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Posted: 10 years ago
#11
interesting plot...
nice writing...
please pm me when u update
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Posted: 10 years ago
#12
Ek week ho gaya

Next part?
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13
Awesome start
It's interesting
But where is asad
Excited for updates
Plz pm me for updates
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thank you everyone for liking this story and giving such lovely comments😳 I am really very sorry for not replying to your comments. Actually I am still trying to learn how to post a reply. I hope you all will forgive me. Your likes and comments really means a lot to me and I am really grateful to you all for giving this story a chance. Actually I was really nervous thinking about your reaction and that's why I didn't check the likes in fear. But when I saw the reaction I was really overwhelmed. I thought that nobody will be interested in reading more , so I didn't think about the next chapter in details though I have the rough outline of this whole story ready in my mind. I will take little time to think about the dialogues but I will definately update on this weekend. Sorry again. Thank you. You guys are the best🤗
Edited by asya7 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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CHAPTER -2
Zoya was completely shocked to see the person standing in front of her, dressed in a suit. It took her a second to come out of her shock and she managed to say-
Z-'Rehan? Is it really you?'
THE MAN- 'Well Zoya if you are seeing me then it will be me only , Not Sahrukh Khan right? Though I don't mind if you think me to be him. I guess I quite resemble him , no?
When Rehan saw Zoya still in shock ,he spoke again-
- 'come on Zoya at least give your friend a hug. I am meeting you after one year so I can demand for a hug atleast.
With this Zoya finally smiled and gave him a friendly hug. Rehan and Zoya are friends since college days. They lost their contact when Zoya moved to India and they met again one year before regarding a business deal. Rehan han't talked to Zoya from one month. So Zoya didn't has the slightest idea of his trip to India and was completely shocked to see him in front of her.
They finally broke the hug and Rehan smiled at her sheepishly.
-' I guess the surprise came to as quite a shock '.
Zoya smiled nodding her head and said 'It's not like that Rehan. It's just that I havent talked to you since last month and you also didn't told me about your visit . So it took me some times to process all this as I wasn't expecting it but honestly I am very happy that you came.
Rehan heaved a sigh of relief hearing this-' Thank god you are not angry at me. Otherwise I thought you will kick me out as soon as you will see for this little stunt of mine.'
Zoya chuckled at his statement and asked-' But seriously Rehan I thought you will be busy with your business. Then how come you managed this surprise trip from new York to Bhopal? '
R- 'I had been busy Zoya. But as soon as I gcannot a little break I decided to come and pay you a surprise visit.'
Z- 'Are you sure that this is the only reason behind your visit?' Zoya was little suspicious at his behaviour.
R- There is also a special reason which you will come to know soon but for now tell me how are you and your family? It has been really long since I last saw them.'
Z- 'We all are good Rehan. By the way why don't you come for dinner at our place tonight? I am sure they will love to meet you again.'
R- 'And I will love to accept this proposal.'
Z-'Alright then. I will see you at 7 at our place and don't be late like always.' Rehan smiled at her in response and nodded. Zoya wanted to ask him the special reason behind his visit but dropped the idea. Just then Prasad called Zoya and she excused herself. As soon as Zoya was out of sight, Rehan brought out a box from his pocket and smiled staring at its content.
- 'I know that I have always been late but today I promise you Zoya I won't be late today to confess my feelings'.

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AT THE KHAN VILLA :

IN AYRA'S ROOM:

Humehra was talking with someone on phone when Ayaan entered the room and hugged her from behind. Sensing Ayaan , Humehra told the caller to call letter and turned around facing Ayaan and wound her arms around his neck.
H- 'what is the matter ,you are so early today ?'
A-' Well you know I love my beautiful wife so much right? So I was just missing her so much and thought to come home early today.'
-'What ? You don't believe me?' Ayaan tried to act shocked and defend himself when he saw Humehra narrowing her eyes. But when she still didn't changed her expression he sighed and said ' Actually the meeting got cancelled. '
H- 'I knew it.' Saying so she huffed and turned other side crossing her hands on her chest. Ayaan silently went to her and side hugged Humehra and said' I am sorry but I was really missing you'.
Humehra finally smiled at his honest reply and rested her head on his chest. Ayaan also smiled in relief and contentment. The peace full silence was bromen by Ayaan.
A-' By the way who called you when I came back home?
H- 'It was Haidar. He was asking about all of us . Sanaya was also there.'
A- 'Oh! By the way they seriously make a really good couple. Both of them are really good souls.'
H- 'Yeah. Both of them are just perfect for each other.'
Again silence prevailed the whole room. Humehra gently asked Ayaan seeing him in deep thoughts.
H- 'What happened Ayaan? '
A-'Nothing. I was just thinking if Haider wasn't there, we might not have been together now'.
H- 'Hmm. If he didn't me understand your point of view and situation, I could never forget you.'
A- ' I know I owe him so much though I still can't forget what you guys did. You know how much it hunted me to see you two as a couple?'
H- 'You deserve it. But what is still hard for me believe is that Mr. Flirt was ready was to break his own heart with his own hand and sacrifice his love because he thought I someone else. Who knew that you could be such a romeo. It was all thanks to baji that you came to know everything in time and you confessed and we got married. Otherwise you didn't even tell me that you were planning to leave the country permanently .'
Humehra's rant brought back many memories and Ayaan was on his way to his dream land when Humehra's scream brought him back to planet earth.
H- 'Ayaan I completely forgot that Rehan Bhaijaan is coming for dinner tonight. It's already 5 and I have to help badi ammi . You please freshen up okay. Bye.'
And with that she rushed out of the room in hurry. Ayaan laughed at the antics of his crazy and cute wife and made his way to the washroom.
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PRECAP: Rehan - 'HE IS DEAD DAMN IT. HE IS NO MORE. HE HAD DIED IN THAT CRASH...'
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Hello guys . I know there wasn't much in this chapter but it was necessary to build the story. Next two chapters will be emotional and will reavel everything. After that story will move on and it will have only fun filled and liget hearted updates. I assure you that it will have a happy ending. I have left a thank you note for you all. I am trying to send pms but if I make any blander in doing so then please forgive me . Please leave your like and comments because these are the only things which inspire me to write. Thank you.

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Posted: 10 years ago
#16
Nice
Hope asad will come back soon
Plz don't let zoya accept rehan proposal under any pressure
I mean to say dillu or some others emotional blackmail
Plz update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17
amazing part
rehaan entry
i think he likes zoya
excited for asad's entry
thanx for pm
plz pm me for next part
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18
Very Nice and well written part...
Rehan is here to propose Zoya I guess.,
And Zoya is oblivious to that...
No Asad still...?
Continue soonish..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#19
Awesome start. Pls pm me when u nxt update and pls update soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20
A www I loved AyRa in this update
Hating Rehan already
I guess he's talking about Asad in the precap
I wish Asad didn't die, just went into coma or lost his memory!
So it's like he deliberately didn't not come to meet Zoya!!

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