AsYa FF: Revenge Of Evil Twin- Epilogue on Page 97 on 3rd Feb - Page 45

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: suearmaniac

😭 so voilent update...
made me sad...but the perfection ur writing skills possess...makes me inspired👏 well written
and thank u so much for writing this now...ab zoya ko pta chal hi gaya he ki ye devil tha
fatafat asad ko dhund zoya
nd juhi update soonish

Thank u😊
Anas is a jerk who is using all d means to torture AsYa😡
Zoya told Ayaan n Abhi d truth so they will get to work now😊
Zoya used his peanut allergy trick to find abt him😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: cutie15

Thank u for updating..
i'm glad that zoya finally knows the truth.. hope she finds asad soon and asya reunite..nd this jerk gets punished. .
next update soon plzz..


Thank u😊
Zoya used his peanut allergy trick to find abt him😉
Zoya told Ayaan n Abhi d truth so they will get to work now😊
Anas will be severely punished
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Posted: 10 years ago
I had to skip some parts since they were so violent...sorry Juhi. But hats off to you for highlighting such stuff. :)
Glad Zoe got to knw about the truth...hoping for the torture ti end soon. Great part... Continue soon Juhii :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update
But he violence so sad
So finally after all the etorture Zoya figures it out
So now she has to find out where her asad is
Hope she is successful
Glad she contact some friends
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: angel_juhi04


Climax matlab kya? R u really d contents of how Gary raped Zoya? I think u will not be able to write widout shedding tears. In my story DAP, Ananya survived 2 rape attempts along wid lots of physical abuse. Dat story is supposed to be romcom wid dark themes of d past.
In d show too, Mariam was being forced to marry her rapist so dat d rapist can save d family's honour. Take ur time n write, dear. U sud think wen u have free time 4m ur studies😊.


wahi to yaar
meri to iccha hi nahi hori esa likhne ki
kyoki i've already lost my readers and those who read are always scared of past and keeps telling me how painful it is to read such things
par ab i can't back out naa...
wese shayad itna bura ni hoga jitna dosti aur pyaar me tha
abhi ek bohat bada twist he story me...
so i hope ki thoda relaxation to rahega
baaki to its very tough to write frm zoya's pov...
i think 2 ya 3 updates ke baad hi saamne laa paungi uska pov
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Posted: 10 years ago
Love it
poor zoya has to suffer much
Thanks for pm
update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey juhi
Finally I am here 😉

Swagat nahi karenge hamara 😆

It's unique 😊

Read this story well written 👏

He tourched her alot

How asad rude behaved with her 😕

My poor zoya feel bad for her 😭

Sorry for late thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
9...

to much to read... i have no clue how you wrote this...

OMG!!!!!

i am so mad...😡 😡 😡

good you stop... this there... made zoya smart little...

so she knows the truth...

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Part 10

At night, Zoya peeped into Anas's room. Anas was sitting on his bed lukn at his cell wid a smirk on his face.

"Zoya, wat an awesome performance u gave at d party last night dat I cud not stop myself 4m recording it. I showed it to Asad 2day n he was so heartbroken seeing u dress up n dance like a bar girl. I also told him wat all I did to u 4m yesterday evening. He was so helpless n begged me to live u but I laughed at him n told him dat I will keep torturing n updating him abt u. Wid dis video clip, I can make u do anything wid d blackmail of posting dis video on internet," said Anas wid an evil smirk n laughed like a maniac.

Zoya was shocked wid dis. She quickly rushed to her room n burst into tears.

"Anas has recorded my dance n will blackmail me. He is even torturing my Asad. He is such a beast. I am not able to do anything," thinks Zoya sadly n leaves 4m there.

Next morning, Zoya sees Anas playing wid his cell at d dining table. She was tensed as his cell had dat dancing video. She need to do sumthn. She then saw a maid in her early 20s serving soup to them. Zoya d chair which was opposite her slightly wid her leg. D servant tripped a little causing d soup to fall on Anas n his cell. He even fell on Anas due to which Anas n his chair stumbled causing d cell to fall in d soup n then d soup bowl along wid d cell fell on d floor. Anas got angry n got up 4m his chair wid a jerk.

