New Asya SS:Crossing time, chap 14 (LAST); 08-11-15

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fatima30

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Posted: 9 years ago

#611

Such a lovely update
Asya touched my heart with their confessions

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Arpita_Mirage

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Posted: 9 years ago

#612

Beautiful Update..

AsYa back together😃

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Muskaan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#613

Wonderful update
Beautifully written
I loved it
Will miss this story
Thanks for pm :)

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sweet_tehs

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Posted: 9 years ago

#614

Awesome part..

Loved the end..and loved the way Asad / Leo spoke with Aaron...

It was superb..

N Zoya was hilarious at the end.

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Asif

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Posted: 9 years ago

#615

Wonderful update dear
Liked the way asad handled Aaron. Zoya was touched by his words. He told her that he love her & will come back to her when he deserve her. Wow what a confession at airport. Zoya broke the law to reach him. Waiting for an epilogue soon. Thanks for pm

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jas91

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Posted: 9 years ago

#616

ress😃 unres

Rada sorry sweetu main late ho gayi this time read on time but comnt karne ka mauka nahi mila soyyi kaan pakad ke😳

Hope u have been well I m so happy knowing u got ur happy job now...Congratulations sweetu🤗 NY right na?😃

so u will shift there now new jagah new ppl new frnds haume bhul na jana pardesiyon se na akhiyan ldana lol just kidding han don't mind😆😳

Chlo coming 2 updt what last part no yeh stories itni jaldi khatam kyun ho jati hain me no likey 😭

but updt main 1 bhi cheej nahi thi which I didn't liked😃

again mujhe 1st chappy ki yaad aa gayi cuz halaki idhar flashback aur present ka combination nahi tha which was there in previous chapters but still I felt it 2 b d same cuz this time d combo was wid their feelings & dialogues

Asad saved Zoe from Aron & his dialogues 2 convince him was words coming from d heart

what he learnt in his life what he sould have done instead of what he did & it was a same replica 2 Zoya she too felt she is not doing right cuz she was not loving him unconditionally she's putting conditions which makes her love selfish & she can't complaint this way if she says Asad is selfish 4 wanting her

Aron finally left loved that small little scene when Asad asked Zoe wid eyes if she's fine😊

but d relief was short lived when Zoe decided 2 embrace him wid present & past Asad broke d bomb telling he feels guilty & leaves😆

I feel that was wrong cuz they have already been punished a lot wid 13 yrs of separation if he wants 2 find himself he should do that wid Zoe by her side & not alone

This mix of how Zoe & Leo both ran desperately 2 stop their love from leaving but only Zoe succeeded & I felt really bad 4 Asad reading d past part how he reached & shouted Zed's name & she couldn't heard it clearly cuz of earphones otherwise they wouldn't have separated cuz se was hoping that time that Asad comes & stop her😭

This time Asad wished it & his wish fulfilled when Zoe came loved reading her emotional outburst

I loved that potion where u mentioned they always behaved like youngsters when it happened they were really young thus reacted their age after they met they again acted like teens & now again Asad deciding 2 leave hehe they should better b adults & behave their age now😆😆

Finally they decided 2 give themselves a chance 4 their happily ever after ❤️

last Zoe arresting scene was hilarious how Zoe was telling d guard I m a doctor & this blue will go 😆 & also that taxi ride 2 d airport how she pushed driver 2 passenger seat 😆😆

& once they got her free they got back 2 their unfinished business😉

Rada why this 1 is ending I didn't wanted this 2 end it was so so so cool & different

I will miss this 1 😭

1 sec don't tell cuz u will b busy now wid new job u r wraping it up so that u can quit writing

say no say no say no plz cuz I will never accept that u can't do that absolutely no😔

Edited by jas91 - 9 years ago