AsYa SS: A Love Unconditional - Ch 12 Pg 121 - Page 10

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi
R u planning to update today
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sanjhari

Hi
R u planning to update today



I am proof reading it

If I get it done will definitely update

How are you
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Saima-Syed



I am proof reading it

If I get it done will definitely update

How are you


M good
Little busy with life
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey Sis,

Its sooo good to see you back with a new story and just reading the first part I know its going to be another beautiful journey with you.

I second Choco, i wonder too where you get all these brilliant ideas from? You should let us in on this ;)

The chap was beautiful though a little sad too. The way Zoe's life has been summed up made my heart go out to the poor baby who was forced to bear the harsh life on her own. I hate her parents already. How can they treat their own daughter with so much cruelty? Selfish and insensitive rich folks. They think what they've done by financing her studies is a great thing. Well they seriously need to get a reality check. Sis, u shud punish them harshly for putting Zoe in such a position and ruining her life.

Im so so proud of Zoe. Despite having faced all situations alone, she dint give up on her studies. I hope and pray that whatever she has thought for herself comes true and that Allah sends her Prince Charming her way soon to erase all sadness from within her.

Sis.. you've got to update this asap. Cant wait to see Asad. Dont leave us waiting for long.


Love you Sis.. hamesha
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rarepearl

Hey Sis,

Its sooo good to see you back with a new story and just reading the first part I know its going to be another beautiful journey with you.

I second Choco, i wonder too where you get all these brilliant ideas from? You should let us in on this ;)

The chap was beautiful though a little sad too. The way Zoe's life has been summed up made my heart go out to the poor baby who was forced to bear the harsh life on her own. I hate her parents already. How can they treat their own daughter with so much cruelty? Selfish and insensitive rich folks. They think what they've done by financing her studies is a great thing. Well they seriously need to get a reality check. Sis, u shud punish them harshly for putting Zoe in such a position and ruining her life.

Im so so proud of Zoe. Despite having faced all situations alone, she dint give up on her studies. I hope and pray that whatever she has thought for herself comes true and that Allah sends her Prince Charming her way soon to erase all sadness from within her.

Sis.. you've got to update this asap. Cant wait to see Asad. Dont leave us waiting for long.


Love you Sis.. hamesha


Love you too Nim...more than you know

Thank you so much for liking the opening chapter...her Prince Charming will definitely be coming to sweep her off her feet soon.

Lol not sure what I will do with her family have to work that one out

I was hoping to update today but got caught up with other stuff will definitely update tomorrow evening

Mwah 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey sis wonderful concept as always.. 😳
Wonder why my like button is not working 😲but m still trying..😃
Loved it to the coreee!👏!
Oww I feel bad for zoya n her anger is justified...but is there more to this matter which can't be seen? Like her parents sending her at boarding school ignoring her sounds like sumthn fishy...
Let me not get my detective mind at work 😆
Waiting for asad to sweep her off her feet😉
Do continue asap
Thanx for the pm..🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wonderful 👏
Looks awesome concept⭐️
just can't wait to read further
update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#98

Originally posted by: Saima-Syed


Thank you so much, am glad you liked it

Have to think about how to bring her family back in lol

Yes am a sucker for college romances, also because you can develop their characters as the grow up and mature

Hope you are well


I like college romance too :-) No complain! Just want a closer with her family...feel bad that things are the way they are :-(
I know you will do a great job with the story so, can't wait!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Saima-Syed



Thank you so much Sasir, can't explain what that means to me. Makes me happy to know you have so mch faith in me as a writer.

Love you lots

Lol I don't know where I get the ideas, I have loads floating in my head...you should ask ChocoBerry I start so many stories...write one chapter and the just leave them.

Am working on another as well as this but will post that once it is finished😉

Sasir...I don't know how to add my index...HELP

Lol

If you know how to add it in tell me, I tried and it didn't work




Its my pleasure di

I really don't knw abt it
But I saw some writers doing it
These days my forums r not even working properly
I can only read the stories pmed to me

Di chocoberry also added index to signature
May be she can help...

Thank u
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Saima-Syed


Thank you so much my dearest am glad you liked it.

To answer your question, if you remember I wrote in the beginning that her parents continued to send her money every month to fulfil her needs, it was with her parents money she saved that she moved to Melbourne



I thought dat she was angry wid her family n she did not wanted to use their money. So, she worked part-time for money n also her scholarship came in use. I really want Zoya's family to suffer. They put her in a boarding school which shattered her. I love how u did not showed Zoya as forgiving. How come her parent's wants to obey everything instead of realizing wat they did to her. I really don't want Zoya to ever forgive her family cuz they were very heartless n cruel to her. I have heard 4m my childhood dat boarding is a very cruel place for children where they r treated very harshly n punished severely for even d slightest mistake. Is it really so? I seem to be asking a lot but ur theme of d story is making me do it😆.
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