"Shit, my cell is destroyed along wid ZOya's video in it," thinks Anas angrily.

"How dare u spill all d soup, u bitch?" asked Anas angrily, "U even spoiled my clothes n destroyed my cell."

"I am sorry, Sir," replied d maid in a shaky voice.

"U will be definitely be sorry. 2day, u will be locked in d dark room(room where he locked Zoya once) d entire widout any food n water," said Anas in a heartless tone.

"Sir, plz forgive me," pleaded me.

"Shut up," snarled Asad making her quiet.

He then ordered a male servant to take away d maid n lock her in d dark room n ordered another maid to clean up.

"Zoya, I will go n change," said Anas n left 4m there.

Zoya smiled to herself n said mind, "Thank God, I managed to destroy d cell."

After Anas left for d office, Zoya was in her room. She decided to tell everything to someone. She went in d washroom n dialed Abhimanyu's number. She came to d washroom so dat none of d servants who enter her room all of a sudden does not catch her talking on her cell. Abhimanyu who was in KV talking wid Ayaan in his room answered d call.

"Hello di," said Abhi.

"Hello Abhi," said Zoya as she broke into tears.

Abhi got worried.

"Di, why r u crying?" asked Abhi, "Is everything alright?"

Ayaan who heard Abhi also got worried.

"Nothing is alright, Abhi," replied Zoya wid tears in her tears, "Anas had kidnapped Asad after our wedding before d bidaai dats why he was late. Now, he is takn revenge on us."

"Wat?" asked Abhi shockingly n kept his cell on speaker for Ayaan also to hear.

Zoya told everything about wat all happened since her wedding night wid tears in her eyes. Abhi n Ayaan were shocked n furious as Zoya was teln them everything.

"I am talking in my washroom so dat no one catches me. Plz, save me n my Asad. I can't take anymore torture 4m Anas. I don't know where my Asad is," said Zoya thru her tears.

"I will kill dat man for hurting my sister n jiju," said Abhi angrily.

"We r cumn to take u away 4m there," said Ayaan.

"No bhaijaan, I will have to live here for some time till we all know where Anas has kept Asad," said Zoya helplessly.

"We can't let u live there anymore," said Ayaan.

"I am helpless, bhaijaan. I need to end d call now before anyone get suspicious as I am in d washroom 4m a long time," said Zoya.

"Zoya, we will do sumthn. We will send hire some men n detectives to find Asad. U r my younger sister like Najma. I can't see in pain like dis," said Ayaan.

"Bye Abhi, bye bhaijaan," said Zoya n hung up.

"My di is suffering so much," said Abhi as he broke into tears.

Their eyes then went to d door n noticed Dilshad standing at d door wid a horrified expression. Dilshad came to them.

"Ammi," said Ayaan.

"I heard everything," said Dilshad n broke into tears.

Ayaan n Abhi made her sit on d bed wid them. Ayaan gave Abhi n her a glass of water.

"So, Zoya tried to tell us abt Asad's changed behaviour but Anas came n twisted d words. He then punished our Zoya by starving her d entire day. He acted so well. I am such a bad mother. My bacchi was suffering in front of my eyes dat day & I did not understood her pain. How cud I not recognize my Asad?" said Dilshad thru her tears.

"Aunty, its not ur fault," said Abhi wiping his own tears, "Its Anas's fault who acted so well. Plz, stop blaming urself. Its d time of doing sumthn to save di n jiju."

"Abhi is right, Ammi. We need to save Asad n Zoya," said Ayaan.

"I need to talk to my bacchi," said Dilshad thru her tears.

"Okay, talk to her," said Ayaan.

Dilshad called Zoya. Zoya who was mopping d study office room floor answered d call.

"Hello ammi," said Zoya.

"Zoya meri bacchi, I am so sorry I cud not understand ur suffering due to Anas wen u came home," apologized Dilshad.

"Ammi, its not ur fault," said Zoya, "Don't blame urself."

"Wat r u doing?" asked Dilshad.

