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Aishu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#851

Originally posted by: suearmaniac

ESA nahi he yaar
M absolutely loving that story
U don't have to feel low
And why u feel so ? Or not boring anybody OK?
Write it down and yes m waiting for hmh 😳

I don't know..It's just like a writer block maybe.. Never mind, I will try to come up with one update of it to soon.
I will update hmh tonight..
Remind me later, wanna read your stories too !!

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Aishu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#852

Originally posted by: riddhi1206
chapter 7:
sachi me
dilu n Asad to matlab planning hi karne lage
hehe
tanveer n asad scene
hmmm
hehe the garden part
phir se coffee
or phir se garden
poori story garden m hai kya 😆
nice convo but
beautiful
love zoya with family
owh engagement to flop
hmm kyu?
lets see
shayad see saw something betwn AsYa!
lets see
amazing
awesome
loved it

Sorry...Mujhe garden ke alawa koi aur aacha place nahi patah chala..
Glad you liked the update..

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Aishu

@Ish_Speaks

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Posted: 10 years ago

#853

Originally posted by: riddhi1206
chapter 8
aww tanveer is so cte
love her yaar
she is sucha a sweet one
i was right
usne to hint bhi dedi sabko
so nice
ammijan ka ultimatum
hehe
loved the family scenes
oho to asad miya khogaye khayalo m
finally!! realizatiuon dawned
yoooii!!!
are baap re
ye to bada fast nikla
confession done even
what she loves him too?
oho!!
kabse?
lets see!!
awesome
amazing
superb
so cute!!

Thank you so much!

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Aishu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#854

Originally posted by: riddhi1206
chapter 9
haha bechara
dream tha
shopping spree was beautiful
the moements together was marvellously penned
hehe highlight was Ayaan n Asad's convo
hahaha
but the together moments were splendid
life changed drastically
beautiful
thanks tanveer fromm me too
lovely scenes
oh so he confessed but bappa...she heard wrong
the emotional scene was beautifulllyyy written
loved it
oh no...bhag gayi...
oh ab kya hoga??
oho...
ye log bhi na pagal hai
chalo but that was amazing update
splendid
lovely
loved it so much

She likes to run away,., Glad you liked it!!!

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Aishu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#855

Originally posted by: riddhi1206
chappy 10
That was amazing
the bhang part was fabulous
hehe the confession and her antics
godd!!!
then he called...what she needed...she pulled the chain...he smiled...she reasoned...he tricked
amazing
marvellous
so awesome!!
loved the way she made him confess
that was damn amazing
awesome
beautiful
splendid
superb
spectacular
fab
these words wud be less to describe the scene
sooo good
loved it soo much
lovely awesome amazing
beautiful splendid superb
fabulous sooo good
marvellous story!!
loved it soo much

Infinite thanks for the adjectives and your reviews...
Glad you liked the story...

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Aishu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#856

Originally posted by: sweet_tehs
Hey Aishwa
It was a wonderful story n I know it would end soon.
But still I don't like endings ...
Loved the part.
Loved the story.
Epilogue please..

Thank you so much! Glad you liked it...
Who asked you to think it ended then..I have given a break to the imagination ahead of their lives..But you always have the courtesy to imagine what will happen next in their lives..

Will try to give one...A little busier now...

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Aishu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#857

Originally posted by: -Crazy4AsYa-
aish this is what i call perfect!!
i read it in a go...n really it made me so happy and sad too

happy for the wonderful story u wrote n sad that it has ended!

though i am waiting for the epilogue...soony soon!!

I'm really glad to hear this Dee!!! Glad you liked it...
I will try to write one sooner...Hope I could give it soon...