New ASYA SS : A Deal Close To Her Heart! PART 11 - PAGE 103 ~ 19/03/16

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Posted: 10 years ago

#401

Originally posted by: kabhi_asya
Wonderful update...
Totally love it...
They are so hot and sexy together...
Never leaving one another...
The emotional bond is building... And very strong one..
Asad's past was revealed... Sad part..
Now...it's zoya's turn...
Both are brused by a brutal past..and
They will become each other's strength for future...
It is an amazing story... Update soon..

Hey ,

Thank you so much, glad you enjoued it! 😃

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Posted: 10 years ago

#402

Originally posted by: ikhlass
Ouch, it must be very traumatic to see one of his parents in a compromising position... I can easily understand Asad's anger. Zoya seems to have a dark past too... Loved the progression of their relationship, both are building a relation based on trust.

Very good update !

Hey,

Yes, highly traumatic!

Thankyou so much. Glad you liked it! 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

#403

Originally posted by: NaughtyRiya
awesome update
like it
thanks for pm

Originally posted by: NaughtyRiya
continue soon...

Hey Riya,

Thank you so much! 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

#404

Originally posted by: MayurChan
Very Good and well written part..Chandini.
For a 11yr old to witness such a scene is horrifyingg..and can have a huge bad impact on his mind..
AsYa part was wonderful...
Next is Zoya's past..
Update it soonish..

Hey Mayur,

Thank you so much, glad you likedit! 😊

It is. It disturbs you fro life.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#405

Originally posted by: sweet_tehs

Hey chandni,

You're welcome..
Looking forward to your story..

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Posted: 10 years ago

#406

Originally posted by: don girls
interesting
like the concept
update soon

Hey,

Thank you so much! 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

#407

Originally posted by: Manyata5
So the couple is discussing their past...
Amazing yaar sachi

Hey,

Yep. Thank you so much! 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

#408

Originally posted by: sweet_tehs
Hey Mona..
Loved the update..
Loved the way it all started all happy n flirtings but went on to ne sad n intense.
I hate that man ...I don't have words.. To tell them to leave the room..
It was yucks.

Waiting to know Zoya ki kahani.

Thanks for the pm.

Hey ,

Thank you so much..

Glad you to see you come around and that too with appreciation! 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

#409

Originally posted by: jas91
This was such an intense part Mona
I mean really wonderfully penned yaar👏👏 ~~~ Thank you ! Thank you! Thank you! 😃😃
u definitely needed time 2 write this😊 ~~~~ Sachi bolu toh, it took me 2 days or so! Pehle uske likha nahi tha kuch bhi ecept a parah or so 😆 *runs and hides somewhere*
The starting was lovely
Asya were super hot ☺️☺️
not getting enough of each other & still thinking about baby
than came their playful side when they were clicking pix
wanting to know more about themselves
haye when Asad called Zoe his babies mommy😳😆 ~~~ Yep, that was such a sweet-cute thing to say no! 😳
& than d seriousness just blown it away
Asad's past was really horrible it must have been heart shattering 4 him & Dillu
that pathetic man was a bloody bas***d🤬
Asad ka gussa was justified & i could imagine that scene. This Asad was scary😵
he thought Zoya didn't have a past but now she will share her past hope it wont b very painful
~~~ Yes! And her part too is pretty devastating!