#Asya ff- Unwanted *New story*

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-shruthi-

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Posted: 10 years ago

i really love writing story. Especially when its asya i love doing experiment.
Here, i am presenting you a new concept which is little socialist in a way. But the major portion is romance and drama.
I am aware that i have few story un in line to finish and i take responsibility to finish it.
Now for this. I again need your all support. I understand that this story initially is from commencing time , the root type i say. But in 2 parts we will have asya and adventure of high and lows.
Its actually a novel with pain sorrow , reality, and love. I need much patients for this.
Those who feel reel is better than real. I can completely understand them and wont force to read it. For them i shall complete the commercial script as soon as possible.
I am sure. I will get plenty of support here. Once again!

Love you all.
And thanks in advance.

PLEASE NOTE THE DIALOGUES ARE IN HINDI AND URDU. PLEASE LET ME KNOW IF YOU DON'T UNDERSTAND ANYTHING.

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-shruthi-

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Posted: 10 years ago

ALLOW ME TO SERVE THE STARTER. THE MAIN COURSE WILL ARRIVE SOON. 😃

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This place is full of guest today. Everyone in this room is either praying to allah or anticipating for the moment of his arriving. Only gaffur had known how much he had prayed to allah for his baby boy. zeenat, his wife is currently into labour pain. soon she will deliver the news and he will get the best news of life. He is going to hold his baby boy, love him. give him all the happiness of life. Make his all dreams come true. Gaffur thinks about all those efforts and prayers which he had put to beg allah for a son. He stands with the help of the wall with his head low to chest. He crosses his hand and passes continuous prayers to allah.
The soft sound of crying comes echoes the entire hallway. Everyone turns their head waiting in anticipation to get the door open and confirm what they all were already thinking.
"allah, tera lakh lakh shukriya. Tune meri dua qubool ki." He brings a finger below his eyes to wipe his tears. Just then the door opens and comes a nurse worn in plain white . she comes and stands in center of everyone. She scans the room looking at every curious face that are searching for the face of baby's father. Then her eyes goes to the only man who has fresh tears welling up in eyes and yet he has a smile on face. He is gaffur siddique , the new borns father.
"Mubarak ho siddique sahib! Apke ghar allah ne rehmat bheji hai. Apke ghar chamkane ke liye khushi innayat ki hai. Apki jholli me allah tala ne ladki di hai." The smile on everyone's face starts to fade away. The environment that once were chanting holly prayer now started to curse the decision of allah. The man who was standing with his breathe hold, he too lost the fate and falls on the wall.
The minutes passes by zeenat comes to consciousness. She looks to her side and finds her baby sleeping beside her.
She looks here and there but finds no relative on sight. Where are those people who had come for her gone?
The door opens again and the nurse comes back to zeenat after sharing the new born news. She looked concerned and disturbed . as soon as her eyes meet zeenat's she swallows and quickly turns her eyes in other direction.
"suniye. Mere parivar wale bahar honge. Iske abu bhi honge wahi. Kya ap unhe ander bula lengi?" zeenat looks at her baby and then smilingly stares back to door.
Nurse finds bile appearing at the back of her throat. She fidgets with her finger and looks here and there. how could she share the piece of fact that took place out of this room?
"buliye na unhe?" she requests again.
"koi nahi hai bahar. Sab chale gaye." Nurse hungs up her head and slowly nods in no.
"what? nahi apne theek se nahi dekha hoga. Wo wohi honge. Ek bar bula dijiye." Zeenat starts to feel annoyed of nurse response so she herself decides to call them in.
But after taking names for a while when no one showed up. Realization starts to drawn upon her. she feels her head spinning there were many questions and answers could be gain only from one person as if now. sister.
"kya hua yaha?" she asks.
"wok hush nahi the. They left as soon as I informed him about you giving birth to a baby girl...

"Jiski khatir adhure rahe..
Usine hume tanha kr diya..
Ofsos ye na tha ke saza mili..
Khata bhi na maloom thi bas yahi uns reh gaya."

Edited by -shruthi- - 10 years ago

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princess101

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Posted: 10 years ago

RESSS

P.S IM BACKKK FINALLY HEHEHEHE😃

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nilusoni

@nilusoni

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Posted: 10 years ago

Interesting concept

Excited for updates

Thanksfor pm

Plz pm me for updates

Continuesoon

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Chahat Doshi

@Chahat_A_Doshi

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Posted: 10 years ago

Starter se pet nahi bharta

Main course please jaldi serve kijiye

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A.S.K

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Posted: 10 years ago

nice concept shruti. but I am not following any stories properly sorry :(...
and I don't like to read realities.

Edited by Persiko - 10 years ago

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Shaila Banu

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Posted: 10 years ago

Hey shruti its so interesting plz continue soon 😊

Edited by shailu123 - 10 years ago

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Abi

@-ABI-

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Posted: 10 years ago

Interesting Start

Do Continiue

count me in

Edited by -ABI- - 10 years ago

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ayat

@ayat20

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Posted: 10 years ago

Nice concept

Seems to be interesting

Continue soon n plzz pm me

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-shruthi-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#10

Originally posted by: princess101
RESSS
P.S IM BACKKK FINALLY HEHEHEHE😃

happy to see you sis...🤗

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