AsYa SS: A Love Unconditional - Ch 12 Pg 121

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Salaam All


I am back with another short story.

I really hope you like it and will support the story as much as you have always liked and supported all my other work.

Am writing this as I go along will endeavour to update weekly if not sooner.

Lots of love Always

Saima 🤗

Index

Chapter 1 - Page 1
Chapter 2 - Page 15
Chapter 3 - Page 22
Chapter 4 - Page 34
Chapter 5 - Page 47
Chapter 6 - Page 55
Chapter 7 - Page 68
Chapter 8 - Page 75
Chapter 9 - Page 90
Chapter 10 - Page 100
Chapter 11 - Page 109
Chapter 12 - Page 121

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Chapter One


Coming from one of the most wealthiest families in India Allah had blessed Zoya Farooqui with everything she had ever needed and that much more. The only thing that she craved and was still trying to find was her place in her family, the love and affection that her eldest sister and youngest brother got.

Always seen as the problem child and as someone no more than a nuisance Zoya's parents sent her away to boarding school at the age of 12. Zoya had faced years of misery, of self torture as she failed to understand why she was treated so indifferently. Everything seemed to be fine until her brother was born and then it was like as if she never existed, being the eldest child Asma was always treated as a princess who could never be wrong, and when their only son, Haider was born he became their Prince leaving no room for Zoya. As any child she wanted their attention but when it was misinterpreted as having severe behavioural problems and was sent away without a second thought.

Even though she lived hundreds of miles away from her family Zoya still had a luxury life, she was sent money every month to cover all she ever wanted or needed, the only thing that never came with the money was her family.

She would call everyday, some days she was lucky she would get a chance to speak to someone and others she was asked to leave a message. It didn't matter how much she cried, how much she begged there was no one to hear her, to help her.

By the time Zoya reached 19 she had turned herself into stone. She refused to go home or contact her family and when it came to making a decision about her future she decided to go abroad to study. She didn't know her family anymore, she had no relationship with her estranged siblings, so much so that when her sister got engaged she didn't attend. If there was one thing Zoya was going to do and stand by it was to never forgive her parents for punishing her so mercilessly at no fault of her own.

Zoya had finished packing, although she had spent 7 years in St Margaret's School she wasn't going to miss any of it. The time she spent there was torturous and had probably scarred her for life.

As a young woman Zoya may have lacked confidence but she had managed to find a strength, she was determined to stand on her own two feet, Zoya was going to move to Melbourne to follow her dream of becoming a biomedical scientist.

Her last conversation with her parents was very brief, there was anger and annoyance evident in their tone of voice but it didn't faze her in the slightest, what hurt her was their ignorance, how after all these years could they not see how much they had hurt her and after everything they expected her to be the obedient daughter who was going to still do as they told her to, Zoya bid them farewell and left never to look back again.

Zoya stepped foot into what was going to be her home for the next four years, The university of Melbourne. Having managed to secure a place in the university halls of residence Zoya made her way to the main office to register and pick up her keys.

As she stood I front of the main office building she took in a deep breath 'Ya Allah, please be with me, with every step I take from here let me find success, please don't let me fail'. Zoya opened the door and took her first step towards a future she had chosen for herself and a destiny that Allah had already layer out for .

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I know the chapter was short, but it was really just to introduce the concept and to give it an opening 😊

Hope you liked it
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Res for Nims n Me 😃

An amazing concept once again Sis 👏... I really am in awe and really want to understand where you get all these brilliant concepts from 😳...


Sis, Its going to be another awesome journey with your story and I am so so so eager for it to go full throttle 😃. But I know I have to be patient 😳...


Felt bad for Zoe 😭 but I know MY Asad will come along soon and bring her out of this shell and break all the walls that she may have built around herself.


Thank you so much for sharing another beautiful story with us. Love you loads Sis... MWAH 🤗

⭐️⭐️. You know what that means, right!!! 🤗
Edited by ChocoBerry - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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looking forward to a new read by you.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Yippee!!

New asya ss..

Amazing start...👏
poor zoya...hope she get her true love for rest of life...😊

plz update next part soon...
Edited by Kanwal4salman - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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beautiful start👏👏👏
thanx for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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res
unres

salam badi api...
hope you are gud...😳

wow a new story by you 😊 😃
concept seems interesting...n part one was also gud...
but felt sad for zoe
would love to read more as i am already in love with what coming in future

p.s badi api, next week se exams start hain to mee decided to put a break on all the stories i am reading because i give a lot of time on it and in which situation i am right nw, wasting tiem is not good for me...khair, my exams will continue till 18th may...so mai tab tak apki y story nhe par skunge, i hope u will understan but plz do res for me... 😔 even few minutes before i left a msg at choco api story to let u knw tht i won't be able to read any of your updates till exam get over...so please keep pming me i will read after exams 😊
thanks in advance 😊
love ya 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow you are back with another story...
I loved the concept...
So now asya will romance in Australia
Continue soon...

So glad to see you back...
Edited by Sanjhari - 10 years ago
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interesting concept :)👍🏼
amazing start 👏
but where is asad ?????😕
is he a co student or teacher 😕???,plzz he should not be the one whom asma got engaged to😆
hehe i just can't contain my curiosity plzz update it soon :)😊🤗

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Salaam Aapii... 😊
It is Very pleased and good to see you back so early Aapii...
Thanx for the PM... 😛
This part seems Interesting and intriguing.. 👏
Zoya was a efficient child...but never receieved minimum love also from her family...
It seems she will be a hard nut to crack or open upto... 😳
Wonderful start to this new venture...Aapii.. ⭐️
Continue soonish...but as you feel like. 😃

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