"Mopping d study office room floor," replied Zoya.

Dilshad was shocked n furious.

"How dare he make u work like dat?" asked Dilshad furiously, "U will not do any work."

"I have to, ammi otherwise he will beat me again if he sees even a slight dirt or dust," replied Zoya helplessly.

"Zoya, we will do sumthn to save u & Asad soon," said Dilshad.

"Ammi, I need to end d call before anyone sees me," said Zoya n hung up.

Zoya broke into tears.

"I wish I cud hug u, ammi," thinks Zoya wid tears in her eyes.

"Wat happened, ammi? Why r u crying?" asked Ayaan worriedly.

"Zoya said dat she was mopping d study office floor. I can't see our Zoya like dis," replied Dilshad thru her tears.

"Anas will pay for everything," said Ayaan angrily.

They went to d hall n told Rashid, Najma n Humeira everything. Mehek was sleeping inside.

"Anas is alive n he is torturing Asad n Zoya," said Rashid shockingly.

"I can't believe so much is happening," said Humeira n broke into tears.

"We sud start doing sumthn now. We can't let our children suffer anymore," said Rashid.

Rashid called some men n detectives instructing them to follow Anas n find abt Asad.

"Wat sud tell Zoya n Abhi's parents?" asked Dilshad.

"We need to tell them everything," replied Rashid.

"No, not now. They will be very worried. We sud tell them after some time," said Abhi.

"I miss bhai n bhabhi so much," said Najma n broke into tears.

Next morning, d men n detectives informed Rashid dat they followed Anas to a godown n got to know where Anas had kept Asad. Rashid tells them to go to d police.

Scene shifts to d godown. Asad who is tied up n gagged on d chair sees an empty glass of water on a table. He lks around n luckily no one is around. He moves 2wards d table along wid his chair on which he is tied up. He caused d table to shake a little making d glass fall on d ground n break into some pieces. He then made his chair fell on d floor along wid him making sure not to hit his head on d floor. He then manages to hold a piece of glass n starts cutting d ropes. He managed to free his right hand. He then frees his left hand & d legs. He then removes d duct tape off his mouth. He then luks around. He sees d men cumn back in d godown n hides. Stealthily, he leaves d godown. As he was running, he failed to notice a police van. D van is stopped. D police had came to rescue Asad n catch d goons. They too failed to notice Asad. D goons enters d room where Asad was tied n was shocked to him missing.

"Asad bhaag gaya," said goon 1.

"We need to inform Anas Sir," said goon 2.

Before goon 2 cud call Anas, d police barged in.

"Where have u hidden Asad?" asked one of d inspector.

"We don't know wat u r talking abt," replied goon 1.

"U all better tell us otherwise or face d consequences," threatened d inspector.

D goons got scared.

"Sir, Asad is not here. He ran away," said goon 2.

"Don't lie to us," said d inspector sharply.

"We r not lying, Sir," said goon 3.

"Well, 2 of d inspectors will be there wid u. Don't u dare to inform Anas abt anything," warned d inspector.

"Okay Sir," said goon 1.

Scene shifts to Zoya's room. She got a call 4m Ayaan who informed her abt d development. Zoya is happy dat Asad has ran away n prays for his safety.

"Zoyaaa," came Anas's voice.

"Not anymore, Anas. Now dat Asad is not in ur captivity. I will not tolerate u," said Zoya in a determined voice.

Anas was at home. She opened her make-box n removed 2 spray bottles. She recalls how she yesterday wen no one was around she filled one spray bottle wid water n crushed peanuts n another spray bottle wid water mixed wid chilli, pepper, spices powder. She hid d bottles in her blue jeans pockets n due to long green top till her mid-thighs no one cud notice dat. She prayed to Ganesh n Allah to help her escape 4m here n went in his room.

"Wat happened, Asad?" asked Zoya.

"Go n bring coffee for me," replied Anas angrily.

"Sure Asad," said Zoya n turned to go.

