AsYa FF: Revenge Of Evil Twin- Epilogue on Page 97 on 3rd Feb - Page 17

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Posted: 10 years ago
Love it awesome
Thank god zoya save asad
Oh snaps ran from jail
Oh plz save zoya in future
Pm me of ur next update
UpdTe soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
amzing n gripping story do cont soon.
it was fab
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Posted: 10 years ago
part 1...

new friendship...all good

until anas come in...so he is highly jealous of
asad..
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Thanks a lot Sam for your lovely gift😊

About the banner- KSG and SJ at the bottom centre are Asad and Zoya in happier times. KSG in green is Anas. KSG and SJ in wedding attires are Asad and Zoya. KSG with bruised face is Asad. KSG in white with bearded face is Anas. The chains in Zoya's hands symbolizes her life with Anas which is full of hardships, slavery and sufferings.


Part 4

After all students went to d class, 2 boys came near Soha wen her friends were not wid her but outside d class.

"Hey babes, u may have enjoyed a lot wid Anas," said 1 boy.

"We sud also get a chance," said 2nd boy wid a smile.

Zoya n her friends who watched dis got angry. Soha's friends too came in d class. They came near Soha n the boys.

"Leave Soha alone," said 1 of d Soha's friends firmly.

"Don't u feel shame to talk like to a girl?" asked Zoya angrily, "Wat if its ur sister or girlfriend in place of Soha?"

D boys became silent.

"Why r u both silent now?" asked another Soha's friend angrily, "Jab khud k behen ya girlfriend ki baat aayi to bolti band ho gayi kya? U r such a creep."

"If u both troubled Soha or any girl again then it will not be good for u," warned Asad.

"Do u both even know wat I went thru? Wat Zoya went thru due to witnessing it? U both r so heartless," shouted Soha angrily.

D boys hung their heads in shame.

"We r sorry, Soha," apologised d 1st boy.

"We will never tease anyone like again," said d 2nd boy.

"Its okay, guys. Don't do it again," said Soha.

D boys nodded their heads. D boys went to their seats.

"I am very happy dat Asad is saved n Anas is caught. I am sorry Asad for complaining against u even though u were innocent," apologized Soha.

"Its not ur fault, Soha. Any girl in ur place wud have got scared by wat u went thru n how Anas threatened wid dire consequences/ Glad dat I am saved," said Asad.

"I wish wat happened wid me never happens wid anyone," said Soha.

"We too wish d same," said Zoya.

Asad's family gets to know abt Anas by Asad n Zoya. They r angry n hurt. Zoya has came wid Asad to his house after d college. They feel bad for Zoya for witnessing his misdeed n going thru emotional trouble cuz of Anas. Dilshad recognizes Zoya as she saw her once in d market wid her mother. She hugs Zoya to comfort her for wat she went thru.

"Sorry beta for wat u had to go thru cuz of my son," said Dilshad.

"Its not ur fault, aunty. Its only Anas's fault," said Zoya.

"Anas has gone too far," said Rashid.

"Najma, my brother Abhimanyu is in ur class," said Zoya.

"So, he is ur brother. He told me abt his elder sister's name being Zoya," said Najma.

"I have to go now," said Zoya.

"Okay," said Dilshad.

Zoya is comforted by her friends her family as she was still in trauma due to dat incident. Some days later, Anas is sentenced to life imprisonment for raping several woman n doing various illegal drug supplying. Asad n Zoya used to visit each other's families. Their families liked each other. Asad n Zoya's friendship grew more stronger day by day.

2 months later, Asad n Zoya falls in love but they have not confessed to each other. Their friends know dat they r in love wid each other but not themselves.

One day, Asad decided to confess his love to Zoya. He was sitting wid only Zoya in d library at a table.

"Zoya, I want to tell u sumthn," said Asad.

"Wat?" asked Zoya.

"I am in love wid someone," replied Asad.

Zoya felt pain hearing dis. She thought he fell in love wid someone else.

"Who is dat girl whom u fell in love wid?" asked Zoya in a normal tone.

"You," replied Asad wid a smile.

Zoya's eyes became wide. She cud not believe dat d girl he loves is her only.

