act maturely.

So dilshaad also Knw..but zoya is unaware that everyone knows...

How she will feel ... How will asad control himself in front of her...

Brilliant update...very well written..

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Suganti Kularaju

@suganti

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Posted: 10 years ago

#696

hi,was having exams yaar..tats why seldom come here.

coming to the update..

it was awesome as usual.👍🏼

zoya's past was so painful😭

that gary is such a 🤬..can't believe that he raped her😡

hope asad will do something about this guy.

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jas91

@jas91

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Posted: 10 years ago

#697

i m late again but this time wid choice

as i said i didn't wanna read this part

chahe u made it as short as possible but jo nahi hona tha woh hua toh na🥺

aur han i know twist change nahi kar ssakti thi cuz that will affect d story but attempt 2 rape kar deti toh bhi saame impact hota na Zoe pe

that would have shook her d same & d distance & distrust will b still there

but u went ahead wid rape & i must say i hated it cuz i feel disgusted listening or reading about it

mera guess sahi tha but i so wished u would have changed to attempt 2 rape

khair yes this is very sensitive & real topic what's happening these days but still this is bitter topic 4 me😵

& yes i read u will write Zoya version of d story later plz mujhe PM kar dena cuz i don't wanna read that 4 sure😆

rest part was very nicely penned👏

Eric was very nice frnd Dillu also got 2 know

& Asad's breakdown & hesitancy 2 meet Zoe was believable

PS- i know its stupid qstn i know 5 saal beet gaye but still i thought Zoya ka chori chori Asad ko dekhna in pool & desiring him was confusing i think jo reaction rinki aunty ke bachon wale comnt baad the were more apt than them. cuz jab tak Asad se she is not assured woh usse dar se baahar kaise aa sakti😕 bola tha na stupid qstn hai😆😆

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surbhi

@suearmaniac

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Posted: 10 years ago

#698

Originally posted by: binuuu
Eric told asad everything...
its very good asad understood about zoya's past..
poor girl...
waiting to see zoya's POV..and asya after this incident..
nice chapter sue...
continue soon..

thanku so much binshi🤗
everytym i see a new member on the first spot
nd it feels happy u guys r eager to reaad😃😃
congo ur first😆
nd yeah zoya ka pov bhi aage aayega...but not sure when
keep track😊

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surbhi

@suearmaniac

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Posted: 10 years ago

#699

Originally posted by: -simmi-
R

simmo unres soonish...itna tym ho gaya

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surbhi

@suearmaniac

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Posted: 10 years ago

#700

Originally posted by: shailu123
Hey sue awesome update yaar eric is really a kid but my poor zoya 😭 i want to know her Pov's also hope asad will bring her back continue soon😊

hey shailu meri jaan😆
thanku shanku🤗
yes they'll be at home soon😊
zoya ka pov in the coming chappys 4 sure😃