Then in a quick moment, she removed d crushed peanut spray bottle n turned around n sprayed them on Anas's mouth. Anas started coughing. Zoya then quickly tuk his car keys 4m d table. She then picked up a baseball bat n started hitting Anas. Anas was too shocked by her actions. He shouted for d servants. 3 male servants came but Zoya sprayed chilli-pepper-spices spray in their eyes temporarily blinding them. She then ran out of d room. No other servants saw her. She then went out of d house. D gardener Shyam came in her way but she hit his head wid d baseball bat n came in d parking. She went into Asad's car n drive 4m there. Shyam who got up after some moments went in d house.

Scene shifts to Anas's room. A servant was giving epipin to him due to which Anas recovered. Another servant was tending to his bruises which was there on his face n hands due to Zoya continuously hitting him wid d baseball bat. Anas was fuming in anger.

"How dare she?" asked Anas angrily, "She sprayed peanut water on me. I think she figured out dat I am Anas. I need to find her before she home or police."

Scene shifts to Zoya driving on d road. Suddenly, d car stops.

"Shit, petrol khatam ho gaya. Wat to do now?" asked Zoya in a panic voice.

She left 4m there n started running. D way 4m d farmhouse n KV or KM(Kandpal Mansion) was very much. She needs to reach any of KV, KM or police before Anas reaches her.

Asad was also running on d road. He wanted to reach d farmhouse to rescue Zoya 4m d beast Anas. While running, he sees Zoya running in d opposite direction. He smiles in relief on seeing her. He ran 2wards her. Zoya stepped back. She thought dat he was Anas as Anas too was wearing black shirt n blue jeans like him wid his face n hands bruised.

"Zoya," said Asad.

Zoya started running. Asad ran after her n caught her hand.

"Let me go, Anas," shouted Zoya.

"Zoya, its me Asad," said Asad.

"Don't lie, Anas. U r trapping me so dat u cud take me home," said Zoya angrily n sprayed d peanut water on his face.

D peanut water did not had any effect on him.

"U r having peanut allergy then why u r not getn affected?" asked Zoya shockingly.

"Cuz I am Asad not Anas," replied Asad.

Zoya stared at him carefully. She noticed dat Anas's bruises r different than him. Yes, he is her Asad. She broke into tears n hugged him wid all her might.

"Asad, I am sorry I did not recognized u," said Zoya while crying, "Vo kya hai na? 2day, Anas is also wearing black shirt n blue jeans so I got confused."

"Its okay, Zoya," said Asad hugging her back.

They broke d hug after some time. Asad then noticed Zoya's face n hands which had several bruises. He felt anger rising inside him seeing his Zoya so much hurt.

"Anas will pay for hurting u so much," said Asad angrily.

"He will pay for hurting u also so much," said Zoya angrily.

Meanwhile, before anyone came out d police arrived n arrested d servants but Anas managed to escape. He t tuk another car. He opened d car boot n tuk out a gun. He then got into d car n started it. He will find Zoya n make her suffer for wat all she did 2day.

Zoya called Rashid n told them dat she n Asad found each other. She also told them where they are n they r cumn back. She then hung up. Asad n Zoya started running to reach KV.

Precap:

#As AsYa reached a deserted area, Anas saw them 4m his car n came out. Since Asad's car had puncture n due to AsYa's talks, Anas had managed to reach them. He tuk out his gun n pointed at them while smirking. Asad n Zoya got tensed.

"So, who among u will like to die 1st?" asked Anas amusing pointing his gun at them.

"Anas, plz spare Asad. He is ur brother. He has done nothing to u. Its me who got u in jail. U can kill me but plz let Asad go. Plz, don't kill him," pleaded Zoya.

Asad was shocked while Anas gave an amusing laugh.

#Anas came closer to AsYa. Asad hit Anas's hand making d gun fly in d air falling far away which no one cud. Asad n Anas got into a fight. AsYa then ran 4m there.


A/N: I am sorry dat I don't comment on any of d story n feel guilty. I have a competitive exam on Sunday so I don't come on laptop net but only come onlyn 4m cell net. But I will try to make a day wen I will only do d work of commenting on others stories. I even don't update my own stories cuz of d exam😭.


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Edited by angel_juhi04 - 10 years ago

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