WHERE I BELONG. updtd Final part- Many Weeks Later.

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chicksoup

@chicksoup

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Posted: 10 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: sageflower7

I love it Soup !

Very realistic and mature story.

I love the way he insists on never letting her out of his sight.
poor thing must be so traumatized by the mishaps she'd been put through as much as her. but he hides his fear and insecurity.

But she senses it. How much he needs her. Even if she won't let him as close as he'd like to be.

I wished you had written a leap and showed them falling in love in a different way. Where she doesn't always have to take care of the broken man with the dark past; and he can forget that he didn't stand by her side so many times before, and do it now without guilt.

But then I got it. You wanted us to imagine our own ending.

Thanks Soup! 👏

Sage,

That is a beautiful reply. Thank You.

How I see it...and why I don't have a problem with Sanam putting up with every insult...

Sanam is a nurturer...she has to take care of someone all the time...She naturally falls into that role..very easily...it just comes to her.

Having to take care of a broken man is not a burden for her...she cherishes every detail about it...

She is truly a mother...who knows Aahil best.

In return, what does she get?

She gets to be the only woman in his life...She is truly everything to him...

In IPKKND, Khushi dives under the blanket and wishes for one thing...That she and Arnav would be shut out from the whole world...it is a pretty selfish thing to ask for...😆

Yeah...It is not something you can ask of a man who has a family to take care of...but it is not a demand...a teeny weeny wish...for a second...

Aahil has granted Sanam that wish for a lifetime...without her asking for it...

Why is it that Saahil's junoon takes me to every other lovely couple I know?😭 (Can't hate Gul, for sure!😡😆)

The ending...yes...I wanted you guys to imagine it...

Will Aahil ever be able to let go of his insecurities?

Will Sanam get her memory back... and then what...left to the imagination...

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darkice7_12

@darkice7_12

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Posted: 10 years ago

#62

Beautiful! Even w/o her memories, Sanam has opened herself to Aahil and they are finding their way back to each other. Aahil's devotion won Sanam's heart. 👍🏼

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Esha

@Raingoddess

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Posted: 10 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: chicksoup

Awww..Esha,

If U were happy at the end of it...All I could ask for! 🤗
Thank U.

Ur welcome 🤗 I just reread it! *sigh* you get how I feel... I needed this again after watching today's episode...

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farz_parachute

@farz_parachute

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Posted: 10 years ago

#64

@Final part

Bang bang! Trust you to give us a Soup-efied enfing! Very Soup-y! Just the kind of broth we've been accustomed to and absolutely love. ;)

👏

😳😳😳

Heee!

Now on some other matters.

How I see it may differ from how everyone else sees it...to me, there's no reason to worry. Honour, respect and dignity and worth...all give solid grounds for future heart breaks and possible break up and eventual reunion, all the while woven with drama and more drama! And who best to clear and give us hope again?

Show must go on. And it will.

I have faith.

And. Fiction or inspiration or heart's wish, you write very well. Succinct. Precise. Direct. Very heartfelt, and most importantly, sincere. Am brought back to your first fic on SaHil. There too I I felt the vibes this final part has given me.

I understand that we differ in perspectives, maybe it is our attachment to it that speaks for us, maybe our detachment. Maybe how much of real we give to it. SaHil is real. We've witnessed their saga, and epic love story. Then there's an extension, a sequel. Just because I'm opened to a different possibility, I'm sure this does not mean I love any lesser than I always have or I do not hope for their ultimate reunion and happily ever after. I'm just opened to a lil more possibilities.

I've always maintained. Drama first. Then happy ending, or really, with past experiences to go by...an ending.

Truly a masterpiece Soup. Possibly one of your best yet. Well arguably. Coz that one you wrote first on SaHil..always is a personal favourite. You ought to know just how big a fan I became of yours after that. Total game-changer. Now this one just made mighty contender. Oh how their equation is exactly the same, here and there..now and then. Equal in every way.

Thank you for this. Most definitely one for the books. And also. The first one featuring Shaad?

Hehehe, couldn't help that last bit. You know his place in my heart. I just need to see just how much more he can mean to me. Nothing, well, more like no-one has made it to where Haider is. I don't think anyone get my obsession (for lack of a better word...hmm love?) for him.

Love you Soup!

Great read on a Friday morning! Mwah!!!

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