New Asya SS:Crossing time, chap 14 (LAST); 08-11-15

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kaju27

@kaju27

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Posted: 9 years ago

#631

and here comes the end of this wonderful story...
i loved the twist of asya kids nd Salim asking to get married at 17...
I will surely gonna miss this one...

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aseela sha

@aseelashah

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Posted: 9 years ago

#632

Radha darling i cant believe this story ended

Its so perfect

Dear it filled my heart with sooo much love

I dont know ur stories always touched my heart to the core.

U are mazing dear

I want to see u soo famous

I am proud to have a friend like u

May Allah bless u dear

Thanks for pm

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Muskaan

@sweet4shehzadi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#633

Beautiful ending to an awesome story
U describe each character feelings so beautifully that I love it so much
Will miss this story
Can't say anything more
Keep writing
U r amazing writer dear
Thanks for pm

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asyakabhidreamy

@asyakabhidreamy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#634

Aww it was one of cutest epilogue !

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Suzaina

@Manyata5

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Posted: 9 years ago

#635

It was so beautiful...

I dont know it existed all along

But it was the best

Edited by Manyata5 - 9 years ago

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anshu20godara

@anshu20godara

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Posted: 9 years ago

#636

hi its amazing .i love the ending.i always love forever lovle storys .i specially love ending part in every parents life where that stage come & they free from all types of responsbility & they again live as a free couple .i love it .plz tell us when are you update runaway bride?

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Sumi Roy

@LoveSonu2408

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Posted: 9 years ago

#637

i m very sad tht ths stry ends...bt kya kare its said 'all thngs cms to an end' & 'all s well tht ends well'...so its ok...

cming to stry,seriously i hv no words...koi adjective yaad hi nehi arahi..

stupendous fantabulous fantasting marvellous updt...

till now we read past & present togethr bt here u expressed present & future togethr...

salim & sarah were lovely..i jst lv ths sibling teasing & bonding..

finally asad said wht happen tht nit...& zoya's reactn was expectd..

the following marraige proposal was awsm..

at lst u gv leo-zed also...i lk tht.

i jst love love love it..

bdw,wishing u a very happy diwali...⭐️

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aleena

@aleenaansari

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Posted: 9 years ago

#638

Nyc endng...
Luvd d story vry much..

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sanarujub

@SanKsgian

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Posted: 9 years ago

#639

Amazing ending
N I love their kids
Salim n sarah

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Asif

@asifiqbalsh

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Posted: 9 years ago

#640

Awesome
It was perfect ending
Liked the connection between past & present. Time passed quickly & now both kids started their life with their partners. Asya was happy for them.
Thanks for wonderful story & pm