"Asad," said Zoya in a low voice.

"Its true, Zoya. I don't wat u feel abt me but I think I have fallen for u wen I saw u for d 1st time wen u were getn down 4m ur scooty," said Asad honestly.

"I am very happy dat u love me, Asad. I also love u. I think I have fallen for u during d time wen I was in emotional trouble due to Anas & u came home once to know abt me. Soon, I realized dat I really love u but did not knew how to confess it to u," said Zoya wid a smile.

Asad too smiled while saying, "I love u, Zoya."

"I love u too, Asad," said Asad wid a smile.

They both up n hugged each other unaware of their surroundings. Mitwa plays in d bg. They were in their world hugging each other as their friends who just entered d library claps for them after hearing their confession. AsYa broke their hug.

"So, u both r finally a couple," said Ranveer wid a smile.

"Yaa, I think we sud have confessed it a little earlier," said Asad wid a smile.

"Well, its not too late," said Suvreen wid a smile.

"We want a treat," said Sameera excitedly.

"Yaa sure, u all will get d treat," said Zoya wid a smile.

They went to d canteen for d treat.

In d afternoon, Asad comes home happily. He is in a very good mood. All r clueless at why is lukn so different 2day.

After changing, Asad comes in d hall.

"Asad, u r in a very good 2day. Anything special?" asked Ayaan.

"I am in love, bhaijaan," replied Asad wid a smile.

All smiles hearing dat.

"Who is dat lucky girl, bhaijaan?" asked Najma excitedly.

"Zoya," replied Asad wid a smile.

"Dats so awesome, Asad. She is a very nice girl," said Dilshad wid a smile.

"Both my sons have fell in love. Now, lets see who steals Najma's heart," said Rashid happily wid a smile.

Najma blushes as she thinks abt falling in Abhi's arms wen they 1st met.

"Why r u blushing, Najma? Tuje bhi koi mil gaya hai kya?" asked Asad wid a smile.

"Nahi bhai," replied Najma.

Scene shifts to KM. Zoya is in d hall watching TV. She too is in a very good mood like Asad.

"Wat happened, Zoya?" asked Zainab, "U luk so happy 2day."

"I fell in love, Mom," replied Zoya wid a smile.

"Who is dat lucky guy girl, Zoe?" asked Abhi excitedly.

"Asad," replied Zoya wid a smile.

"Nice choice, Zoya. He is a great guy," said Abhijeet wid a smile.

A week later, AsYa went for their 1st date. They went at a beach in d evening. Asad wore a white shirt n blue jeans while Zoya wore a short white spaghetti dress. Asad had already arranged for d date. D date set-up is as in d picture below:

"Wow Asad, its so beautiful," said Zoya happily wid a smile.

"Glad u liked," said Asad wid a smile.

"Like it? I loved it, Asad," said Zoya wid a smile.

"Lets go there," said Asad n grabbed her hand.

They went to d table hand n hand n tuk their seats.

"Lets start eating," said Zoya.

"Yaa," said Asad.

They started eating.

"Asad, u were such a great friend wen I was low due to Anas. At dat time, no one even u did not knew wat I was going thru. Still, u comforted me a lot of times during those days. I was so scared to open my mouth due to d fear of Anas," said Zoya.

"But u opened ur mouth wen Princi was calling police," said Asad.

"I don't how I got strength at dat time. I cud not bear an innocent person getn framed like dat. So, I cud not shut my mouth anymore n told d truth," said Zoya.

"Glad u showed courage. Now, Anas is in jail for all his misdeeds," said Asad.

"I am so lucky to get a boyfriend like u," said Zoya wid a smile.

Asad smiled.

"I am aslo lucky to have a girlfriend like u," said Asad wid a smile.

They talked while they ate.

After eating, they walked around d beach. It was getn darker. They got in d water hand in hand. They felt d coolness of water under their feet. Their hairs were flowing due to cool breeze. They splashed water at each other playfully.

"D moon is lukn so beautiful," said Zoya wid a smile.

"But not as beautiful as u," said Asad wid a smile.

"Asad, u r so sweet," said Zoya wid a smile.

