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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: angel_juhi04

Sorry commenting after a long time

In past weeks I commented very less on people's post n used to update my own stories very less as I had an exam on 16th.
Cumn to ur story, its going very well n smooth
AsYa got drunk n got intimate several times
Regarding d twist, I hope Asad does not do sumthn bad to Zoya. Wat may be d misunderstanding acc. to Asad?
Still, I don't want Zoya to forgive Asad easily for hurting her very badly n dumping her dat also after having sex wid her several times.
Regarding ur FSOG story, I don't think I will read dat I hate abuse in d name of love or anything. I really hate men controlling women.



hey hope you did well
or fifty shades darker is not abusive at all
even i hate that
but here the dominant turns to be a passionate and caring lover
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: radadolcevida

hey dear,

I know I never comment about this story for many reason, I just started reading it two day ago, 😕 so sorry I didn't get the time before.
Coming to the story, it was totally different from the real version of dilwale, maybe this is why I didn't read it earlier, but I was surprised because it was totally different and I should expect this from you. Anyway, so sorry for being late about this story.
It started pretty well, Zoya entered with her big mouth and unique personality which attracted Asad instantly. When I read the first chapter, I though Tanveer will seperate or create a misunderstanding but, no, it went really far between them, they confessed, they made love and he asked her to marry her. And you chose at this moment to add a twist, Ugh, I should have expected it was about to come, the seperation 😆.
The story was moving really well and the attraction was 😳. You are one of the writer who built really well chemistry between character, I must confess, you are really good in it.
So let's see what did you prepare for us and I guess Zoya will see him with Tanveer ?
Thanks for the pm dear and for sure, I will follow this story by now.



hey am happy that you like my writing,
i love all your stories too, specially the love of my life
thanks for all the appreciations
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: rabiamunawar

Love it

so beautiful
so intense update
hawww what twist
is it going to be some misunderstanding between them
are they going to separate
oh no well you really did a great job
thanks for pm
update soon


some what😕
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Linsie



by your writing 😆 😆



that is so sweet yaar
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Posted: 10 years ago

WELL GUYS AM BACK WITH ANOTHER UPDATE😛
WELL HERE IS THE TWIST THAT I WAS PREDICTING
PS: do not hate me after that ,😕,,,,,,i will end it soon
huggies sana



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Posted: 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

chapter 18 Part B

I was running smilingly to run into my love's arms once again...when suddenly ...bang

"am sorry...i did not see you...oh its you Tanveer...now am not at all sorry"

"Who do you think you are?" Tanveer fumed

"I don't want to waste my mood on you ...have to meet asad"

"oh go then...he's waiting for you with a S.U.R.P.R.I.S.E...HAHAHA"

"What the hell do you mean?" I screamed...

"easy...sweetie...You don't own this place... You are no better than a high class wh**e... Do you really think he loves you? He doesn't love you... he can never love a s**t like you... He is mine... you can't take him away from me."

Zoya moved forward and gave her a tight slap "Get out... Get out of my way." Zoya shouted

"Your way????." Tanveer said laughing "This is not your way...its not even your place...you are just a sex toy for him... ... You are so naive you really believed...in all this bullshit"

"Get out" Zoya shouted more loudly...

Najma came running,"Is everything all right Zoya? I heard you shouting."

"Take her out of my eyesight please." Zoya said, pointing at Tanveer

Najma came towards Tanveer "Don't you dare." Tanveer said glaring "I am going"

"Where is Mr Khan?" Zoya asked Najma as Tanveer went out of the room.

"He is in his office..."

"ok thanks Najma"

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Posted: 10 years ago

PART C

After her encounter with Tanveer, zoya sensed that something was wrong... but what...she knocked on asad's cabin...getting no answer she slowly walked in...

Asad was standing at the window staring outside. His posture indicated a silent storm

"a-a-asad."

He remained silent and no movement.

"Asad?" zoya was scared now

She walked up to him slowly and hugged him from the back. He was sculpted in stone, rigid and unmoving.

"Asad?" she was scared now. "What happened? are you mad at me?"

He disengaged himself from her arms, turned around and flung her on the nearby couch. Zoya crunched back in fear and shock, her face pale and eyes wide.

His dark gaze raked her face. He grabbed her upper arms and shook her hard, not caring that he would leave punishing bruises. "How could you?" he demanded with gritted teeth.

"What happened?" her voice quivered.

"What happened? You want to know what happened?" He flung her away.

Stalking over to the desk and grabbing the recently tossed envelope, he growled, "this happened." He removed the contents...and shove it in her face...

