New ASYA SS : A Deal Close To Her Heart! PART 11 - PAGE 103 ~ 19/03/16

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ikhlass

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Posted: 10 years ago

#381

Ouch, it must be very traumatic to see one of his parents in a compromising position... I can easily understand Asad's anger. Zoya seems to have a dark past too... Loved the progression of their relationship, both are building a relation based on trust.

Very good update !

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Ankita

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Posted: 10 years ago

#382

awesome update
like it
thanks for pm

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Mayur Chan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#383

Very Good and well written part..Chandini.
For a 11yr old to witness such a scene is horrifyingg..and can have a huge bad impact on his mind..
AsYa part was wonderful...
Next is Zoya's past..
Update it soonish..

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sweet_tehs

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Posted: 10 years ago

#384

Originally posted by: mona12345

Hi sweet tehs,

For starters wou can call me Chandni! 😊
Aww, thank you so much for all those lovely adjectives! I'm glad you enjoyed reading it so far! 😳

np! 😊

Hey chandni,

You're welcome..

Looking forward to your story..

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Suzaina

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Posted: 10 years ago

#385

So the couple is discussing their past...

Amazing yaar sachi

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sweet_tehs

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Posted: 10 years ago

#386

Hey Mona..

Loved the update..

Loved the way it all started all happy n flirtings but went on to ne sad n intense.

I hate that man ...I don't have words.. To tell them to leave the room..

It was yucks.

Waiting to know Zoya ki kahani.

Thanks for the pm.

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jas91

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Posted: 10 years ago

#387

This was such an intense part Mona

I mean really wonderfully penned yaar👏👏

u definitely needed time 2 write this😊

The starting was lovely

Asya were super hot ☺️☺️

not getting enough of each other & still thinking about baby

than came their playful side when they were clicking pix

wanting to know more about themselves

haye when Asad called Zoe his babies mommy😳😆

& than d seriousness just blown it away

Asad's past was really horrible it must have been heart shattering 4 him & Dillu

that pathetic man was a bloody bas***d🤬

Asad ka gussa was justified & i could imagine that scene. This Asad was scary😵

he thought Zoya didn't have a past but now she will share her past hope it wont b very painful

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jas91

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Posted: 10 years ago

#388

Originally posted by: mona12345

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Shaila Banu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#389

Hey mona awesome update they r so sexy😳 so that is asad's past his father such😡 poor asad he witnessd such a thing 😭 now waiting for zoya's past plz continue soon😊

Edited by shailu123 - 10 years ago