New ASYA SS : I Forget You Not, Note PG 124, 04/07/2015

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kritz4ever

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Posted: 10 years ago

#651

Finally asya met loved it

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Chandnii.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#652

Originally posted by: ChocoBerry

OK meri jaan, soon lil lil romance add karoongi 😳

Yes Pleasee!!

Asya romance is all we live for ! ☺️

😆😆

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jas91

@jas91

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Posted: 10 years ago

#653

Excellent updt Choco

loved d feel of it

finally Asya met after 3 yrs

their feelings were awesomely penned

Loved Sam di's poem went well wid d updt⭐️⭐️⭐️

Asad feared & checked her ring finger😳

& than in d end when Zoya got emotional remembering her past & Asad too got tears in his eyes was just wonderful scene😛

they r indeed soulmates❤️

great job Choco👏

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sasir

@sasir

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#654

Awesome
Finally they met
Eager to knew what happened that night that changed their lives this much
P.s...Thanx a lot for not bringing third person BTW them hope u won't bring in future too
I really love ur stories a lot for that

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A.S.K

@ToughStuff

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Posted: 10 years ago

#655

lovely update... AsYa finally met... A lot of questions... let's see how they make their way towards each other..

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Nim

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Posted: 10 years ago

#656

Hey Choco,

Just read the chapter and what should I say? I'm speechless after reading such an emotional part. I had been anxiously waiting for AsYa to meet after the leap and here is that moment.

Shock. Bliss. Hurt. Agony. Restlessness. This was how I felt on seeing Zoe approach Asad. Seriously, you've written the scene and described their emotions so well that i could visualize the whole thing. I could see those emos flashing through their eyes.

It was brilliant. I love it.

Zoe's words that she jot down plus the ones she said to Asad showed a glimpse of the girl she had become now. She has changed, definitely, from what she was earlier. Maybe she hasn't changed just hiding behind iron walls to stop herself n her fragile heart from crumbling. Her words felt to me like as if she was reminding herself that now she couldn't risk the few limited happiness in her mother's life for her own no matter what. She couldn't be herself for a moment and embrace the man she loves so deeply.

Asad's little thanks on finding her finger devoid of any ring showed how much he still loves her. It definitely must have been painful to stay apart for so long. I hope he can break through her tough exterior without feeling defeated cox of her tough exterior.

Choco.. everything was pure beauty here. Loved it all so much.

Waiting...

Love lots lots n lots.. hamesha