They were photograph of hers and ayaan in various postures and situations...hugging...kissing on cheeks...foreheads...cuddling...laughing...dancing having fun...but it did not seem friendly as they were...'these are edited' ...zoya realised

Her eyes lowered. She gulped.

"I ... where?... did you???."

asad shook her by her shoulders and asked in gritted teeth "The question is not where i got it from...the question is...is this true...you and this guy?????"


She raised her chin defiantly. "yes, but..."

"aaahhh" asad growled like a lion..."so its true then...you live with him..."

"asad please listen to me" zoya pleads tearily "its not what you think...please"

"oh its not..." he shouted "let's see then, let's dial your home number and see if he picks up." He dials and put the call on speaker.

"hello?" asad asked , glaring at zoya who was just standing with a river of tears

"hello, who is this?" ayaan asked

"hi am from zoya's office. is she there?" asad tried talking normally though a storm was brewing in him.

"oh...let me check...babbbyyy sweetie, are you here zzz??? am sorry she is not here" asad was seething. He crumpled his fist till it became white

"thanks...by the way who are you? do you live there?" asad tried

"oh am ayaan...yeah we live together...am her boyfriend" asad slammed the phone on the wall with a growl...zoya had never seen him so angry in this way...she was scared now...

"a-a-a-s-s-s-asad?" she tried touching his sholders and asad just turned and slap her so hard that she was thrown on his desk creating a complete mess...zoya was shocked...she has never seen asad like this

"so tell me, you two stay together as a couple in the same apartment...he's your boyfriend...do you sleep with him????" asad held zoya by her shoulders this time piercing his fingers in her flesh ,,,shaking and screamed in front of her face

zoya was really scared of his anger now "asad its not like that ...p-p-please listen to me"

But asad was unstoppable "did you kiss him the way you kiss me...he touches you like me...was all that happened between us fake...zoya...you were leading me all this time...so this was one of your gold digging plans with your boyfriend...you wanted my money only...na..its not love...you were using your body and this attraction i feel for you to seduce me..I just have one question...the bed on which we made love last night...did you and him...???"


"ASAD" unable to hear more, zoya covered her ears and sat on her knees "please i beg of you please stop it...please...please" To say that she was shocked would be an understatement. He had literally killed her. The tears slowly slid down her face. how could he???

"Even a blatant fool won't fall for you explanation now!", he screamed at her.

"please believe me, I didn't do anything!", she whispered. Asad glared at her and gritted his teeth. He strode towards her and pinned her against the wall. Asad glared at her at her, disgusted by her trail of never ending lies

Asad caught hold of Zoya and yelled into her face, his fists clenched tightly into a ball, he whispered, as a few tears escaped his eyes, "Traitor, You have one hour. Pack your things and get out of this office and my life. If I even see you anywhere in the future, I'll kill you and I mean that.", he hissed. Shoving her in the wall, he walked away, leaving a completely broken Zoya behind. She stared at his retreating form, her lips quivering.

"Asad please don't do this. ..don't leave me. ..mein marjaoungi...please"

"30 mins miss Farooqui" he still did not turn to look at her"

Zoya could feel herself breaking inside, she clasped her mouth and turned around to flee to her cubicle.

Zoya's lips quivered, she didn't know how she'd got herself into all that mess. The man who'd once claimed to love her, had also turned out to be the man who would hurt her and killed her heart and soul. Zoya clasped her mouth, to stop those sobs which were threatening to escape her lips, she squeezed her eyes shut, as the tears rolled down her cheeks. How was she going to set this right..."asad how will i live without you. You just did not trust me or my love that was all i had and i gave it to you...killing me would have been less painful."

ASAD POV

I watched her walk away from the building and my life , my eyes brimming with tears. "ZOYA, WHY DID YOU HAVE TO BE THE REASON FOR MY DESTRUCTION...I LOVED YOU SO MUCH ...WAS THAT NOT ENOUGH????...WHY? WHY? "

I fell to his knees and cried, cried for the reason that I had lost the only woman I will ever be able to love and always will.

"How will I live without you now...how will I heal the hollow in my heart now????? you were my everything...my air ...how am i supposed to breath now"

And I cried...cried...cried...for my lost lying on the carpet of my office which bore witness to my love for z-o--ya




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Posted: 10 years ago
well this is it for now😉
do comment back and
please don't be angry
will change the seperation soon😃
well next update will be on page 140
do take me there😊
huggies
sana

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Posted: 10 years ago
Res !
Unres
Yes I m the first one . Commenting after so long . Uff ! 😆
Anyways a amazing update though was not a happy one but a interesting one ! Please update soon cause this story is getting interesting .
Love
Sam
Edited by Texie-Shady - 10 years ago

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