New ASYA SS : A Deal Close To Her Heart! PART 11 - PAGE 103 ~ 19/03/16

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Shadowblue20

@Shadowblue20

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Posted: 10 years ago

#391

cannot wait for next update...
plz update soon i really want to know abouy zoya's past..

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anopama

@anopama

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Posted: 10 years ago

#392

Quiet a lovely update

It started off with the love romance

Well love in baby making love in they don't know it is there yet

All day they did making sure a baby would be conceived

So now learning abt each other to know what traits their child will have

I love when she said my baby he said our baby

And how he called her his baby mommy

So he shared his horrific past with her

Omg what a gruesome story it was the audacity for tht man

No wonder asad can't say father or abbu

It was horrible and his wife and child had to see tht and he didn't stop

He finished what he was doing 😡

So now he was walking away and she said she has a horrible past too

One tht has left her broken

So both their past make them don't want to be in relationships

But them together can heal each other

Continue soon

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A.S.K

@ToughStuff

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#393

Beautifully written!!
Loved it ...
time for Zoya's past

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Aishwarya

@pumpkin.honey

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#394

Long time.. I finally got a moment to spare to read dis fav story of mine
Wonderful update.. So Asad's past revealed. Can't believe his father was such a sick man.. And zoya's too!!! Waiting.. Update soon ;)

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Chandnii.

@Chandnii.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#395

Originally posted by: ChocoBerry
Me here 😉😆

Hey Mona, I loved loved loved the update. It had so many elements and emotions making it a well balanced update.

Loved how it began with romance 😳 and then highlighted the reason behind them not believing in relationships. Asad's anger, as if rolling off him, uff made me scared of him too. And I really don't have words to express what I felt reading the sight he and his mum were greeted to followed by the audacity of thatbman to tell them to go away 😡

Beautifully done part Mona. Absolutely amazing. Am so eager to read what past Zoya has... Can't wait for the next update. Please jaldi pen it down 😃

Love you loads sweetheart 🤗

Hey Choco di,😳

Thank you so much for the appreciation!
Glad you liked this one too.

Ikr! Disgusting human being!

I'll try putting up the next part ina few days!

Love you so much! Mwah! :*

P.S: Thank you for all the help and support! ❤️

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Chandnii.

@Chandnii.

Voyager

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Posted: 10 years ago

#396

Originally posted by: -ABI-
Update

Hey Abi,

Thank you so much ! 😃

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Chandnii.

@Chandnii.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#397

Originally posted by: cutie15
This was more than awesome. .
loved their intense scenes..
they both are so involved in this..
the way zoya pacified angry asad was superb..
i'm really looking forward to zoya telling about her past .
this is getting way to interesting. .
loving it..:) thanks for updating. ..
next update sooner plsss...

Hey cutie,

Thank you so much. Glad you liked reading this one too.😃

Probably start writing today! So update in a few days! 😳

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Chandnii.

@Chandnii.

Voyager

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Posted: 10 years ago

#398

Originally posted by: nilusoni
wonderful part
asya were soo happy
their romance is hot
asya sharing their life moments and finally talking about asd's past
omg sooo sad moment
zoya is going to share her past as well
excited for next part
thanx for pm
plz pm me for next part
continue soon

Hey Nilu,

Thank you so much, glad you liked it.

Sure, Np! 😊