Asad smiled at dis. They came out of d water n walked around d beach. They stood at a place. They lukd at sky which was now filled wid stars. They came closer to each other n held each other's shoulder. Their faces moved closer n kissed each other's lips. D kiss soon got passionate. They kept on kissing each other till they ran out of breath.

"We had our 1st kiss under d moon n star lights," said Asad wid a smile.

"I can never forget our 1st kiss," said Zoya wid a smile.

"Me too," said Asad wid a smile.

They kept on staring at each other lovingly.

"Lets go home," said Asad wid a smile.

"Yaa," said Zoya wid a smile.

They left d beach n went in Asad's car.

3 years passed by- Its August 2012:

Asad, Zoya n their friends passed out of d college. Asad n Zoya have started preparing for their MBA. Ranveer started handling his parent's business. Panchi started handling d business of Ranveer's parents along wid him. Suvreen wanted to become a fashion designer. She got an internship in Iris Fashion House. Yuvraj became a model. Farhan n Sameera too started preparing for their MBA. Ayaan n Humeira got married last month. Najma n Abhimanyu were a couple 4m 2 years. Their families approved their relationship. Najma is in 2nd year medical while Abhi is in 2nd year Hotel Management.

Asad n Zoya used to visit each other's houses regularly to study. Their families decided to get them engaged. So, AsYa got engaged 2 months after AyRa's wedding.

2013:

AsYa got selected for MBA at a Delhi University. Farhan n Sameera too got selected at d same Delhi University. Humeira was 7 months pregnant. Everyone tuk a great care of her. Najma n Abhi got engaged a week before AsYa n FarMeera left for Delhi. RaDil were happy to see their eldest son married n other 2 children engaged.

One evening, Asad was at Zoya's home in her room. Only 2 days were left for them to leave for Delhi University.

"I will miss everyone here," said Asad.

"Me too," said Zoya.

"Wat will u do after MBA?" asked Asad.

"I will join dad's business," replied Zoya n asked, "Wat abt u?"

"I will also join dad's business," replied Asad.

"We will marry after 2 years after completing our MBA," said Zoya wid a smile.

"We will 1st marry in Muslim style n then in Hindu style," said Asad wid a smile.

"Dats very nice, Asad," said Zoya happily wid a smile.

Asad smiled. They talked for some more time. Then Asad left for his house.

Precap: # Asad n Zoya have completed their MBA. They started opening their own online shopping business dat became successful in few months.

#Asad n Zoya gets married 1st in Muslim ceremony n then in Hindu ceremony.

#Zoya waits for Asad who told her outside d house dat he will be back in some time. He arrives in some time while smoking. He slaps her wen she throws his cigarette in d dustbin.


A/N: I changed my mind regarding when to show the horrible twist. Earlier I said that I will show it after 9-10 parts but now I decided to start that twist from the next part itself.


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Edited by angel_juhi04 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey Juhi... 😊
Thanx for the PM... 😛
Well a AsYa'licious update with No trace of Anas...😆 Wonderful update.. 👏
Liked your Banner⭐️ also..& Thank you for even explaining the banner also..It the first time for me where I have even read an CS of The Banner also.. 👏
Continue soonish.. 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
I got your two stories mixed up LOL!

I thought Dosti and Pyar was the the story that had the bad Asad🤣

Then i read this from the begging and got that this is the story i was waiting for hehe

But Dosti and Pyar is goood tooo!

Please update sooon!😊





Edited by -hotsauce- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update
Banner was wonderful
Asya confessed their love in library that was nice. They got engaged & decided to marry 2 yrs after finishing their MBA. Waiting for next update soon. Thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
superb part
finally asya are together
excited for next part
thanx for pm
plz pm me for next part
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Posted: 10 years ago
hi juhi,
thnks 4 PM.
nice updt,asya's lv,date,engagemnt all good.
surely tht is anas who slap zoya..
let c is zoya understnd or not...
now listen juhi,my 2nd yr xms r cming ths june also some compitative xms in may,so now i jst visit ths 4um smtimes,so i cnt cmnt everytime bt surely hit likes if i read.do pms pls.hope u dnt mind...

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