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starlightango

@starlightango

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#111

this is fabulous! live the twists. can't wait to see how it turns out. I usually don't read anything with any 'dark' stuff, but this one sounded sooo cool I just had to read it. loving it!! so many possibilities 😃😃 very happy I did read! fantastic writing.😃 excited to read on.

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NanduVijay

@NanduVijay

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#112

Thanks for the pm. I don't know what pleasure you are getting in torturing us readers such twists.

Update was awesome. Never expected that Sanam and Aahil were married and loved their interactions over the book.

Waiting impatiently for the next update.

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innocentangel4u

@innocentangel4u

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#113

Beautiful flashbacks those are 👏... I just hope Aahil is actually The Hot and Mysterious Vampire & not Sanam's imagination... But of course that familiar bump on the side of her neck' is very much there right?? 😊

Mysterious as always you've been... Waiting for the next part... Update very soon 😉

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Aimer_vous

@Aimer_vous

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#114

Ahil no more?

he is a vampire now as she always wanted him to be...

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Antara123

@Antara123

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#115

Okay. I know I am horrible because I havent commented for God knows how long. I dont even remember when I commented, and whether it was this thread or Sagey's or Eesha's.

Sorry dearie!

Coming to the update. I was shocked. And disappointed. xD

Coz, I actually loved the vampire-human premise.

I didnt mind Aahil dying as much as the entire story being an imagination.

Nevertheless, I still love you as a writer, I know you are one of the best I have come across, Mah!

I am sure you will continue the story in a manner that will quash my disappointment and dismay,

I remembered something from those long ago school days. LOL.

When we were given essays to write - a story or whatever. Imaginative. And we wrote a good one but ended it as a dream. Our teachers used to give us 0.😆

But, I'll give you 10. I still loved the chapter, a lot.

I love this story still. I wish you had continued it as a vampire one. LOL. And I know a lot more vampires are coming later, but there will be a feeling of unreal, as I know in reality Sanam is human and Aahil i sdead. xD

Love

Naj

P.S. Hope you werent hurt by my comment, I just expressed my thoughts as a reader. I love this story!❤️

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mahwash

@Mahu34

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#116

Kanwal4salman: Thank you. I will soon clear all the confusion I have caused my dear readers.. 🤗

Starlightango: Thank you so much, darling! I am so touched by your comment. I really appreciate all the love.

NanduVijay: Thank you! I will update very soon and hopefully things will come clear.

Innocentangel4u: Thanks! I'm glad you liked the flashbacks. I wanted to show some kind of backstory of SaHil.

Aimer_vous: Thanks! Stay tuned to find out what really is going on...

Najma123: Aww.. I'm glad that I got a chance to read your review. I definitely consider them well. And it's so nice to know what the readers are thinking. Don't worry, I will not turtore you all anymore. Although, I've got some things under my sleeves.. Just stay tuned, Dear.