New ASYA SS : I Forget You Not, Note PG 124, 04/07/2015

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Saima Syed

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Posted: 10 years ago

#631

I can't tell you how good it felt to read. The moment they came face to face it was like I was watching it happen in front of me and I felt every emotion they did. Beautifully written ChocoBerry

Love you too Sis

Am glad the poem fit

Mwah

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Gulaabo

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Posted: 10 years ago

#632

wow choco! a marvelous update!!
just from the moment when they set eyes upon each other till the time it ended...everything was so perfect!

i hope there'll be a heart to heart in next update

cont soon

p.s- saima di ur lines are beautiful!

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KeyaHira2

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Posted: 10 years ago

#633

I want them to talk more

I hope Asad takes her out somewhere

Why aren't they really happy to see each other?

Are they that overwhelmed?

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rajsmi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#634

Nice update... Beautiful poem by Saima!

The meeting after so long was so painful...happiness too but sad as they have so many things to resolve :-( Hope Asad is patient with Zoya and understands her...

Where are the other two? Arent they finding this strange?

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Sadia Sharmeen Swapno

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Posted: 10 years ago

#635

Whoa that was a beautifully written overwhelming chapter!!

Loved each and every emotions those were portrayed!!

Want to read more!!

Continue soon!

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sj_qh_kabhi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#636

Awesome update..:)
I loved the poem..
nd this part was so emotional and full of pain..
this was written so well...
update soon..:)

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asyaarshilover

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Posted: 10 years ago

#637

apiya...awesome blossom update...👏

finally asya met

i loved the whole chappy apiya...it was explained beautifully

continue soon...excited 😳

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anopama

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Posted: 10 years ago

#638

Love the update

So finally asya comes face to face

Asad saw her from the time she stepped in the restaurant

But her until they reached the table and he was standing already for her

The look the unanswered questions the love the joy the wanting

Asad was just piercing her wit he his gaze and she was just try into hide her feeling

But he didn't give up

Love him looking for ring and know she can still be his

But he has a lot of work to do his Zoya is not the same she is deeply saddened and broken

Oh the poem was beautiful the words touching

So asya will be working together I guess can't wait

Continue

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Sonali

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Posted: 10 years ago

#639

amazing that they met again, but the confusion and hurt barred them from properly reuniting

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fatima30

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Posted: 10 years ago

#640

A beautifully written update where I could feel both Zoya's and Asad's pain...
I hope they do talk about what happened three years ago soon...

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